Red Mansion: the Little Bird Is in Love, You Call This Feng Lazi

The writing is so good, especially the part where Qin Keqing proposed marriage, the conflict was fierce. Jia Lian did not hesitate to break up with Ning Guofu for Qin Keqing, which fully demonstrated Jia Lian's unwavering love for Qin Keqing. It's so exciting that people can't eat or breathe.

Five stars. It's really the best Red Mansion novel I've ever read. A time-travel novel like this, which is based on the four major classics, is not easy to write. If the author has too many ideas, he will be scolded by the original novelists, and if he is loyal to the original novel, he will be rigid and boring. The author's balance is considered to be very good. It has the taste of the original Dream of Red Mansions, but also has the refreshing points of the novel. Of course, there may be some details in it that are criticized by the original author, but for people like me who are not very impressed by the details in the original work, it is not harmful. I hope the author will continue to write more, and I look forward to the completion.

The truth is of the highest quality, with a beautiful heart and embroidered mouth, and every word is exquisite! Savor it carefully, like sipping the fine chaff of polished rice, every grain is full of essence, without a trace of impurities! The composition of this story is like flowing clouds and flowing water, neither fast nor slow, just like the stream in the garden, which has its own natural charm. Throughout the entire article, all the ink has been written on Lian Er Ye and Zhu Chai. Not a single slant has been left out, nor has there been any sloppy or perfunctory writing. It really deserves to be said: There is a new chapter in the Grand View Garden, and good stories will be recorded in Zhiyanzhai!

It's really well written [laughs], thank you so much to the author💪💪💪

Update soon! I hope that the subsequent plot will not be an afterthought (for example, Qin Keqing). If there is no contradiction, create contradiction, bye👋

How could this book not be popular? After staying up all night and one day to catch up, I feel that it looks very smooth and the writing is excellent. It is a rare masterpiece. I don't know why the rating is so low [smile] As a result, the author is no longer active in updating. Tomato looks at your good work!

Well, there are modern factors, the emperor is a time traveler

I'll give it four stars for now. There are too few updates. I even suspect that the author wants to cut the book.

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Come on, author, I finally got a good book called The Red Mansion. It's okay to read it now. Don't stop it. You have to do it to the end [crying]. If you don't persevere, you will know the result. Please 🥺

This novel is quite well written, and compared to other Tomato novels of the same genre, it is quite to my liking. I first put this book on my bookshelf and clicked on it several times. I saw some human-machine reviews, and then I put it aside to let it gather dust. Until I clicked on it again this time, I thought it was better not to be a liar or a fake Shennong commenting there😅, and then I saw more than a hundred chapters in one go. I read it separately on two mobile phones with two accounts (I am a night owl, and I will change one when one phone runs out of battery). Therefore, I did not read the book for a long time with this account, and I also left a comment on the one hundred and more chapters. I don't know if what I'm seeing now has been modified by the author. Anyway, the content of the book I've seen so far is not considered to be a high-quality one, but it definitely surpasses many Red Mansions fan fiction of the same type on the same platform.

Okay, originally I only liked to read system documents and follow the military route, and I didn't like civilian documents. This book changed my concept. Although it is not systematic, the daily life and interactions with the heroine are well written and warm. The route of science and engineering inventions that I followed in the court was basically not compromised. I have read other novels about "The Red Mansions", where you can't escape from the house fight, and there is a big quarrel with Mrs. Wang, and he repeatedly refuses to die, which is disgusting. If you don't like civil literature, you are simply disgusted by these novels. But this article feels very good, suppress it when it needs to be suppressed, force Mrs. Wang to leave the house, and will not jump around again and again. In the latest few pictures, the eldest prince plotted against him. I feel that the protagonist's mentality has not been adjusted well. He always thinks about choosing between the eldest prince and the prince to join him. He already has the leverage in other people's hands, and then he takes refuge. Whether he can survive when the other person is finished depends on other people's conscience. I personally don't like this kind of handing over one's life to others. I hope that the protagonist will take the path of rebellion. I have recently read articles about the Three Kingdoms and taking refuge with Cao Cao and Liu Bei. It seems unsatisfying. It is better to rebel and be more exciting and feel more satisfied. Come on, author!

I read the updates in one go. It is definitely a good book. It is full of humor and laughter. When I saw the pony and the big car, I spat out the rice in one mouthful [covering my face]. Normally I don't comment on reading books. I made an exception of 5-star praise.

In Tomato, this book is really a very good one among Red Mansions fans. I wonder if the author can stop thinking about it. I think your previous books were hastily finished. I'm afraid of [crying] [crying]. There will definitely be traffic. Good books are not afraid of being late. You must persist [almost crying]

This is an excellent and refreshing article. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 80 years In 0, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade waited for Longyang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..." The concept of this book is very new. The World of Red Mansions refers to practical examinations. The interaction with my wife is also very sweet. The characters are also well established. I hope it will not stop updating [Sending Hearts]

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. That's right. The elder brother is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother is urging the elder brother like this. It's the younger brother's fault. It hurts the elder brother's body!

For harem stories, you can give the harem party a try, but there are still some conflicts and minor poisonous points, so you don't need to give it a try for the perfect party.

The emotional line is very clear. Thanks to time travel, the major achievements are very fitting. Of course, the direction of the whole story is also very clear. Since Jia Lian has become the male protagonist, everything will be unfolded from Jia Lian's perspective. It is a very good book.

Let's not talk about anything else. Just talking about the writing style of this book, I personally think it must be in the top three of Tomato. Besides, the background setting is even more amazing. This is fine chaff! Highly recommended! ! ! Five stars presented. (Note: Five-star reviews are only the upper limit for Tomato and not for this book.)

Author, hurry up and write. I can't read enough [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Yes, one of the few Red Mansions that I like, the author has some literary background [laughs evilly]

If you want to speak of pearls, your writing style will remain careless; if you don't hide your flaws, you will be able to truly make a beautiful and beautiful chapter.

More updates, more updates! Author, after all, you don't want to lose readers because of few updates! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It was so well written that I read it in one sitting. The author's literary talent is really good. I said this novel is really good. Are you Er Duolong?

This book seems pretty good so far. Why do I feel like no one is reading it?

First, the writing style is better, not all in vernacular. Second, it's quite refreshing, non-toxic and non-stressful. Third, it's not just that once you collect it, it won't come out. In short, it's very good.

The Red Mansion fandom is considered top-notch. If you like this genre, you can check it out.

Good. The text is delicate. It closes quickly but is not comfortable enough.

It's pretty good-looking, and there are no invincible plug-ins or anything like that! It's quite immersive!

It's been a long time since I've seen a Red Mansion fanfic that suits my taste so well [Blow a kiss]