The Sickly Male Protagonist Is Really Sick, but the Female Protagonist Refuses to Let Me Come.

After watching it for a long time, I like the writing, the characters and the characters, but there is always a feeling of dissatisfaction. Today I suddenly figured out what that feeling of dissatisfaction is. It is not sweet enough. The story often ends in two chapters, which is too short. I feel that there is nothing I want to see in the following content. I hope that the plot after the two together can be written more without disturbing the rhythm of the previous development. Otherwise, it will be a bit uncomfortable to be unsatisfied [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] It's rare that I come across novels that I can read, so I'm just giving my opinion. I hope you'll give it some thought [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's really good to watch. I recommend it to everyone. The male and female protagonists have very upright views and are very smart. There is no bloody plot between the two. There is actually a word like "marriage-style" in it to describe the heroine's outfit. With so many adjectives, this is the one used by the hero to describe the heroine.

Super, super, super good-looking, no meal replacements in the whole network [I almost cried] The plot is smooth, and the characters are also very interesting. As a picky reader like me, I must follow it every day. I really won't lose money if I invest in it [Blow a kiss]

It's really good to watch. You can get what you want to see at every point. The storyline has ups and downs. The male protagonist is fighting and fighting. Although he is jealous, he is also measured. I love it so much. It's really good to watch. The disadvantage is that there are too few. After all, it is so beautiful [shy][shy]

This is one of the books that I am currently following. There are very few book reviews, but the articles are absolutely wonderful! The writing style is very delicate, and the story is novel and sweet. The heroine is somewhat immersive and sultry. She maintains her character but changes or amplifies some characteristics in reasonable places to make the character particularly full, upright and very charming! The male protagonist is a little paranoid about relationships due to a strange illness, or he is single-minded and affectionate. The most important thing is that it is not love at first sight, not the kind of love that makes you feel sweet immediately after just one glance (of course there are good-looking "love at first sight" types, but those with poor writing skills tend to lack plot and have no memory points, and it will become boring if you read too much). It is a story written in a big way, with reasonable and touching details one after another. It is a healing sweet story, without sadistic/grieving plots, and it is super attractive. It makes people want to look at it, and the corners of their mouths turn up unconsciously. Currently updated to the third small world (if I remember correctly, hahaha, but it doesn't matter), there is another aspect in the book that is handled very well, that is, the supporting characters are also very cute, and the male protagonist's previous life's dislike for the original female protagonist will be integrated into the plot to explain. It will not be explained clearly in one or two sentences, but you can find this when reading the article. This just proves the author's literary skills. Fascinating story, delicate writing style, profound suspicion that it is very different. Ah, hurry up and hand over the other vests, or... It's not impossible to hand over the archived manuscript, hehe.

I have been reading Tomato for four years, and this is the only one I have reviewed. The subject matter of this book is particularly novel, rich in content, and very beautiful. I will definitely read it in the future! Every little character is very cute and brilliant! The author is a bit too ahead of the curve o(^▽^)oI wasn't looking forward to it at first because the score was only 8.2, Which really broke my imagination. The score shouldn't be that low! Friends, believe me, I'm really good-looking 👀 It's like a tomato 🍅 and I'm going to wear the best products in this article! I hope you can update it frequently and keep writing novels. I really like it. It's spiritual food! @

The setting of the heroine in this novel is relatively novel, with a real succubus physique. (Of course, it's possible that I haven't seen much of them) They are always sweet to get along with. As for the male protagonist, I feel that he has a bit of a love mind. Although he can be domineering and strong at times, I was quite frustrated while watching it. And the heroine also enjoys it Then I am personally curious about whether the male protagonist is a plane male protagonist, or the so-called same person (sliced male protagonist) Ah, except for the first plane, the heroine seems to have a cat, but there is no trace of the cat when she is with the hero. I think this is a small bug. I just feel that the previous article is weird, because I can't follow it. After all, the male protagonist is close to the female protagonist at the beginning, and some of them enter and leave the story because of the kitten, but in the end there is no trace of the cat at all. This is not good. I personally think everything else is pretty good. I also like the character settings and everything else. Then there are relatively few story chapters. I hope to update more and look forward to the following stories.

