After Seeing the Cartoon Barrage, I Tore up the Cannon Fodder Script with My Hands

I'm going to die if I can't find a meal replacement (whining) - Super beautiful barrage. It's really cool for ordinary people to disguise the barrage as superpowers and effectively use the information gap. The creation of the protagonist team is also super good. Everyone's abilities are very interesting, and they also use various evil cultivators' fighting methods. I like the feeling that you are so stubborn and have no lower limit the most [making faces] Personally, I especially like to read barrages/forums. The ability of the protagonist of this book is closely related to barrages. I really enjoyed reading it. Author, you are really good at writing barrages. Please write more——[Shy]

It looks good. The character design of the protagonist is also well handled. The battle of wits in the front is also good. I don't understand what the comment section said about the supporting character taking away the aura of the protagonist [face covering]. The supporting character is described in two or three lines, and then the protagonist directs a plane. Is this fun? It's better to play behind the scenes (the kind where a protagonist pretends to be various people [facepalm]) and how to solve the conflict between her and the protagonist's concepts later without shaping her in the front [facepalm] To be honest, I didn't find any place where the protagonist is belittled to promote the supporting role, and the latest update also shows that they need a failure to become a real team. Isn't this the growth of a group protagonist?

I have read more than 400 chapters in full, and I have read the four chapters in full. I am a long-time fan of the book since Chapter 50. The content contains subjective evaluations. Please treat this post rationally and use it as a lightning protection and recommendation. 1. Judging from the complete book, the pace of the book is a bit slow. There are already one million words of content, but the growth of the protagonist group is still a little thin. (Note: I have read all the author's description of the growth of the protagonist group in Chapter 0) It's not that it's not good to describe the protagonist group in great detail, but in comparison, the amount of text is not directly proportional to the growth, which makes the shortcoming of slow pace even more exaggerated. 2. It is indeed a group portrait. Everyone has their own advantages and disadvantages. It is not a simple label character. However, the main focus is still on Di Zelan and the protagonist. A large amount of space is used to describe the running-in and conflict between Di Zelan and the protagonist, which makes the group portrait focus on a pair of relationships with outstanding characteristics. It fails to describe the changes in the emotional relationships between several other colleges and even several other people in the team, which is worse. 3. From a narrative point of view, the events in this chapter are really close together. Almost before this event is completely over, it begins to lead to the occurrence of the next event. Combined with the previous 1, the book as a whole seems to be a bit confusing and requires serious thinking. - [Supplement] The gender element is not obvious (de-gendered), that is, there is no specific description of gender in this article. For example, women are inferior to men, which is objective and fair. Gender is just a role setting and has nothing to do with the development of things, etc. - Okay, so now that we are here, I want to start asking the author the following questions: a. The emotional connection between the protagonist and Di Zelan occupies a large amount of space in this article, which weakens the conflict between Di Zelan and the original protagonist (Han Fengyao). There is very little (or even almost no) ink to describe this in the article, but it is obvious that the personality of the original protagonist and Di Zelan cannot conflict with each other. I would like to ask the author what he thinks about this (continued in 2). B. Regarding the combat power, there is still no obvious breakthrough in the protagonists' combat power after more than 400 chapters. As a result, the readers, who can only watch the information given by the author, cannot understand the complete combat power of the protagonist group. Can the author spend more time describing this point? (To be added...) You are welcome to discuss with me, because I don't have the habit of re-reading, so I have forgotten the initial content, so I won't make any comments. If you criticize, you are right. I hope you can use rational and objective evaluation to refute my point of view. Sorry for the error in my expression. As for question a, my original intention is to express that the author did not describe too much about the changes in the relationship between several people in the team (there are also other colleges, which does not only include the relationship between Han and Emperor) orz

Oh my god, it made me laugh to death. The settings were added in the early stage, and there is a sense of déjà vu in the back. Oh my god, my god, the protagonist's brain is very good. Everyone has an exclusive position in the protagonist group, and there are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stage. The identity of the protagonist is a bit mysterious. If you look closely, you will feel like you are reading a comic.

