Another World************

I found that the authors of many good books I have read recently are very active in the comment area. It is very comfortable to talk to them. At least they have checked the information. Unlike the ancient and refreshing articles I usually read, they are not irrational.

It looks good, but I don't know if there will be scenes with the female protagonist in the future. If so, I hope it will be some comrades-in-arms kind of thing. Just don't ruin the tone of the whole story just for the sake of emotional scenes.

It's so beautiful. The author's thinking is logical and logical.

Overall very good. It is recommended that the author does not complete the application yet, and can continue to update when the time comes. Why don't you stop it first [sending my heart]

By cooperating with the country and keeping the three views correct, development will be on the right track. The protagonist also has brains and is decisive in his actions. The disadvantage is that the technical aspects are written in too detail, giving it the feel of a science student. I hope there will be more changes in the lives of people in other worlds, the cooperation and hostility of various forces, and the cooperation and hostility of various races. More descriptions of civilians, warriors, and mages from other worlds being directly or indirectly affected, both good and bad! Come on!

The beginning is quite novel, let's take a look

Good book, with potential above 9 points

The author's views are very upright, the plot of the article is well-organized, and it is expected to become a fantasy epic.

Good looking If you are rich, you can help the world; if you are poor, you can only take care of yourself. Awesome👍Awesome,

Very good, IQ is online, the three views are correct, the rhythm is tight, a rare good book

Very good refreshing article

It's okay to read, it's not mindless writing

Very good attention to detail

It's a pity that the author's writing skills do not support it.

It looks pretty good, and I understand the author

Add a little more oil, let it settle, and you will succeed.

I found another good novel, but there are too few. Come on! ! !

It's too early to read, there are too few now, I like this subject, the writing is very good, keep up the good work

The subject matter is good, but the author's plot design skills need to be improved, and it's not to my liking at the moment! [Praise]