A Dazzling Showbiz Career

The writing is much better than 90% of the same type of writing. It is currently non-toxic 👑no cp❤️very enterprising✌️ There is no cliché: once you become famous, you will become popular, and once you have money💰, you will have a car🚗ticket🎫Talking about love and making ambiguous arrangements The warmth and trust between teammates is like a family member who can be trusted to support them. I understand why idols exist! What a team! 👍The members portrayed are more three-dimensional, with vivid personalities, and each one shines✨I don't mean to show off. The song list recommendations in the novel are also good, and the taste is good! It's very comfortable to read now, so I'll put it on my bookshelf first🉑

It's very beautiful, and the characters are three-dimensional. I like it very much, but why don't you consider reducing the number of words in a paragraph? It's always a long paragraph, and I don't have the patience to read it. I feel like I could write a dialogue with the characters, or a heart-warming description of the fans. I feel that there are too many conceptual narratives and God's perspective in the article, and there is no sense of star-chasing (self-feeling). Overall, it is quite in line with my appetite, hehe.

In the first few chapters, too many paragraphs were written to highlight the confusion of the protagonist after traveling through time. The author's writing style has a bit of a stream of consciousness, but I particularly like the author's description of stage singing and dancing, which is immersive and close to the eyes. The male protagonist is charming and you can really see his growth and transformation. The description of the stage planning for the return and some external public opinions is not a long forum. Rather, it is a concise and accurate summary. I have almost never seen it in other articles, but it is really wonderful. I especially like the part without water. The key point is that the author actually made up some planning concepts that are rare in novels, and they are very specific and unique, not an assembly line. It gives me a strong sense of empathy, and I can completely imagine the existence of such a boy band. The cover is really ugly, and it completely reduces other people's desire to read. I really can't find anything that matches it. Either use text on the cover, or create a sense of atmosphere. The background is grand. There are fans flashing fluorescent sticks in the audience, and the back of the male protagonist is on the stage. There is no need to show the front. The gathering of fluorescent sticks is highlighted in the audience. In short, don't use AI to create anymore. Personally, I feel that whether it is AI or something else, it cannot express the essence.

It's quite interesting. It shows how difficult it is to debut in South Korea. It's not too toxic at the moment [thoughts] Just average. There are too many unnecessary descriptions. It's better to focus on the protagonist's career.

The male protagonist was commented many times in the early stage that his dancing was raw and sexy (that's what it should be), but this was not reflected at all in the later stage. There is also cold white skin, which can be regarded as one of the male protagonist's characters, or an important label. I have mentioned the cold white skin of the male protagonist many times before, but his skin color changed immediately after joining the drama. This is understandable, and I respect the character, but after the show, the male protagonist's cold white skin has not returned yet! Although there are many forums, I quite like them. I just like to read fan comments 🥰

One word stick, all aspects of evaluation are contained in this one word. Suggestions: ① Change the cover to an eye-catching one. The current one is a bit bland and does not match the character of the protagonist in the book. Of course, this is just a suggestion. If the author likes it very much, you don't have to change it. I believe more people will read this book. ② Change the introduction if you can, and the copy should highlight the character of the protagonist. This character is really novel, so that more people can get it. I hope this book gets better and better!

When can I go solo and set up my own studio? It bothers me to see him milking the entire group and even writing songs for the band.

It's super beautiful. I hope you can hit me with a lot of saved manuscripts. I would like to ask if there will be a partner for the male protagonist in the big conference. I hope it will be without cp [smirking] 😘 Will there be more perspectives of Xu Jun and fans? 😘😘😘

I only like to watch the plot when there is no captain and no love, the five-person combination, ah ah, I can't accept the male protagonist's relationship🆘🆘🆘, I don't know why I can't accept it, the plot is good-looking and very detailed

The author thinks, it's time for Yun Di to go solo, or his contract is about to expire, the company, his teammates and fans are extremely nervous, and other companies are poaching people. It should be interesting