[Mortal Cultivation + Romance + Genius-Level Spiritual Root + A Sheltered, Beloved Darling]
“Y you, this is the bundle you had with you when we rescued you in the mountains. Since you’re going to the cultivation world to learn, you might as well look for your birth parents while you’re there.”
At the foot of the mountains near Luo Village in Danxia City, on the border between the mortal realm’s Yun Yue Kingdom and the cultivation world, a sect recruitment spiritual-root test brought Xu Yiyou back to the cultivation world. She had lost her memory after falling into the mortal realm during a conflict between demonic cultivators and the cultivation world.
“Whoever harmed my family and made me grow up separated from my parents, I will never let them get away with it.” By a twist of fate, she joined the Yunxiao Sect and became the youngest and only female disciple of its sect master, Venerable Yu Xiao.
Her cool and aloof senior brother, Xiao Yanting, a mid-stage Nascent Soul cultivator over two hundred years old: “Our junior sister is so cute and beautiful.”
Her dashing second senior brother, Shangguan Chen, an early-stage Nascent Soul cultivator who was two hundred years old and the young master of the Artifact Refining Sect: “Our main peak will finally have a woman among all these men. We finally have a female cultivator. This is wonderful.”
The head of the Xu family, a renowned clan in Dayong City known for pills and talismans: “This exceptionally talented direct female disciple of the Yunxiao Sect’s master is actually the daughter my second son left behind before he passed away. Yiyou, you’ve suffered. From now on, your grandfather and your uncle’s family will make sure you never go missing again.”
Xu Yiyou’s eldest paternal cousin, Xu Jingxuan, a mid-stage Foundation Establishment cultivator, a third-grade top-tier fire-attribute artifact refiner: “My little sister is finally back, and she’s a cultivation genius, too. That’s wonderful! I’ll have to prepare plenty of good spirit artifacts for her from now on.”
It's okay, the writing sounds smooth, the plot is more active, and it won't be boring. As the little girl grows up, or maybe because she is older, she likes these sweet and not-too-joking articles, which make her feel comfortable listening to them and reading them. It might be better if some other people's love stories are added in the sequel. Of course, I hope there will be a happy outcome in the end. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you!
It's okay, but the ending is too rushed and it's over?
It's great, but the chapters are too small and the plot jumps too fast. Please follow up.
It's okay, the writing sounds smooth, the plot is more active, and it won't be boring. As the little girl grows up, or maybe because she is older, she likes these sweet and not-too-joking articles, which make her feel comfortable listening to them and reading them. It might be better if some other people's love stories are added in the sequel. Of course, I hope there will be a happy outcome in the end. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you!
It's okay, but the ending is too rushed and it's over?
It's great, but the chapters are too small and the plot jumps too fast. Please follow up.