Forging the Sword on the Green Duckweed

The beginning is high-energy, and there are no peeing spots throughout the whole process! The pace is fast, the tension is strong, and the plot advances cleanly and without any sloppiness. As a new author, he is able to deliver such a mature and compact work. He has unlimited potential and a promising future!

There are many flaws. If you are a newcomer, you can continue to study, study the writing style, and read more works of great masters. The storyline is compact and attractive. After reading it for a long time, it is still different from the previous prehistoric novels. The plot is relatively compact and there are also flaws. Keep working hard.

The plot is fast-paced and not procrastinating. It is remarkable and has some shortcomings. The flaws are not hidden. Keep up the good work.

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