Journey to the West, I Am the Snake Lord at Lishan Gate

Thank you to the readers who like this book. The story of Daqing and Erqing was quoted in the front of this book because I thought it was too wordy, so I overturned, deleted, and rewritten it. The rewritten chapters were not put in much effort. I am very sorry. But the rest of the book was written with care. I hope you all like it. If you find any problems or illogical logic, please correct me. I will revise it in time. If you have any good suggestions, you can also give me your suggestions. I revised it all night and followed the suggestions. I revised a lot of the previous chapters.

The writing is very good, and it has the feel of a semi-white text. It is very comfortable to calm down and kill time. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it.

It's okay, but it feels like the upgrade is a bit fast. The protagonist in the part where he meets the Great Sage is just a Golden Immortal, but it turns out that he is too good after just a few decades. You must know that the previous part of the Earth Immortal ascending to the Heavenly Immortal took nearly a period of time. Even if he gets a gift from Donghua, Donghua is left with regrets. If that trace of his origin can help the protagonist cross from the Heavenly Immortal to the Xuanxian to the late Golden Immortal, it will be good. How can there be any spare energy?

Although it is a White Snake fanfic, it takes a different approach and gives a different journey to the west. The overall purpose is to use the Great Tribulation to disrupt the practice layout, increase one's own foundation, or obtain more resources, and be promoted faster, instead of directly treating the saint who can predict the universe with one thought as a fool.

It was very well written, but the final chapter ended a little hastily. Although I can't say that the ending was abrupt, it must have been because the author was delayed by other things and still chose a very nice chapter.

These five stars are for the author to update 10,000 per day. The content of the story is a bit mundane, the context is coherent and smooth, and it doesn't make muddy remarks.

It looks good, but it seems that Baymax is not the Taoist monk I thought [face covering] is a bit tasteless.

Will there be another heroine of all realms, Bai Suzhen, Daqing and Erqing start and then journey to the west?

It's really good. I haven't seen an article like this in a long time.

I don't know if it will be a single heroine or multiple heroines!

Very good, one of the few fine products

Very well written, can look forward to it

Very good, good-looking

It looks good. It's very new soon.

Very well written, keep it up. .

It's good. Come on, don't stop.

It's okay, hehe

It looks so good, but it's been so long, why haven't I become a Taoist couple with White Snake?

The author's actual identity is not simple. He speaks clearly and has a deep understanding of various classics.

Tomato is a good book. I hope it won't crash later. I will write slowly and my grades will not be bad.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, it's long-lasting, and it's really good. A few strokes convey the true feelings of the book, but it's a bit short.

It's well written and has literary talent. It's the type I like.

It is very comfortable to read, not lengthy, not impetuous like most novels, and non-toxic.

At first, I thought the background was White Snake, but I didn't expect it to be Journey to the West. The rhythm was quite slow, like a daily fairy tale.

Don't do it! Bai Suzhen won't be the heroine, right? ? ?

Nowadays, it is rare to encounter a better-written tomato novel. It's not that everything was fine in the early and middle stages. Why does it feel so empty in the later stages? I always feel familiar, I feel like I have seen it before.

The writing skills are solid, I hope the rating will be higher so that more book lovers can read it.

Come on, come on, come on! Okay, send a few more.

Very good, excellent writing.

It would be nice to have more books like this