Hogwarts: I Became a Master of Magical Thievery

It looks good, but it is too close to the main plot of the original work. I hope there will be no teacher-student romance.

It's good, but it also has flaws. The character of the protagonist is relatively distinctive and distinctive. I hope that the good side can highlight the trouble and reputation and prestige caused by the protagonist stealing the master's identity. The plot development is more interesting and different from other fan fiction and the original plot. The only flaw is Voldemort! ! ! ! The character design is very bad. Professor McGonagall is also called Dumbledore or Principal Dumbledore. The author did not notice some small details about Ron's fear of spiders (the author probably has not read the original book and the movie and only read a bunch of fan books and then wrote it [laughing and crying])

A very novel setting. Will the heroine be this mermaid? But I still prefer no cp

Absolutely a good book. The Harry Potter fanfics are very good. The protagonist has his own personality. Although the protagonist is a thief, his character is quite kind. Unlike some other Harry Potter novels, where you open your mouth for power and shut up for profit. Harry Potter is an excellent children's book. Although it has a bit of knives and darkness, its essence is to praise the truth, goodness and beauty, rather than most Harry Potter fanfics nowadays. , Open his mouth to be Slyklin, and then he wants to gain power, interests, and privileges, and then he wants to unify the world, and also find a harem, and then vilify the original characters. The protagonist in this book has his own personality and characteristics. He is chaotic and kind. The identity of the thief means that he will not be as rigid as those pure and kind protagonists, and his kindness will not make him an annoying egoist. It is definitely worth reading. Oh, yes, there are still some small flaws, that is, the author did not do a good job in some details, and Voldemort was directly written as a clown. However, it is actually quite normal when you think about it. After all, Voldemort in the original work is actually quite nervous later on. But if nothing else, when Voldemort returns, After resurrecting, his character should have improved. After all, the clown Voldemort written about the protagonist is the same Voldemort who is still on Rocky's head. If nothing else happens, the protagonist will be retaliated when Voldemort is resurrected. However, according to this progress, it should take some time to write it.

This is the real HP product! The writing is smooth, the plot is novel, and the logic is reasonable. What's more important is that he doesn't act awkward and has a normal personality. I discovered a good book in an era where the protagonists of HP fandoms all over the place are becoming too Westernized and lose the sense of empathy👍🏻

The subject matter is good, the language is empty, and the writing is weak. It is a good bedtime reading.

If it's great, I would like to ask if the author has a cp?

It seems that Amfried is the heroine. I am very happy about this book. It is a good-looking book. Although some details are not handled particularly well, the overall idea is still good-looking.

This book is okay

Very very nice looking.

The quality is very good. I have read a hundred or two hundred copies of the fanfic. There are not many works like this that do not just blindly promote the main line of the original work. The author will keep up the good work.

The protagonist Ye Luzi is awesome and very interesting.

Very good so far, good reviews

Really awesome, very beautiful

It's really good

I gave it a five-star rating.

A little problem is the time and the animal levels, but it's still very beautiful. Also, is the heroine a mermaid?

It's good, but can you confirm whether the heroine is the mermaid, someone else, or there is no heroine? I hope it won't be a teacher-student romance.

Is the heroine a mermaid? I feel pretty good👌🏻

Not bad, a bit interesting. Come on.

The writing is very good

The content is exciting! The writing is very good! I love so much! But it just stopped updating!

It's super interesting. Don't stop updating it. Otherwise, you'll have a good harvest if you designate the book. If you have book friends, don't support the book. Make the author a rebel ᕙ( ͡◉ ͜ ʖ ͡◉)ᕗ

Wonderful, wonderful, too wonderful. I won't comment much below, but I must pile up the good reviews.

It looks good and the content is very logical.

Ok ok ok

The quality is already very good.

I like the character design, nice looking

Ask the author to live a little longer

All I can say is delicious.