Mikoto************

It looks good, author, cheers! [Laughs] Also, if I ask, it must be Lily written here. [Laugh]

The plot is very logical. All the sources of the heroine's strength are the rewards of her own hard work. They are not brainless gifts from the sky. The heroine has her own persistence and protection, and has corresponding efforts. She is full of wisdom, shoulders her own responsibilities, and has been working hard. It is a good interpretation of the story. "Pressure is motivation", and they have never let up; the emotional description is also very delicate, they accompany each other for a long time, look at each other dotingly again and again, it is the common expectation of the two of them that things will come true, there is no nonsense, they are firmly choosing each other, their daily interactions are the reality of everyone's love fantasy. Then again, why was Kakashi's Sharingan eye removed and replaced with an ordinary eye? Later on, Kakashi can still use the Sharingan [what]. Could it be that the Sharingan was replaced with a copied Sharingan? I'm confused [what]

The writing is delicate, the plot is reasonable, and the pictures are full of tension. And although it seems to only have 34 chapters, each chapter has a lot of words. One chapter is better than two chapters. It is a very good work, much better than most of the novice routines on Tomato. I hope the author can continue to persevere. Come on [note] I read it in one go and it was very enjoyable. The author's writing skills are very good. Although there are a lot of skipped and omitted plots. This book has the potential to be longer, but overall it is very good [note]. I just hope to update it soon.

Good looking, such a rare cp, unexpectedly feels good?

It's beautiful, the author must continue it, Ou Niegai

It's very well written. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, one question I have is that Scorpion only started to defect after Kakashi's father killed his parents, right? Kakashi is known to be as big as Obito. Kakashi's father didn't kill Scorpio's parents until the beginning of the 3rd Ninja War, right? At this time, Scorpio should be only about eight or nine or 10 years old. I remember he was 15 when he defected?

I was frightened and fainted by Konoha Himeki [face covering]

The most emotionally sensitive Naruto story I have ever seen. At least the combat power is steady and there is no big golden finger.

It's good, but I don't know how Uchiha will end up

Well written. I like Hinata and Xiang Aya.

Good-looking, love to read, like to watch [admiration] [admiration] The author should come more [sending heart] [sending heart]

It's good to read, but it was too rushed at the end, which was a pity [crazy]. I feel like I could have written a lot more, but it's still very worth watching. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Very detailed description, okay

The powerful plot unfolds very quickly

Looks good, likes it, very satisfied [full]

It feels a bit fast

Don't stop (referring to updates), they will do anything

Not bad. The plot developed a little too fast and was too short, so it ended.

The logic is clear and the daily plot is good

Okay, Naruto's yuri arc is still too strange, and the story line is quite good.