
A Girl with Five Spiritual Roots Bravely Enters the World of Immortality
五灵根少女勇闯修仙界
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 720k Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
3Reads
286Chapters
2Listens
24.7kReads · all time





The description is pretty good. However, you mainly write stories. The descriptions are too rhetorically modified, making them look like classical Chinese, which affects the ability to read and understand the stories. Cut back on your rhetorical skills. It should have been a good story, but the various rhetorical descriptions made it really difficult to continue reading. I hope readers who are more interested in rhetoric will appreciate it. I'll leave first. The four stars are because your rhetoric is very good. If it were an 800-word essay with 60 points, I could give you 55 points, but a long novel is too tiring.