Sinner****

Looking at it now, it is a good fanfic from various perspectives, and the characterization of the characters, the description of the scenery, and the smooth transitions all show that the author is very literary and literary. It is amazing and real. I will definitely support it if I have time. I hope the author can keep writing.

It can be said to be unique among Genshin fandoms. It has a different style. It is quite interesting to read slowly, but some descriptions are too complicated [learned] Finally, the author, please update quickly [punch out] [punch out]

The portrayal is very good, the picture is carefully grasped, and the foreshadowing is recycled. I hope it can be written into a long novel instead of split into two books. Otherwise, the description of such a scene in a short story is like using a cannon to swat mosquitoes.

The writing is among the best in fan fiction, and the knife is always there, especially if you have a better understanding of the characters in the original plot. @ Just like his personal introduction, the full text of the knives is that some are shallow, some are deep, some pierce your abdomen and then turn twice, and some are just like the side of the blade sweeping the cheek, and you don't notice it.

Very well written fanfic. The emotional foreshadowing is so strong that it doesn't feel like a tomato anymore, and the description of Yura also feels like the author has studied the character very deeply. Sure enough, reading fan fiction written by the cook is the most comfortable [Adoration]

Hee hee, give my book five stars [laughing]

It's really well written (≧∇≦*)

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

This writing style is very comfortable and refreshing. In my heart, you are qualified to sit at the same table as Bai Luo, come on! We look forward to you bringing us more exciting stories

It's good-looking, very good-looking. This is a novel that you can read without skipping chapters. The author's writing style is also very good and very good.

It's very beautiful. Also, you can listen to "Eu Sem Você" when you see Clolinde and Leosley appear. I feel that the song suits them very well.

The writing feels quite comfortable

It is rare to write such details in the fast-food culture, but I guess it is still for the sake of love [Code]

The foreshadowing, description, emotional expression, and character traits are all very good. Even the writing style can be considered top-notch. No one is watching, and no one knows what's going on.

I like the plot points very much,

Hurry up, my author [crying]

The preparation and energy consumption required to write such an article is terrible. I feel the author's thoughts. Come on, please come on [Love]

Very good, but I always feel like something is missing

One of the few novels written about Youla, the author is strong in writing, and there is no need to say more about how great he is [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It doesn't feel like a Tomato novel [thoughts]

The author's writing style is really good, I recommend reading it

Very well written. The novel does seem to have the characteristics of Fontaine, but in order to highlight the expressive power of drama, the writing style is too exaggerated and elaborated.

The characters are vividly drawn and the plot is also very good. Come on!

The writing is very good! ! So pretty! Still want to see! ! !

It looks good. It's one of the best among Genshin Impact fans so far.