Resident Evil: My Girlfriend Claire

I like the author's framework very much, but I would like to make a few suggestions. First of all, this kind of literary professional rigor that is close to reality or game-like is necessary. Take the Honor of Kings that I have played. For example, if you write about Honor of Kings as a professional game, you can use Yang Jian to solo kill and counter-kill any hero of any professional player, but the prerequisite is that you want the audience to know why you are so powerful. In the same way, it is unreasonable for you to say that the protagonist can deal the same or even higher damage as a gun after practicing boxing. This is especially obvious in the Tyrant. His performance is not in line with his identity, and the heroine in that paragraph is a bit of a drag. Leon is awake but offline throughout the whole process. In the end, even if you say that the protagonist's reflexes are far better than ordinary people due to his physical fitness due to time travel, and Claire and the Tyrant become the protagonist's cover during the chase, and Leon comes to the rescue in the end, do you think it will be better? Because this is also a game adaptation. Although I have never played the game, but taking Honor of Kings as an example, I am very, very willing to see FIL (a professional player) shine again when the protagonist encounters difficulties.

What the author has written so far is pretty good. I hope the author can keep writing.

I just finished reading a few chapters, so I went to Steam and put 234 into the database at once. I just finished the Li Ang line today. It took six hours, a full six hours, and I stayed up late to finish it. I felt like I was going to die 🙂

Come on, author, since they focus on the plot of Biochemical 2, will Shirley also appear as the little heroine? After all, in Biochemical 2, Shirley can be regarded as the second female lead in Claire's line. Besides Claire, Shirley has the most scenes, and I think Shirley is really good. Let the protagonist and Claire adopt Shirley, and raise Shirley as a sister. I think it's good for a family of three

Advantages: Some of the environments and details are well drawn, and overall the changes are pretty good from the perspective of adaptation. Disadvantages: There is a tendency to read the details of the overall story of the biochemical series (for example, there is no story about Leon going to the police station late because of a broken relationship), or it may be to serve the plot, for example, Marvin knew about Chris's trip (the first version of the remake of Life 2, Claire and Marvin had a conversation about Chris's trip to Europe, and Marvin knew about it), but no one asked, so he insisted on going to the office. It's a bit watery or the author doesn't know this, and the original work is not careful enough. The details are not appropriate enough. For example, the tyrant's punches can be described in at least 50 words (I counted them). Also, does the protagonist know that the plot and response are not detailed or should be said to be irrational? And every time you fight a monster, it's a bit repetitive and awkward to go through the Xingyiquan and move concepts? I can understand fighting a tyrant, after all, there are steel-backed beasts, but it is not strange. However, there are too many modifiers in the description of the fight, and the fight is obviously not very stylish. It does have a strange feeling of hard modification. I hope it can be concise and have more battle logic. I generally support the story and look forward to its later development.

There are too few people writing about this subject, I hope they can stick to it 😘

Come on author, affirmation from a biochemical fan 😘😘😘 (Looking forward to biochemical 9 next year, the old protagonist group will return to Raccoon City)

Why was it removed from the shelves? It was well written.

Read it carefully, it's very good!

It's high quality. Even someone like me who doesn't know much about biohazard can watch it. Good luck to the author. It's a good food