Genshin Impact: The Dragon Hunter and the Great Sacred Dragon

This is perfect, the writing is not bad, the emotional line is very delicate, and the story development is not too out of the ordinary. It's just that if there are two storylines, it will feel a bit messy. Other than this, it is perfect and delicious. But in fact, you can write a general background in the introduction, otherwise it will be easy to read in a fog, but the teacher thinks it is perfect, and it is okay if I don't change it.

Nice! 💕 Or dual timelines 😳 Very novel setting, and the writing is also very good! 💕 Come on, author! I'm optimistic about you! 😘😘😘 In fact, I feel like I could add a timeline of this chapter before the title, otherwise it would be a bit confusing [Sending my heart]

Shockingly delicious! Very, very fragrant rice, so delicious. Goddess, I will follow you for the rest of my life. Wow Kaka (ヾ(˙❥˙)ﾉ. I highly recommend it to my family. The author's writing is very good. I ate this rice. I'm excited (♡ω♡ ) ~♪. It's so exciting. I love you goddess! (~￣³￣)~

Very new setting! 🥰Teacher Coconut's emotions are written very delicately, with a very comfortable rhythm, and a very fresh feeling. It's not too jumpy or too slow. The two timelines alternate, and it can also complete the closed loop and clarify the relationship. The transition between timelines is very natural. Goddess I love you❤️Nata Shitong and the emotional line are also well integrated, natural and very detailed💘There are just too few, and Tomato's push is not very good. Going to fan software may have better traffic (privately🥺)

Great, great!! The logic is very smooth!! The transition is spot on!!! The foreshadowing is attractive, and the interjections from time to time are well timed!!! Dear, please don't abandon the article, I love you forever 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's very beautiful, and the writing is good. If it keeps updating, I will be the author's most loyal believer. The emotional line is never boring [Sending my heart]

I may have saved the Milky Way in my previous life before I saw such a magical article, so read it. . . I have been crying TT. In fact, I almost guessed it, but the author's description made me cry and cry. I thought it would be a sweet recognition of unblocked memories. I can only say that he is worthy of Kinic... He is good at measuring costs and takes his own emotions into account. I have been 😭😭😭os really want to watch something sweet.

Dual timelines, transitions are extremely smooth There is no doubt about the love between the two of them! My mind is full of how should I keep you, how should I remember you? History cannot be changed, time is still moving forward, but memories are unforgettable. "It would be best for us to forget this." What, don't forget it! "... What's the same?" "Because... It's sad." Because it's sad, really, to be remembered in this way. Oh my god... Come on! Please keep updated, I will do everything😭👊👊👊 I forgot to mention it, it's not OOC at all.

It is a Qiao Ji novel with two story lines. The teacher's writing style is really good 🥰. Sometimes the story lines may be confused. Ahem, if possible, could the teacher add one in the title which story line it is? ([Salute]) The characters are also created superbly, with very distinct personality traits. In particular, one of the two story lines gives people motivation to read on (even if I don't have it, I will insist on reading it). The summary is a particularly good Qiao Ji's book, worth investing in.

Wow, the writing is so good to my taste, it doesn't feel OOC at all! Like it, like it (ºº) The author writes very well! And because of its own reasons, the switching of timelines is very easy for me to distinguish!!! (✪▽✪) (Well, I just feel uncomfortable if there is no comment section) Author, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง