Genshin Impact: Dragon Hunter and the Great Holy Dragon

This is perfect, the writing is not bad, the emotional line is very delicate, and the story development is not too out of the ordinary. It's just that if there are two storylines, it will feel a bit messy. Other than this, it is perfect and delicious. But in fact, you can write a general background in the introduction, otherwise it will be easy to read in a fog, but the teacher thinks it is perfect, and it is okay if I don't change it.

Nice! [Sending Hearts] Or dual timelines [Shy] Very novel setting, and the writing is also very good! [Sending Hearts] Come on, author! I'm optimistic about you! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] In fact, I feel like I could add a timeline of this chapter before the title, otherwise it would be a bit confusing [Sending my heart]

Shockingly delicious! Very, very fragrant rice, so delicious. Goddess, I will follow you for the rest of my life. Wow Kaka (ヾ(˙❥˙)ﾉ. I highly recommend it to my family. The author's writing is very good. I ate this rice. I'm excited (♡ω♡ ) ~♪. It's so exciting. I love you goddess! (~￣³￣)~

Very new setting! 🥰Teacher Coconut's emotions are written very delicately, with a very comfortable rhythm, and a very fresh feeling. It's not too jumpy or too slow. The two timelines alternate, and it can also complete the closed loop and clarify the relationship. The transition between timelines is very natural. Goddess I love you❤️Nata Shitong and the emotional line are also well integrated, natural and very detailed💘There are just too few, and Tomato's push is not very good. Going to fan software may have better traffic (privately🥺)

Great, great! ! The logic is very smooth! ! The transition is spot on! ! ! The foreshadowing is attractive, and the interjections from time to time are well timed! ! ! Dear, please don't abandon the article, I love you forever [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's very beautiful, and the writing is good. If it keeps updating, I will be the author's most loyal believer. The emotional line is never boring [Sending my heart]

Dual timelines, transitions are extremely smooth There is no doubt about the love between the two of them! My mind is full of how should I keep you, how should I remember you? History cannot be changed, time is still moving forward, but memories are unforgettable. "It would be best for us to forget this." What, don't forget it! "... What's the same?" "Because... It's sad." Because it's sad, really, to be remembered in this way. Oh my god... Come on! Please keep updated, I will do everything😭👊👊👊 I forgot to mention it, it's not OOC at all.

You two live your life together better than anything else. I like the two lines of the dual narrative [crying][crying][crying]

Wow, the writing is so good to my taste, it doesn't feel OOC at all! Like it, like it (ºº) The author writes very well! And because of its own reasons, the switching of timelines is very easy for me to distinguish! ! ! (✪▽✪) (Well, I just feel uncomfortable if there is no comment section) Author, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It is a Qiao Ji novel with two story lines. The teacher's writing style is really good [Adoration]. Sometimes the story lines may be confused. Ahem, if possible, could the teacher add one in the title which story line it is? ([Salute]) The characters are also created superbly, with very distinct personality traits. In particular, one of the two story lines gives people motivation to read on (even if I don't have it, I will insist on reading it). The summary is a particularly good Qiao Ji's book, worth investing in.

So delicious! ! ! So delicious! ! ! It was tied in one morning! ! ! The tap is so delicious! ! ! The author's writing is so good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Love] [Like]

I may have saved the Milky Way in my previous life before I saw such a magical article, so read it. . . I have been crying TT. In fact, I almost guessed it, but the author's description made me cry and cry. I thought it would be a sweet recognition of unblocked memories. I can only say that he is worthy of Kinic... He is good at measuring costs and takes his own emotions into account. I have been 😭😭😭os really want to watch something sweet.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short, good short [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Teacher, this mouthful of yours makes me confused [laughs] Teacher, come on, come on, come on

Very awesome, the food is super delicious, delicious [Adoration] [Adoration] I will always support you, please be sure to work hard to update [crying] [crying] (A person who is about to collapse due to interruption of updates and deletion of posts)

Good-looking, good-looking!٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅) Ross, can you see yourself in the mirror? ! !

Qiaoji nb Klass, I had a great time eating the Valentine's Day extra episode. Come on, author.

It feels very beautiful and full of emotions. I look forward to the time when the truth is revealed.

It's so beautifulwww🥹🥹🥹It's like a fairy😭😭😭

It's beautiful! It's beautiful! It's beautiful!

Very beautiful, highly recommended

The score is low because there are few people watching.

It's very delicious. If you have more time, can you add a few more chapters (usually one chapter is not enough•̆₃•̑)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking (don't know what to say)

Let me tell you in advance that this book is not OOC. It's about the relationship between Kinic and Acho (but it's not just them). The timeline jumps out very freely. It is recommended to watch it with a smart mind.

It's very beautiful, and the author is also very interesting [crying]

It's my favorite dual timeline. But it was a bit messy, and I didn't know it was a bit dizzy at first. Alas, I like this setting so much. Thank you for the teacher's meal [love] [love]

Ahhhhhhhhhh, teacher, I love you! ! It's super well written and has dual timelines! Maybe it's personal reasons, but I feel it's easy to distinguish and not confusing at all! ! Sweet young couple

Go straight! Super pretty! It feels a bit like me. You may not be able to figure it out when you look at the timeline, but if you like Qiaoji, you must see it!

What a great setting... This plot is really good [full of] God of Cooking, and Qiao Ji's interaction is really awesome. Qiaoji is only 99 [shy]

Super easy to knock, overly natural, beautiful language, endless aftertaste