It's so delicious. I rarely write book reviews. Really, I really can't find such a perfect meal replacement. I think the rating can be a little higher. This group of people really made me feel hot all over. Everyone is a good boy. I agree with what the author said. There will definitely be quarrels in a friendship. When I read those books, they basically just go along with it all the way without much quarrels. On the contrary, there is not much feeling of friendship. If you understand step by step like this, that is the real friendship! Our father-son team must have a good time, it's so cute! ! 😆Xiaojiu is so handsome! Beibei is so cute, just like a ball of dessert! The eldest lady is not a tsundere in the traditional sense. She has her own opinions and calm thinking. I have basically never encountered such a character! 999 Is the same, it's so cute😋, I like to read so many articles like Tomato without CP image, the author will always support you, okay! ! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts] ? If you look at the tags, it's just that the group portrait is slow to gain popularity, and you've just read dozens of chapters and made random comments. . Some people gave it one star and asked what it meant to mark it. If you don't like it, just quit. Not everyone has to write [what] around your XP.

Personal advice, because I can't stand some of the words in the comment area, so it's as written First of all, the most important point is that this book is a real group portrait that requires a high-quality outline and a biography of the characters. So I like this book very much. He controls the rhythm well. And each character is well-written and promotes the plot. Yes, what I like is the author's writing style. It's not about how good the literary talent is or how beautiful the words are, but that the author is very good at writing the characters, and then let the characters move by themselves, and then refine the characters through barrages. Each character has its own logic of action and style of doing things, rather than facial makeup. If you like group portraits or like diverse characters, I recommend taking a look. The work is not rotated for the protagonist, but the feeling of a small world. Why are the comment area full of weird people? It's fun to watch, but I saw a short paragraph that I didn't understand. In this inconsistent debate, see for yourself whether what you said conflicts with the previous one. In addition, after reaching more than 1.4 Million words, I gradually watched it. It's still the same as what I said before. The rhythm, arc, character, and concept are all on point. It's still so immersive. The most touching thing was to see the collision between 999 and Sister Lan's ideas about the "world" before coming to school, and then the death of the school girl who "had a similar fate" Another time line Mu Yang joins the restart Sister Yuan Yuanlan's different reactions after learning that her relatives were undercover agents I don't think it's like what those in the comment section said. This is a story with no growth and insufficiently obvious characters.

So far I actually like it, and there's nothing too bad about it, but as some readers have said, it's not satisfying enough. The main author's setting of the protagonist has no superpowers. Apart from being a good brain, he has no ability to protect himself. In a setting like this, fighting still relies on superpowers. Whether it's killing animals or fighting against people, you just don't have enough firepower. Original sin, your teammates have to be distracted to protect you during the battle. I personally think that relying on fighting and weapons is not enough and can only be used as an auxiliary. It is not that the brain power is not powerful and it is not important. It is just that it is definitely not more satisfying than the force value. Readers will understand it when reading the book. Of course, I hope that the protagonist is as powerful as possible, regardless of brain power or force. But having said that, the author's writing is really good. Except for the setting issues just mentioned, everything else is very good. The plot is also very interesting, the characters are more fleshed-out, and the group portraits are well written.

The writing is okay, the early plot is a bit slow, and the characters are well developed. I like Zelan Yanyu Jiuxiao Beibei Muyang Fengyao Yin Ling Yuanyuan Huahua Xiao Qiao Yuyu... (Are you on the registration list?) Everyone is slowly getting better, and Jiuxiao doesn't treat herself as an outsider like she did at the beginning. You must all live well. Some people don't like to see group portraits, please quit and find cool articles about the leading male lead and heartthrob. Thank you.

I've only read Chapter 40, and there's nothing interesting except for the eldest lady Di who thinks very highly of herself, is superior and has no emotional intelligence. But the author loves it so much. Judging from their abilities, the rest of the protagonist group either only have names or are mentioned in one stroke. She first "covered hundreds of meters∽" and then "analyzed it completely~". The barrage the male protagonist saw praised others one by one, but praised her directly to dominate the screen. The male protagonist also keeps trying to make up for her. I love her so much, why not give her a separate movie😊 Be quick, give me more

The story about the male protagonist of the team campus is quite interesting. The male protagonist has no miracles and uses barrage to collect information and achieve his "prediction". Entering the protagonist group as a supporting role without miracles is a major flaw in itself. For a person with miracles, he is very fragile. He can choose and play an important role in the team, except the commander. Indeed, he has also moved towards the direction of command at present, which is very good. From entering the simulation warehouse and seeing other people's miracles, the intangible changes to the tangible, we can already see the direction of future ability improvement. If you can clearly see the range and movement of other people's miracles in reality in the future, coupled with the superb command ability, it will basically be the standard for male protagonists.

Although it is new, it is really beautiful and can be kept. It has a very anime feel to it, the protagonist group also has the flavor of a hot-blooded manga boy, and the characters are also very comfortable. Well, everyone, we are saved. The most interesting thing is that the protagonist is an ordinary person but pretends to have the "Eye of God" power, which reflects the protagonist's intelligence and wit. He could only see the animation barrage, but he needed to quickly extract information from it and process it. Some people say that "God's Eye" can be equivalent to "Third Perspective", which is even more handsome. It's worth watching!

It's very interesting, but Miss Imperial's character is a bit annoying in the early stage (but in the world view of the original manga, it's normal for her to have this kind of personality). It's bearable, but it gets better later on. If you want to get into the trap, think about this for yourself, I highly recommend this book ◔.̮◔✧

So pretty! The pace is slow, the protagonist is middle-class and cute (?), There are still a lot of thoughts in my heart, firm jpg (/ω＼) And some people may feel uncomfortable reading it, so you can skip to read it. Then, the pace here is slower, but maybe we have reached the main text now? Should? Anyway, the academy competition is over! Great? (The knife is coming! Hahaha!) Oh, by the way, please don't talk about things other than this book in this book, such as [Hourai Temple Nine Sky]... The protagonist is an original character, and, well, the author doesn't like ky (is that what ky means?) (/ω＼)Haha, I shouldn't be scolded, right? (QAQ)

Ahhh... I really love characters with high IQs like Xiao Lu! The career-oriented, hard-working baby really likes it! The plot rhythm seems very comfortable in all aspects, and the character creation is also very bright! [Blowing kiss] In addition, Xiao Xiaosheng: Every time I see Yuan Yuan calling Jiuxiao "Brother Jiu", I feel so good inexplicably. Who knows [shy]... Yuan Yuan is so big, but his personality is very similar to that of a silly brother. The contrast is so cute! Are you really Yuanyuan and not Yuanyuan, baby? 🥺

It's a good book. The narrative rhythm is very good, and it's not a cookie-cutter book. It's pretty good among Tomatoes. I like it quite a lot. I urge you to update it (). If the superpower is the desire to survive, is it possible for the protagonist to awaken the real superpower at a critical moment? Just treat it as an evolution. Doesn't it mean that Miracle has no attack power and can't enter? () Awaken an attack power, God's Eye and God's Hand () Well, I'll just think about it. If not, it's good. The only one that has no attack power but adds more to Miracle is also good. [Love] I like it very much and will pursue it.

Good looking If the male protagonist has to have a special power, it would be his brain. I like people who can see the barrage but are not manipulated by the information and will actively analyze it themselves. The kind of person who blindly believes in the barrage is so scary. The current development is that the Sansha people are gradually becoming the protagonist group. Too little you are so pretty

I feel like this kind of comic has become very popular recently. The author has a good setting and writing style, and it is very smooth to read. The forum is a cheat, but the cheat is also very good. The protagonist needs to find useful information from a bunch of comments. It takes a lot of energy to think about how much useless information is in front of you. I just feel that the protagonist's mental strength is worthy of S+. Although he is Dihua, the protagonist is also very powerful, not inexplicable, very smart, and was a student at a top school before he got the barrage. Currently holding a command position in the team, he is relatively squishy and cannon fodder's counterattack. The whole story has a growth flow, the characters are not flat, each has its own characteristics, and the interactions are also very funny. The author said that the protagonist does not have any miracles of his own, it is just a barrage. I guess I have brainstormed the information in the rest of the story. I am really looking forward to the next development [Blow kiss]

Very nice group portrait article, Contestant No. 1: By chance, I saw the barrage. The male protagonist Jiu Ge (who is also the commander of the team) is extremely mentally strong, thoughtful, and extremely smart. Contestant No. 2: Feng Feng is a talkative person at heart because he is taciturn in his words. Contestant No. 3: Sister Lan, who has the temper of a young lady but always protects others silently. Contestant No. 4: Chatty and cute Xiao Qin, There is also Contestant No. 5: Yuan Yuan, who is cute and chatty, can adjust the atmosphere, and is very considerate. He is 1.8 Meters tall. This is the configuration of the protagonist group. They are all people with very distinctive personalities, and far more than just them, there are many other characters, such as the aloof Teacher Ji, the straight-tempered Teacher Xiao, etc... This group portrait article is very interesting and beautiful (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

Super nice book. 691 Is a good baby, even if you don't eat coriander, it's a good baby. Two pieces are also good babies... (Omitting a lot of names here) In short, everyone is a good baby. The protagonist team directly cultivated the Tao Yin without borders. There are many laughs. After reading the book, the corner of my mouth has not dropped. I want to say something, my great 691, please use my brain a little bit (aria) so that I can get full marks in the exam. The author's name is super great There is also a cute contrast between the characters. It is so cute that I can even forgive everything about the time. Except for the school author, the writing level is already very high so far, but there are still some places where the logic is not very logical. I hope this work will get better and better in the future. Anyway, it makes me confused. Little deer, little deer, you are a very good pretender.

The male protagonist is a person who is rational but not lacking in gentleness. There is a strong sense of humanity in the group portrait. No one is perfect and they all have a transitional period. The author has written about this period, and the writing is very good! [Blowing a kiss] I basically glanced at the barrage in this book. To be honest, the last novel I read also had barrage, but I basically skipped it. The barrage here all serves the plot and provides information. The plot is very interesting, not too long, and the foreshadowing is also very good, and it also fills in the pits. There is no ambiguity in this book at all. Whether it is a man or a woman, it is very comfortable ~ everyone has an equal emotional relationship'- ̗̀ ෆ( ˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-

The author is very interesting and good at writing. If you like to see group portraits, you must not miss it. Everyone has their own personality, and it's rare to find a novel that isn't original and that everyone is slowly getting used to. (Many of the protagonists have a tacit understanding and are cheating) It is not very consistent with Tomato's refreshing tone. For example, the protagonist is not just smooth sailing and has a personality that can be easily replaced (I say this because when I read the novel, I often wonder if he is not the protagonist, if there is an ordinary person in the book who can also do such a thing, I don't think Jiuxiao can be replaced by me). But there are also many cool points. I really look forward to one day being adapted into a passionate anime!

It's tied, and the current feeling is – a great group portrait! Before reading the book reviews, some people said that a large part of the latter part was used to describe Emperor Zelan. I was a little worried at the time because I am the protagonist. But when I looked at it later, I found it wasn't. The main character wasn't taken away from his role at all, and the parts about Zeeland were just some issues that needed to be addressed. Only then described. Later, it was mentioned that a group of people were called Meibao Meibao. I thought it was the same as the short play novel [Our sister is so cute] [My sister is so smart for doing this] and I thought it was in this form. As a result, the barrage was just a joke. It's just an abstraction of a shepherd, and there is no baby girl in each mouth. Some people say that hundreds of chapters were written just for a four-school league. I have to mention that there are quite a lot of chapters. But another aspect is that the number of words in each chapter of the author is quite short, at least it cannot be said to be long. And although there is indeed a lot of writing and ink used in this aspect, I found it very enjoyable. It's not like a running account filled with water. Watching him is just like watching an episode of anime, and it's not boring (although it may be a bit more boring than when you encounter danger during the later investigation), but isn't this the charm of group portraits? Everyone has their own role. Just because the roles are not all the protagonists, don't think it's just water injection.

This book really... Touched my heart so much! The following are the advantages of this article (start to praise) 1. The whole book started to fly to the top after the author stopped writing for a period of time in the Four Schools League. The plot is interesting, and the tense and suspenseful twists and turns are very powerful. 2. The natural bonus of the group portrait advantage. The team battle is strong and the three-dimensional characters create a lot of excavable emotional value (such as CP and so on). It has a natural popularity advantage. 3. Judging from the influence of the protagonist on the entire plot, this is a very advanced and refreshing article. The cool point (turning the tide at a critical moment) is not only outstanding, but it also fleshes out the characters, is full of emotional changes, and helps complete the character design. All in all, I personally think that this article (especially the second half) has the strength to chase the top list. Unfortunately, the number of words is currently less updated. If the plot construction performance is ensured, there will be no problem. Who is not fascinated by 697?

It's almost tied. I almost missed this treasure because of a few bad reviews. I just felt it was okay when I read the first few dozen chapters, but it became more and more exciting as it went on. There is no need to say the characterization. Everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses. The author's grasp of emotional description is very good and very delicate. For example, the breaking point of conflicts is more three-dimensional than some anime or comics I have read. It feels like each character is really vividly displayed before my eyes. It is relatively slow to develop, and I feel that it should be written in a long form. It is really a passionate coming-of-age comic (if you like to read purely refreshing articles, I suggest you not read it, otherwise everyone will be unhappy). Of course, it is more refreshing (99 is the most handsome~, he is like a chess player commander) 999's biggest strength is definitely his brain, which becomes more evident as he goes on. In the early stage, he relies more on barrage plus brain, but in the later stage, he relies on the most powerful brain and barrage assistance. This is my first long book review, and it's enough to tell that I really enjoyed it. Finally, Brother Ninth is so handsome, 691 is the best, update soon [laughs] (Third editor) I've put the difference between a female channel with a single male protagonist and no CP and a male channel with a single male protagonist and no CP in the comment area. If you don't understand, you can take a look. This difference is just the majority. Of course, there are also differences, although I feel they are pretty much the same based on what I watched. The comments I reply below are a bit too many and messy because I want to be tactful. Just look at the pictures. (Editor) I saw a few negative reviews, all of which were very short in reading time. It has already reached almost 300 chapters (five hours is still very short), and some people said it was a short article (the reading time is only half an hour). This means that there are not many chapters at all, dozens of chapters at most. The first few dozen chapters are basically foreshadowing. The book is relatively slow, and the longer it goes, the better it gets. I really feel like I am watching anime and have fun. The feeling of the scene should be joyful and serious. If you like this type of genre, just watch it. If you don't like it, just quit consciously [blowing kiss] (Oh, I shouldn't have read through those comments to find out the dissatisfaction. Moreover, the writing style of this article is more delicate, and it feels more like a female channel. Of course, it is a proper cb. Some people may not be used to it. Everyone has their own preferences.) (You can read the second part below) One more thing, at least from the author's words at the end of each chapter, it can be seen that Da Da really treats the children he writes with great care, which at least touches me at certain moments, such as... "Thank you for surviving" [Sending Hearts] (Second editor) The female-oriented manga I'm talking about is that this one pays more attention to emotions and is not written in the traditional male style (mainly because there are really few shounen mangas in this one, just like Naruto, One Piece and Demon Slayer. The ratio of men and women who read shounen manga is actually about the same, and shonen refers to boys and girls, not a certain gender) (Fourth editor) I am currently in a state of hoarding articles about this book, and I feel like I am following it. I have never written such a long review of a book, and revised it repeatedly [Sending my heart to you] (Volume 5) I've finished stocking up on the city chapter, let's start watching [Blow Kiss] "His self-worth doesn't disappear just because he doesn't have powers. He's proud of his brain." Ninth brother is still as handsome as ever [shy] (Part 6) Why did you finish reading it in such a short time [Crying]

It's very interesting, but many people seem to dislike the supporting actress, but I don't hate it. Do you have to follow the lead in everything? ? Moreover, she was not beaten so severely. In my opinion, it was a dramatic and conflicting opening. It showed a character's personality very intuitively. It is very normal for her to react like this in the environment in which she grew up. Does it have to be that the protagonist is invincible and takes off? If you only like mindless and cool stories, you can leave it out. And the protagonist is not very cowardly and has to swallow his anger (spoilers show that there is a serious slap in the face of the female supporting character in the later stage) 🙃 Author, don't let these affect your mood. Come on. I like this book very much, and it is one of the rare protagonists who need to get along and have conflicts. Everyone has shortcomings and is not perfect. After reading it for so long, the center of the later storyline is all the protagonists. It's cool online. Personally, I think you have to see it with your own eyes before commenting [Thinking]

It's great, author, you must write it down! ! ! Go! ! ! Ah! ! ! If you like group portraits, don't miss it! The barrage in this article is the protagonist's golden finger, which is quite acceptable and much more enjoyable than the ordinary mindless barrage. Very nice! It was tied directly within one day! Just like the introduction says! The author personally confirms that there is no special ability (don't worry if you are bold!!!). Those who like hot blood, group portraits, middle two, skills, and dihua can join! The protagonist group includes a talkative little girl with yin and yang hair, who is cold on the outside but hot on the inside but is sultry and blue-haired, a 1.8 Meter cute boy with a handsome face, and an arrogant red-haired lady!

