Yin Yang Creation Furnace

After reading it, the author is level 5 and has a completed work, but I still feel that the writing style is slightly green, many details are not in place, the story background cannot be developed well, the characters in the article are a bit lacking, and many supporting characters have a strong NPC feel! Overall, it can be seen that it is about 8 points, giving 4 stars.

I have listened to Chapter 390. It is very good. There is a lot of dialogue between the characters, which allows the voices of multiple characters to play their best role. There is no overwhelming threat or ridicule by the villain, nor is it aggrieved. It sounds very comfortable. There is also no villain who likes a certain heroine and then sends his younger brother to target him, himself, the elders, and the family. The speed of collecting the harem. In fact, I personally think it's okay. Although there are so many chapters, only two of them have a relationship, but the daily love scenes are very delicate, because it is not good to have too many harems, and the old one will not be able to appear at all. If the word count is slowly increased by the process of recruiting girls one after another, the method of advancing the plot is a bit low-end. The current progress is really good, don't speed up too much [smile]

After searching for a long time, I finally got the money. I have read 80 chapters so far. There is nothing poisonous, the plot is logical, and the emotional description is also delicate. I feel that this book is not the level that Tomato should be. I hope that it will be as amazing as the beginning [Learned] Pure Liu Bei in the back

The author has a good sense of lightning protection, and his writing style is okay in the first part, but gets better later on. He knows what he writes to attract readers. Emotional dramas, the author's writing style is good at writing emotional dramas! The master is very cute and gives more scenes, and the other female supporting characters also give more! It seems that the author has been attacked by his peers. A bunch of people gave this book one star if the reading time is less than 30 minutes. The author's writing is very good and non-toxic. If you like watching harem, please read it boldly. Okay, now let's look at the latest two chapters, which are very poisonous. The male villain captured three female protagonists, and he did something unknown after a period of time in between. It's very poisonous.

This is a pretty good fantasy harem novel. Let's talk about the advantages first: First of all, in terms of the plot, there are no particularly big surprises, and it is still a good read. It is a little suffocating before chapter 400 and after that, it is basically a good read, and the pace is medium to slow. Secondly, the character creation is relatively good. The heroines are all more distinct and outstanding, and the speed of adding new heroines is also more appropriate. Furthermore, the author updates very quickly and is very comfortable. Let's talk about the shortcomings: First of all, in terms of plot, although it is a harem story, as of about chapter 760, the female protagonists who have relationships with the male protagonist are basically either forced, poisoned by love, or take advantage of the situation. Although a few of them develop normal relationships, it feels a bit strange, as most of the female protagonists are patients with Stockholm Syndrome. Secondly, there is a title scam. The things in the introduction are basically like a certain master's instant noodles, for reference only. All in all, this is a pretty good fantasy harem novel, and it is highly recommended to read. If you are a reader who likes pure love harems, it is not recommended to read.

If you like a harem with a delicate and emotional heroine, you can check it out, it's still very good. The emotional line is much better than other harem stories in Tomato. I didn't eat the first one or two hundred. Later, I felt better and started eating a lot. The only bad thing is that the pressure on the protagonist's combat power is a bit harsh. But it doesn't matter to me. I don't take it very seriously. Just look at the emotional line After reading Tomato for so long, this book is currently the only book I give as a gift, even though it is free. The emotional line is really great! ! ! It is highly recommended to focus on the emotional line and the three-dimensional character of the heroine. If you don't really care about the emotional line or if you like fast-paced and unbeatable writing, forget about eating and you can abandon the book.

The writing style is excellent, and the characters are full and distinctive. The disadvantage is that the pace is very slow. It is still in the middle stage of Qi training after a hundred chapters, and the meat is also very slow. I only ate one piece of meat after two hundred chapters. It is a bit like reading a harem fantasy novel ten years ago.

I have seen more than 200 pictures, and I feel very good. It is one of the few good articles that can be found in Tomato. However, I feel that the world view is quite large. The author will not be too unfinished [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's a pretty good book, hahaha, I recommend you to read it. The combat power may not be very good, but the emotional scenes are pretty good, and you can drive a car, and the villain is not particularly brainless. This is not a popular book, it should be rated 9.0 Or above, it's not dragging [making faces]

The plot is reasonable, not overly exaggerated, and the logical thinking is clear and fascinating.

The emotions of the novel are sincere, no longer like the hypocrisy of plagiarizing Internet articles. There is emotional analysis, which allows emotional novices to understand the meaning. Personally I think it looks good, I'm an emotional novice. Also, I feel that the theme of the novel is centered around the description of multiple female protagonists, looking at different styles of emotional stories.

