Doraemon: Child of Time

After reading it, there are indeed too few Doraemon themes. Come on, author. My personal suggestion is: don't have too many female protagonists. 2-3 Is about the same (in fact, Shizuka can be given to Daxiong. After all, the heroines in the theatrical version are very good-looking). The theatrical version can actually be longer. Finally, the protagonist is the director of the Space and Time Bureau, and Daxiong is the deputy director? (Guess) Summary: +1 for writing skills that need more practice, +2 for Doraemon themes, +2 for novice authors' protection period

Finally tied, I feel like so few people have read this book. The one I wrote now is better than the theatrical version, mainly because I didn't write about the theatrical version that I liked! I'm looking forward to the day when the Iron Man Corps... As for the heroine, I feel that Shizuka is the best one to write now. After all, she is the heroine who has stayed with the protagonist the longest (Shizuka, Kreya, and Lilei are currently three, and there is also Palpa who may be the secretary). If a theatrical version is part of daily life, even if he writes 20 theatrical versions, there will be 1,200 chapters. I don't know if the author can grasp so many female protagonists. I look forward to it.

It feels very good. There is no awkward feeling like other novels written like this. Is Shizuka going to be with the protagonist later or Nobita 🤔? After all, if he is the protagonist, it would feel paradoxical. After all, the original work is Nobita, but the chief of the space-time police is Chu Mushan [Chigua]

It is suitable for those who have never watched Doraemon or have forgotten it because it is a bit copied. Overall, the daily version is better than the theatrical version. In fact, the characters can be changed. For example, Nobita is not a unit drama character after all, but he will grow up. Other characters can also have more roles, such as the two-person team. If it has its own characteristics and is not taken apart, I think I can be the protagonist of some theatrical versions. They disappeared inexplicably and I relied on Doraemon to complete the theatrical version. The protagonist is promoting the female character. The plot is very reasonable. Anyway, they came back within one day. Of course, there are no girls in this theatrical version [laughter]

There aren't many Tomato Doraemon articles, but this one can be said to be the highest quality I've seen on Tomato. If it maintains this level in the future, it will definitely become popular. Fire Tongs Liu Ming

This is the best Doraemon fanfic ever written. As long as it doesn't follow with an invincible story, it's fine. If the protagonist is invincible, then what's the point of being in a daily adventure like Doraemon? Come on, author, take good care of you 😄

It feels okay, but to be honest, I can't accept even Shizuka's behavior. I always think that Nobita and Shizuka are the best couple, because Nobita is worthy. A child who dares to say in front of Japanese officers that Japan is about to be defeated does deserve a better future. I saw a lot of people in the comment area saying that the problem with being with Fat Tiger Sister is that Doraemon came back to change the timeline.

So far, I have seen some very good writings in Doraemon fanfics. When I was a kid, when I read Doraemon, I imagined that many props in it would be very unnatural if combined and used. It is not a problem to easily become a planet-level combat power 🤔

The writing is very good, the writing style is good, and for Doraemon, it is completely fun to read. Author, can you write down the daily plot of "Shizuka's Big Crisis" or "Stomach-Exploring Submarine" and let Dekisugi enter Shizuka's belly? I really want to see the plot of Musugi replacing Daxiong! Please, I really want to see it!!! One more suggestion, the author can end the relationship between Shizuka and Daxiong as soon as possible. I think we can arrange a heroine for Daxiong. We can have a theatrical version of "The Great Demon World". When I was a child, I felt that the heroine who can turn into a cat is a good match for Daxiong, and Daxiong also likes him very much. If Daxiong is given a female protagonist earlier, he won't think about competing with Dekisugi for Shizuka. After all, as a protagonist, Daxiong always seems a bit weird with Dekisugi. When will the author write to get 💍 or 🍬 from Shizuka's belly? You said before that you have been waiting for almost a year to write the next one.

I finished watching it in two days. Although there is a flaw in forgetting props, the interactive plot of a fairy tale with humanistic characters is well done. And because it's a tomato, you deserve full marks. Waiting for you to come back. .