The Life of a Lord Starting from Picking up a Witch

The life of a lord starting from picking up a witch Take a bite of elbow skin The narrative in the text is a bit immature, straightforward and lacks a bit of embellishment. The plot is average. Although the story is not particularly novel, it kept me interested in watching it. The creation of characters may be hindered by the writing style and is a bit facial. Taken together, the story is like a fairy tale, somewhat simple and distorted. Well, other than that, there are no particularly big flaws. Plus, the witch element is what I like better. About four stars.

Ever since I watched Unleashed the Witch, I have become very interested in the witch setting. This is also a witch setting. I am looking forward to the next plot.

Give yourself a high mark for being shameless. I hope you can give me more comments and pointers. There are many problems with this book, such as poor writing and some typos. I hope you can bear with me. I would like to thank you all here. The author is very persuasive. If you tell me, I will definitely change it or explain it. I hope you all enjoy reading it. Thank you!

I reluctantly give you five stars, come on

Jindian's territory development

It's pretty good. What's the point of reading the introduction? I hope you can keep a good rhythm

Not bad, not bad. It's just that the plot is a bit slow for me, but it's not draggy. The writing style of this novel is similar to the System Lord novel from a few years ago, but there is a sense that among a large number of foreign thousand-layer calorie bombs, an ordinary bowl of chopped green onion noodles is not a delicacy, but it tastes particularly comfortable. (*^▽^*)

The plot is normal and the characters have normal IQs [crying]

Not bad, just a little missing [laughing] The book is good, but it's a pity that the author can't continue writing. Please support me if you can [I learned]

It felt okay, except for the sudden ending after seeing the next chapter after 100 chapters. A little confused

Except that the writing style is a bit green, everything else is okay so far, the author is not good at writing, and the content is wonderful.

I prefer to read about Western fantasy technology and magic, but this kind of book usually ends up dead if the early data is not good. Please support the author, come on!

It's pretty good. Keep working hard and it will get better. I'll comment after I finish it. I've almost finished reading it, and I have a problem, obviously. The characterization of the characters is a bit immature, and the measurement system is a bit messy. To be honest, the level of how much is equal is not very suitable in this context. This is a common question for newcomers and new readers. The advantages are also particularly prominent. It refers to "Release the Witch" but abandons the [magic] setting, which is innovative. The racial characteristics of races such as [Elf] and [Goblin] made me see a kind of thinking called [rationality] In terms of economic development, Goldfinger is very classic. There is no way to get rich from the beginning, and there is no invincible start. And added the very interesting thing [high school chemistry laboratory]. Subsequent innovations provide a lot of room for imagination. Most of the platforms are [invincible], [cool], and [inexplicable]. The biggest problem with this book is the setting of the heroine [a defeated princess], which is actually not bad. What is shown is a civilization that is developing step by step. Finally, I hope that the author will slightly change some systems, such as space size and currency measurement. Author, you can rethink it. Some monetary systems are too simple. As for space, you can just write the protagonist and visually inspect it yourself. When instructing the servants how much space there is, it is best to give a more abstract physical concept, such as the size of a room, how many rooms. As for currency, you can refer to the current prices, such as the pricing of an egg, a pound of vegetables, a pound of meat, gold and diamonds, etc. The price of white paper is a bit exaggerated. The price doesn't come just by opening your mouth.

It looks good so far, the author keeps up the good work

I like the style very much... I would have liked it very much if it didn't end like this [crying]

Interesting, silky and natural, well written