Cultivation of Immortality: the Evil Servant Starts the Game and Escapes into the Sect to Work as a Handyman.

It is very well written and can score at least 9.5 Points. Especially many of the psychological activities are very real. It is a high-quality novel with an online IQ. Come on. If only there were 6 million words. Unfortunately, there are only about 70 chapters so far, so I finished them in one go.

Come on, look forward to it, it is well written. I have my own personal opinion. Both the plot and the characterization of the characters are good. However, the plot changes later on and it becomes very strange and dragged out. The characters also fall apart. I think the author may not have prepared the outline well, or the outline is deviated from the actual direction of the novel. I suggest you refer to other novels about cultivating immortals. Come on, I am also preparing to write a novel. Finally, coding is not easy, so I give you five stars. I hope the author becomes popular [laughs]

The best fairy tale novel I have read in recent years! The world view is grand but logically self-consistent. The plot, characters, and writing are all excellent. It contains both the enthusiasm of youth and the sadness of the ups and downs of the fairyland. After reading it, I feel empty in my heart, and my mind is filled with the world of rivers and lakes and fairy mountains in the book. It has great stamina!

The writing style of this book is among the best in Tomato. The plots are interlocking, the arrangements are clear, and the outline is rigorous. It is a rare good book. Even if you are under the flow of ordinary people, you can still be ranked high. The first is Mortal Cultivation, the second is Dao Zheng Zheng, this book can be ranked third in my heart. I think Mortal Flow is not about how miserable the beginning is, but about being able to keep one's heart and move forward even in a situation where one cannot choose. When facing uncontrollable people, things, and environments, we must first look for rules and find our own way.

At present, after reading 300,000 words, the score is low. It should be above 9 points. The plot and characters are all very reasonable, not brainless or weird. The language is concise and clear but not obscure, and the plot transitions are ups and downs but not blunt. Next, it's worth reading. The more careful the details are, the faster the plot develops. A common problem among writers on the Internet is that they are afraid that no one will read it, and they are also afraid that someone will read it. They finish writing too quickly. In fact, there is no need to do it. They just finish writing after finishing it. If you write a book well, readers will naturally pay attention to the author and pursue the next book. Never write just for the sake of writing, as it will only lower your writing level.

To be honest, it's quite good-looking. For me, at the moment, maybe the only thing I can complain about is that in the future, I will definitely build foundations all over the place, and I guess the same goes for Jindan, but it doesn't matter, as long as the story is interesting! There are also a lot of slow-burning and extremely difficult to build foundations, but the stories are average. So the core thing is whether the story is interesting. No matter how you write an uninteresting story, it will be ruined! No matter how you write a good story, it's always top notch! 5 Star praise!

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist has pure morals and zero humanity. Without any ability to empathize, Gu Yue Fang Yuan is a kind person compared to the protagonist [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] 1 star is for the protagonist, and five stars is for the author's writing style [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's quite interesting. I've been reading novels for more than ten years. This man who cultivates immortality is like a rational man in science and engineering. He is decisive in doing things and the plot is relatively coherent. It's quite interesting. The score is definitely low. I think the actual score should be higher than 9 points.

It's a very nice novel, with a good subject matter. The details of each character are in place, and there are no sloppy remarks. I give the author a thumbs up [smile]. I hope the author will live forever and produce many excellent works.

After reading the reviews, everyone's opinions on this book are very different, but I think it's a new formula. I've read too many cool novels, and it's really rare to see such growth from a young character. The protagonist is also cautious in doing things, and everything happens very logically. Everyone is very realistic, and many things need to be scrutinized to understand the author's logic behind it. The author really thought a lot about it This is a point that many people are debating. Let me give you my opinion. 1. He didn't grab the token to ascend to immortality. He was from another world. He wanted to stay together for warmth in this dangerous world. 2 Stealing spiritual stones, why doesn't the Immortal Sect check the storage bag? This has something to do with personal privacy. Everyone has their own secrets. If there is no conclusive evidence, why check? It will cause public outrage, such as killing parents. 3 Even though the Law Enforcement Hall thinks Li Guo is suspicious, he will not kill him, but he has his own principles, otherwise he cannot be a fair Law Enforcement Hall leader. The author has established the protagonist as a person who is cautious, humane, smart and courageous. Once he is sure that something can be done, he will take action boldly. It reminds me of when I was driving a battery-powered car. No one in front of me had a car, and I was the largest size, while others drove slowly in the medium size [laughs]

Kill the master at the beginning and escape with his wife to cultivate immortality. Hidden clumsiness, inner beauty, simple face and sinister heart, just want to find a future and fly out of the big world.

I am a bookworm of 20 years This book is very charming, both in terms of characters and timeline. There are not so many mindless characters, and every character is vividly created. This novel can be called a classic, and the author put his heart into it.

The plot is very good, well written, and very engaging to watch.

Not bad, I hope it can maintain the current quality The second level of Qi training is against the foundation stage. This setting is a bit reluctant.

It looks good, but there are too few, and it is too slow to grow. Let it fatten up for a hundred chapters before killing it.

Zhao Ling'er opened her eyes, and what she saw was a tall figure with green smoke curling up. In front of him was the word "Heaven and Earth" enshrined. Juggernaut? Zhao Ling'er immediately understood his identity. Realizing that Zhao Ling'er had woken up, the Sword Master slowly turned around and looked at her calmly. Under the gaze, Zhao Ling'er trembled and blurted out uncontrollably: "Dad?" Zhao Ling'er's face turned red as she shouted "Dad". She was caught by the Sword Master, and her mind kept swirling with the various instructions from the Demon Locking Tower and Xiao Bai. Zhao Ling'er has not experienced the emotional ups and downs with Li Xiaoyao. She is at an innocent age, so she is not willing to be locked up in the Demon Locking Tower alone. She has not entered Taoism. Therefore, when I first woke up and saw the lustless Juggernaut, I felt nervous and really recognized my father. What a shame! So embarrassing! The sword master was ready with a lot of pretentious rhetoric, but he was forced to hold it back when Zhao Ling'er said "Dad". All rhythms were disrupted! I can't accept this! After enlightenment, he was almost natural and had no desires. This time he interfered with Zhao Ling'er because he had selfish motives and wanted to help Qing'er's daughter survive the disaster. What does this sudden pronouncement of "Dad" mean? Although he and Qing'er had worshiped heaven and earth, he ran away during the bridal chamber! Didn't even touch her! Qing'er is quiet and generous, how could the daughter she gave birth to have such a personality? Nanzhao Kingdom. Li Mu was drinking tea. When he received the message from Zhao Ling'er, he spit out all the tea in one mouthful and burst into tears. This was a great cry for daddy! "Ling'er, let yourself go! Can you bear to let your child be born in the Demon Locking Tower?" Li Mu's answer always points directly to people's hearts. 1 Women are weak by nature, but mothers are strong. He firmly believes that a woman can make the best decision for her children. Unlike Miao Zhuang, who was hesitant and hesitant, Li Mu never thought it was too big a deal to watch the excitement. The Sword Master could not kill Nuwa's descendants. Subsequently, Zhao Ling'er entered the Demon Locking Tower regardless of whether it was closed or not, and he had follow-up operations. The only regret that Li Mu felt was that he couldn't see Zhao Ling'er and the Sword Master fighting with his own eyes. I'm not your father. Why did you catch me? In the courtyard, Shushan disciples stood in two rows, and under Zhao Ling'er's surprised eyes, they recited "The Sutra of Immortal Way to Save Humans" neatly: "The human way is vast, the immortal way is vast, and the ghost way is happy; when you are born, the immortal way is precious to be born, and the ghost way is precious to die; the immortal way always brings good luck, and the ghost way always brings misfortune..." The sound of chanting made Zhao Ling'er have a splitting headache. She shook her head to wake herself up a little. Facing many mountain disciples, she explained softly: "Ling'er is not a demon, Ling'er is a descendant of Nuwa." No need to say more, show your true self. "The Sword Master scolded lightly, drew a Eight Diagrams diagram in the air, and pointed it at Zhao Ling'er. The Bagua diagram slowly fell. The human body Zhao Ling'er exchanged for three years of his life turned into a snake's tail in an instant. "Monster! " "She really is a monster! ... Seeing the snake's tail, the Shushan disciples immediately panicked. The sword master closed his eyes and waved his hand: "Sealed in the Demon Locking Tower, and will not be allowed to return to the human world again." "Dad, you can't do this? Have you forgotten my mother? You can't harm me and the baby for your own selfish desires! " Dad? The Shushan disciples who were about to move stopped and looked at their leader with strange eyes. There is a story in this! "Dad, do you have the heart to let my child be born in the Demon Locking Tower? She is your granddaughter! " There is a first time for everything. Zhao Ling'er simply regarded herself as a puppet and said whatever she received. For the sake of her children, she must not enter the Demon Locking Tower. The Sword Master said with a dark face: "The evil words are confusing the crowd. Shushan disciples obeyed the order and quickly locked her up in the Demon Locking Tower. " "Dad, do you still remember Qing'er, who worshiped Heaven and Earth with you? You abandoned your mother for your own selfish purposes, and you want to imprison her daughter and granddaughter in the Demon Locking Tower. Is the leader of Shushan really that important in your heart? " The Sword Master's hands behind his back couldn't stop trembling. He was about to be unable to keep his Taoist heart. He suddenly felt that he had made a wrong move by detaining Zhao Ling'er. Didn't Qing'er enter the Tao under his guidance? What on earth did she say to the child? The sword master noticed Zhao Ling'er's wagging fingers. He recognized the magic thread. Ling'er was taken away by him. It was normal for someone to use a thread to find her. He did not stop her. The Sword Master didn't know that a thread could be used to deliver messages accurately, otherwise, he would definitely regret it. (Morse code) "Dad, please, don't imprison Ling'er in the Demon Locking Tower. Ling'er doesn't want her child to be born in the lonely Demon Locking Tower. "After receiving this message from Li Mu, Zhao Ling'er spoke it out without any psychological barriers, and her voice was full of emotion. "Dad, do you dare to swear to God that Ling'er is really a monster? If so, please kill Ling'er on the spot. Ling'er will never resist. If he could die in his father's hands, Ling'er would have no complaints. Otherwise, if he entered the Demon Locking Tower, Ling'er would commit suicide and never let the child be born and suffer the pain of imprisonment. " The sword master frowned and said simply: "Ling'er, I let you enter the Demon Locking Tower to protect you, and please stop screaming, I am not your father, your father is the Witch King. " Zhao Ling'er smiled sweetly, and Li Mu no longer needed to teach her: "Dad, Ling'er won't enter the Demon Locking Tower. Dad is a world-famous swordsman. Even if Ling'er doesn't enter the Demon Locking Tower, dad can protect me, right? " The Sword Master's heart trembled at the sound of "Dad", and he couldn't help scolding: "Zhao Ling'er, I am not your father, you are a descendant of Nuwa, please be careful. " Although Zhao Ling'er is suspected to be the daughter of the leader, Shushan disciples are still wary of her snake tail. After all, their job is to eliminate demons and defend the Tao. Now that they heard that the Sword Master personally admitted that Zhao Ling'er was a descendant of Nuwa, their tangled hearts were relieved. Nuwa was a god, and they still had this common sense. Zhao Ling'er said obediently: "I know, dad!" "..." The sword master clenched his fists fiercely and thought silently in his heart, there is no way for blessings and misfortunes, only people call it upon themselves. You should not go down the mountain selfishly today! !

I really like this storyline, and I also like the author's narrative style, but it's a bit impatient that it's still being serialized. I'll add it to the bookshelf first. I'll check back with you in a few days. The author will try his best to update it.

This book is very well written, why does it have such a low score? It shouldn't be! I have really been reading this article in one breath. I don't feel tired, I just look forward to what Li Guo will do next! In recent years, there are really few articles that make me look forward to it so much! There are only a few of them, and they are not finished yet, so I am eagerly waiting for newer works! Indeed, beautiful! A rare fine novel!

It's good-looking, not a brainless novel, and the storyline is good.

Well written and unique. It's a little more distinctive than other traditional fantasy. It's just like the protagonist's personality is a bit unstable. Ingratitude is the norm. But overall. Still very nice. I finished reading it in one sitting for three days in a row. I hope the author will keep updating. Updated to 10,000 words. I am looking forward to it. The rating should not be only 7. Write 10,000 Words More should have a rating of at least 8.8.

The protagonist is very realistic and rational. He is not like the Spring Autumn Cicada like Fang Yuan, but he can manage every step of the way, neither succumbing to power nor his own talent. I personally think this book is worth reading

It's better than most novels about cultivating immortals.

It looks good, and the author writes it well, but some of the foreshadowings have not been recycled. For example, there was a family chasing pig's feet and a storage bag to save the younger brother. Later, the fourth sister was tied up by the pig's feet. After being kept alive for a month, the characters in this plot never appeared again. Also, Xiao Tao and Liu Yan don't have much of a role in the back. The writing style is what I like. Pig's feet are not brainless Long Aotian. I like the fact that there is no system. After reading so many chapters, I don't know what the snake is for. I just know the mascot. I don't know when it will feel better.

Hahaha, I just felt different after reading Chapter 8. Just read them all and you won't say anything after reading them.

These fantasy novels are usually very beautiful in the first half, but the second half becomes more complicated and verbose, making people more tired as they read. As for this novel, I've read it so far. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is unhurried and leisurely.

The writing is smooth and stunning, the narrative rhythm is just right, the characters are flesh-and-blood, the plot twists are reasonable, and every detail is hidden in ingenuity. It truly makes people immersed in reading. Highly recommended!

The plot is compact and it's a book that you can read in one sitting. It's worth reading, but it's just a bit unreadable. I hope there will be more updates.

The introduction has nothing to do with the story line. The protagonist slowly begins to reason about the eldest lady. It is true that the protagonist has a story line of narrow escape from death wherever he goes. It is so unlucky. This book can be read at a glance and the plot is quite eye-catching.

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Good luck, turn it in honestly. This is too ten: a pity. Dragon blood and snakes can make snakes mutate and become extremely powerful. They can also be used as spies to gain unlimited resources. Good foreshadowing, written in a very servant-like manner,