A very interesting group portrait article, the characters in it are very distinct, the author's writing style is very good, and it reads smoothly. , The protagonist's brain is very good, and should be strengthened later. Although the words of the heroine feel very arrogant, but combined with the character setting, I think it is quite reasonable. Her life experience does have the capital of arrogance. She is a person who wants to be the best in everything and has a strong and competitive character. Later, she also realized her own shortcomings and was willing to follow the protagonist's command. You can see her growth. The battle description feels well written in detail, and her IQ during the battle is online. [Laughing] It's just an update, I don't dare to watch it [Admiration] Uh, not enough at all [face covering]

It's worth reading. The author is very attentive in depicting the environment, psychology, and action. It really feels like reading a comic (anime). But because of this, some of the later paragraphs are too detailed (in a derogatory sense), and the pace is slower than in the early stages, making the story progress very slowly. In fact, the author has a lot of clever ideas and they are very cute. Does anyone understand? In short, if you prefer immersive and atmospheric writing, you will really like this book. However, if you are looking for a fast-paced plot (or don't like the author's way of writing questions), it may feel a little lengthy. Then it will start skipping chapters and then unconsciously jump to the update page and see the yellow button ( Overall, I think it is a very sincere and solidly written work. It's just painful to wait for updates. The author's way of writing makes this pain even more painful (

It's a super delicious academic novel. It's a lot fresher than what I've seen before. There's not so much fighting and killing, there's not so much deep resentment and debt, it's just a story about a few energetic young people full of vigor. The writing is smooth, plain yet flavorful, the daily life is rich but not boring, the plot is ups and downs but not too compact, and it has many exciting points but does not indulge in vulgarity. The characters are real, complex, and multi-faceted, and several different friends appear on the page. Rich imagination, wonderful world view, classic but not routine. Based on the above points, it can be said that it is a rare good book.

It is a very nice book, but overall it is relatively slow to read. It is a growth story with a very good writing style, delicate emotional descriptions, and good character creation. Zelan is a tsundere young lady, who is not very lovable at first, even disgusting, but will slowly change later; Yuan Yuan is the kind of pleasing type, and will grow up and become independent in the future; Mu Yang is lively and talkative, funny and responsible; Feng Yao A Meng , the calm and rational character is gradually distorted, and the style of painting deviates; Jiujiu is the protagonist, very smart and rational (a bit crazy with attributes), and has no special powers. He joins the protagonist group with barrage information and fights side by side with the protagonist. He relies on his own reasoning and does not rely entirely on barrage. Sometimes, Jiujiu guesses the information that cannot be provided by barrage. I love this kind of high-IQ protagonist. Not only are the protagonists with high IQs but also the supporting characters with high IQs such as Gu Yanyu and Xie Zaihua. Others will not be held back, and those who are not smart have normal IQs. I feel that the most interesting plot is the four-school league part, where everyone uses their abilities to shine, and the stars shine at the moment, which is really cool. Although many people think it is too long, I think it is quite good. It is very detailed and no details are missed. Young people are not happy when they see the spring breeze, they are not annoyed when they see the summer cicadas, they are not sad when they see the autumn wind, and they do not sigh when they see the winter snow. They are full of wealth and are too lazy to notice. They dare to face injustice just because they are young people. Danmaku are people who read comics, so they may not be able to see the details or provide information. This is more in line with reality. After all, novels are based on reality. Sometimes the perspective of comics will not always follow one person, but will change the perspective or use the methods mentioned in the article to insert memories without showing them all. However, some people always want to be able to see the barrage and get the information directly. This is very cool, but it is too brainless, and I still prefer the current style of writing. This feeling of ordinary people saving the world together with their friends through their own efforts is very passionate, although it is a bit mediocre.