The rare refreshing article is very interesting.

The novel is not bad, but the score is low. Although it is not a masterpiece, it is not a bad book either. A score of 8 or above is normal. The main protagonist and the heroine are always flirting with each other to amuse the readers. However, the times are too many and it is not good enough. Some readers are angry. As for pushing the boundaries, I don't care, as long as the content is exciting. It only takes a few months to go from the first level of Qi Refining to the fifth level of Foundation Establishment, and the subsequent upgrades are not too slow. At the age of 16, beating the Holy Sect Saint at the fifth level of Foundation Establishment is not considered too high. There are more than a hundred chapters of ambiguity in the beginning, but it starts to get meaty later on, but it's always the love drug that doesn't work!

Good

It's good-looking and a little bit ugly, a little bit cool and a little bit unpleasant, but there's nothing poisonous about it, and there's nothing bad about it either. In order to write every heroine well, it's acceptable to accept the slow pace of promoting the heroine. Maybe it's because the plot arrangement isn't good enough or the writing isn't strong enough, but it always seems a bit uninspiring. I've read 400 chapters, so overall it's worth reading.

The picture of the heroine is really beautiful and fits the character very well.

Yes, the writing style and plot details are good. I hope it won't break down in the future🙏

[Shy] It's very interesting. Although the plot is not novel, at least it has no surprises, and the progress is pretty good. There is no X-level play for a year, and there is no grinding and grinding. I saw that I have entered the secret realm, when will I have to eat the master! [Shy] I'm still watching it now, it's 800. It feels like the plot has sped up a bit, which is reasonable. After all, the protagonist's cultivation level is too low. During this time period, all the characters are incarnations of the Nascent Soul and even the Void Return Mahayana. Can the protagonist speed up the progress a little bit? In fact, I feel that the start is still too low. The cultivation speed is already very fast, but the ink mark is still the same. It is a bit disenchanting to defeat monsters by leapfrogging.

At present, I have read Chapter 392, which is not poisonous at all and is progressing step by step. I don't know why the rating is so low, but it is a really interesting harem novel. It is traditional and attractive but not rigid.

Su Gongdi worries about gains and losses, combines actual time points, eggshell computer superstars like hahaha, younger brother and insurance policy number and traditional wrestling feedback, hard work, hard time points, East China Jiaotong University, appropriate Jedi counterattack, no up, no down, supervise each other, polar world neighborhood committee, vow not to give up, take annual leave, tell the truth, reluctant to let go of things

In fact, this book is quite good from what I have read so far. There are no blocking points and the plot is very interesting. It cannot be said to be a masterpiece, but it is better than most. I'll look at the back and make a follow-up review. I don't know why the score is so low. It must be someone's malicious negative review. It's a very good book, but it was delayed by the name. According to the Tomato score, it is at least 8.5 Or above. Someone maliciously lowered the score. Except for the Hehuan sect, which recruits girls a little too quickly, there are no other bad points. They are all well written. It would be great if they could update more every day.

Why does this crap book have such a low score? It does look good. Although the author's writing skills are average, the description of the pictures is spot on. There is no flowery rhetoric, but it is vulgar and easy to understand.

The most outstanding thing is the delicate and full emotional line, which completely abandons the assembly line style of collecting concubines. The bond between the male protagonist and a group of confidants gradually progresses, each meeting and getting to know each other has its own reasons, the character's personality is distinct and three-dimensional, and the heartbeat and following of each female protagonist are natural and reasonable. The main line of cultivating immortality and the line of love complement each other, and the emotional portrayal is delicate and heart-warming, with both sweetness and atmosphere.

Great, great, great, great, great!

Yun Qi and Shen Xi's assists are full [smile][smile] However, I suggest that it is better to bury the foreshadowing of "Shen Xi is so good to the protagonist". Although the advancement of individual plots lacks novelty, it is indeed useful.

It's very beautiful, the heroine has a distinct personality, is very interesting, and is invincible

Not bad, I hope it will be more exciting in the future. For example, take in a cute little maid.

A level of 9 points or above. 1. Fundamentals: less water words, less repetition, and less redundancy. 2. Operation surface: Good rhythm, well-proportioned load, and smooth ups and downs. It can be predicted, and sometimes it cannot be predicted. 3. Writing skills. The layers are clear, the writing is smooth, and the plot is well-organized and reasonable. 4. Imagination level. Excellent. 5. Design of exercises and martial arts. Excellent.

Add some warmth to the author, it looks good and suits my taste, it's cool enough [OK]

The plot is reasonable and exciting, thank you, keep up the good work.