It's good-looking, I like all modern quick-travel stories [Blowing Kisses]. The author's writing is good, and the characters are not particularly shocking. Most of the male protagonists are yandere, and the female protagonist is dedicated to conquering them. The female protagonist is the light of redemption for every male protagonist. I like this kind of plot [laughing and crying] It's just that the character created by the heroine is a bit single, and there are a lot of worlds with weak characters (of course the heroine pretends to be sexy [cool]), but too many of them are a bit immune [face covering] I haven't finished reading it yet. Currently, my favorite is the intellectual eldest lady and the gentle eldest sister of the lame world [sending my heart]

I first came here after watching the video account's tweets, but after actually watching it, I could only sigh, it's beautiful. I watch the middle part over and over again, ahhhhh succubus vs yandere, this setting is really fun. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

I really like the setting. The succubus is paired with a yandere. The only thing that stood out to me was that the original body the succubus wore was not written to be dead. Why, there was even an original life plan. The original owner was a doctor. He finally got a doctorate and became a doctor. Then he might have a bright life. Then he donated a kidney to the male protagonist, quit his job, and wanted to join the gang. Although I knew he was deliberately trying to conquer the male protagonist, it felt like he had been taken over. The girl I recently saw and haven't finished reading The World actually had a partner. They were even talking about it when the heroine passed by, and they were still talking when they started to walk through the guide. I didn't know how they broke up before I saw it, but it felt very shocking. It felt like the heroine took over someone else's body and deprived the original owner of his future. This is the highlight of this book in my opinion. Everything else is pretty good. I saw the one with the target. The target seemed to be a mama's boy. His mother caused the original owner to lose a good job. A rich mother-in-law went to the place where the other person worked to block people, and then arranged for his target to go on a blind date. He went, and probably smiled very happily. It was a central air conditioner, according to the investigation of the yandere male protagonist, but there was still no breakup. It was just a quarrel, in a different place.

Really pretty! The world becomes more beautiful as you go to the back! Some details may not be perfect, and some endings give people a feeling of unfinished business, but it really attracts me. I have been following you for a long time. It would be great if the author updated it three times a day (joking) [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flowing kiss]. The author's updates are super stable, and I will also write them in the text when necessary, but basically there is at least one chapter every day. Normally there will be two chapters tomorrow [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Nice! Today is also a day when I am bewitched by Miss Succubus. The emotional foreshadowing is well-structured. The yandere story I read before said that the female protagonist is good-looking and the male protagonist falls in love with her immediately. I feel that dry and dry. I will always follow the teacher. If you are good-looking, please read more about the teacher.

It's so good to watch, the female protagonist is a succubus and the male protagonist is madly in love, one feeds on love, and the other is madly in love, running in both directions, sweet and sweet ~ I have seen several worlds, and the male protagonists each have their own illnesses [laughing], as always, madly in love ᡣ𐭩, there will be no feeling of fatigue [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]! ! ! The original heroine has a lot of pen and ink! Like! In the world of the younger brother who has a heart disease, the male protagonist initially hated the female protagonist's family and intended to marry the female protagonist to a disgusting person. That's fine, and even hinted at that person. To me, this world is a bit shocking, and I really wanted it to be. The male protagonist had a heart attack and I really didn't feel sorry for him at all. The reconciliation between the two later was a bit disconnected. (In my personal opinion, this world is a bit confusing, but there are no other weird points for the time being)

It's still very good, it's really a modern story, and the tension between the male and female protagonists is also well written. The only thing I don't like is that the first few female protagonists have to pretend to be weak in order to win the favor of the male protagonist. There are a few more sisterly stories in the back, but every time I use the term "little girl" to call the female protagonist, I will get into trouble. Let's just say, does the shy or blushing one have to be a little girl?

Family members, Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people really nice The subject matter is very novel I've read so many books, it's really fascinating to me So much so that I saw two o'clock in the morning After forcing myself to sleep, I woke up at eight o'clock in the evening and continued to watch [Send Heart][Send Heart] I'm so addicted that I don't know what the world is. The family really likes the heroine Great personality, really good at it! Very good at cocks! Although the male protagonist is not the gentle one that everyone likes, he is a rat. Who allows our heroine to cure and suppress them? Hey, just take it directly I can handle even the sickly and charming heroine🫴 family members Really go and see everyone The subject matter is all good-looking, no lies If I lie, my best friend has been single for ten years! This is the family that I have read in so many books and can keep me up late at night Really!

Help, it's really beautiful. Is this really written by a new author? Ah, it's a blessing for people like me who have no literature. I love you so much, author, come on! ! ! Congratulations! Burst! Burst! Love you love you [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] The logic is really good, and the plot is also novel. There aren't many such good-looking articles, so I must blow my mind.

Madam, Madam, it's so beautiful. The writing style is amazing. I laughed while reading it. The writing style is delicate, not far-fetched and not ridiculous. The little characters also have their own personality traits. I felt so happy after reading this in one go.

I really feel that this succubus heroine is very smart, understands herself very well, and has her own cleverness. In addition to being bad at math~ and I'm not the kind of person who only relies on the system, I don't have any abilities. You will need this card, that card, and skills. Each world of the male protagonist is different, each has its own xp, and the writing style is also very interesting. I can't believe that this is the author's first book on Tomato. I feel like he is a veteran in a vest. And I haven't read a romance novel in 8 years, and this is the first one that doesn't fall into the trap of cliches and makes me want to read more. Recommend more books and increase the rating of this article!

It's very good-looking, and the male and female protagonists are very interesting. Don't understand why the rating is so low. Maybe some people only like perfect characters and don't allow the male and female protagonists to have character flaws. But the author's writing is quite beautiful. I hope he can continue writing without ending. Support [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post][Top Post] The author failed to withstand the pressure... Still few people watched it. It can be predicted that [crying][crying][crying][crying] the ending is very rushed. I hope I can do better next time [send heartfelt]

The book is good, but I don't want to think of some fast-travel novels. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist for no reason, and it falls in love at first sight every time. This book has a reason why the male protagonist likes the female protagonist, and the heroine's character is also very appealing to me. It's a good book! Reward!

Not bad, good, good-looking, except for the women's clothing and the dual personality (the female protagonist's presence is too low, the two stories are like a one-man show of the male protagonist, there is less interaction than other stories, there is no sense of tension, and the plot is a bit aggrieved). I like the other stories very much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss], the author, please give it a try

It's super good-looking, with many small worlds. Although each one ends unexpectedly, it's still good-looking. The author's description of the heroine is very delicate, and the short stories of the male and female protagonists are also super good-looking. Hahaha, thank you to the author for your hard work! The interaction between the system and the heroine is also very funny. In addition, there are many interesting places. It makes me roll with laughter every time. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [The magic work of bird food] [The magic work of bird food] [The magic work of bird food] [The magic work of bird food]

The writing is quite interesting and the pace is good, but in my opinion, the world of anorexia contains a lot of irrelevant things. I originally wanted to read sweet stories, but the male protagonist didn't appear a few times [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's really good to watch, the pace is fast, the plot is very good, I like Shen Xu, he is a very three-dimensional character portrayed in the second plane. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist falls in love at first sight and will last for a long time. It is recommended for those who like fast pace to watch it.

The setting is very novel. The subject matter can also be said to be very clear, but the original heroine of each story is designed to be very white-eyed, purely for the purpose of being a control group. People who like it will enjoy watching it, but people who hate it, like me, will be very tired and stupid and can't stand it. If you stick to the lame school girl, you really can't stand it 🤦🏻‍♀️

I think I read this book last year when it was being serialized. What left a deep impression on me was the hearing-impaired boss and the lame brother. These two male protagonists from a small world have a lot of ice-cold feet. Highly recommended! ! And the aloof male god likes to wear women's clothes. This has a bit of a fake narcissus feel. If you mind, please proceed with caution. Overall, the writing is really good and the characters are well created. Highly recommended.

Very nice looking. . I really like the setting that the heroine is a succubus, it's very touching. . . It was fun to watch, but it's a pity that it's not finished yet. Although there were a few settings at the beginning where the male protagonist was interested in the heroine for no reason because of her appearance after the original heroine was gone, it was not as bad as other works, and the teacher optimized it later. No male protagonist likes the heroine as soon as he sees it. Teacher, teacher, I want to see a police undercover setting, please feed me. .

I have read a lot of books of this type, and I only like this one. I abandon many books halfway through because they are too stereotyped, but this book is different. I like it very much whether it is the plot, character setting, emotional portrayal, etc. I think it is better than many of the same type. Su Wan has a different identity and personality in each world, but her pure eyes are the commonality in all worlds. I think it is very good, showing different personalities while retaining her true colors. I think the most novel one is the one about the gang boss. I really like this setting. There is also the one about Little Taiyang and his younger brother's roommate, which left a deep impression on me. I also like the other ones, but I kind of forgot about them all the time. At the end, the girl who cheated online left her final memories. Although the ending felt a bit hasty and a bit surprising, after watching so much, I didn't care much anymore. It was expected, but I'm still a little sad that I can't see more of the small world. The body is your capital, you still need to pay attention to rest. Looking forward to the new book Goodbye, Su Wan

It's a very delicious article. The heroine is a super heartthrob, her methods are not vulgar, it's very interesting to read, the setting is not cliche, the writing is passable without being laggy, and it's very satisfying. I gave it four stars because there are a lot of swear words, there are male rivals and female rivals, and sometimes I feel that some of the settings were a bit miserable for the original owner or female lead. It would be better if there were more positive female characters [shy] Recommended for those who like beautiful and heartthrob + strategies + love at first sight + paranoid male protagonists!