King of Nether Alphas

Although sometimes my toes are so awkward that I can dig out three rooms and one living room, but the idea is very good, Shura Field is very cleverly written, and the updates are infinitely more diligent than that of Little Money Fans. There are really very few Internet kings in ABO, so I still give it 5 stars.

It's good to read. It felt a bit like a Mary Sue at first. In the latest chapters, the heroine has started to have her own consciousness and started to pursue an equal relationship. I hope it can be written better in the future. I feel that the next step is the key.

What a life saver! ! My heart beats faster and my breathing quickens! ! My ability to purify smog surpasses that of tropical rainforests! ! I will be the new lungs of the earth! ! I turned the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau into a basin with a plop! ! Cry until the South-to-North Water Diversion Project is no longer needed! ! The wind power generated is supplied to people around the world.

The writing style is much better than what I was prepared for at the beginning. It is rare to write about high school students, and it is a very interesting subject matter. Although the characters are inevitably OOC, it is much better. It is a well-written heartthrob novel.

The plot is interesting and the content is novel

The setting is interesting, but the writing style is much less than the previous one. I have been following it for the past two days. Maybe the author can suddenly add twenty chapters ( What can I say? I feel that the heroine's character is a bit contradictory (sometimes calm and sometimes difficult to deal with physical impulses). As a persona, she is a decent and rational manager, but she did not comfort and communicate with Feng after being marked. I feel that this is a bug in the character, and the character As the person in charge at the group level, he is so vigorous and resolute in his work, but in actual physical control, he looks like a weak novice who cannot take care of himself. He has always relied on his two brothers, which gave me a feeling that the heroine is out of control and in control. Life and work are completely designed by two people. There are also some contradictions in the emotional line. The male protagonist's liking is a bit abrupt (basically a combination of physical control and seeing that the female protagonist is a strong O), and even more descriptions give me the feeling that the male protagonist does not love the female protagonist. It is purely the possessiveness aroused by male competition... The female protagonist's emotional line is relatively flat. For example, it was mentioned before that you need to know your match well. In fact, until the latest chapter, they are using that group of people as guinea pigs, and it is difficult to see obvious emotional changes. A small suggestion is that if you want to write a female protagonist who is strong, calm, and rational (this characteristic is not easy to be tempted), then you should not write about disrespectful behavior towards women when it comes to shaping the male protagonist (such as the latest few photos of the male protagonist forcing a kiss), because the premise of establishing the female protagonist's character implies that the female protagonist has at least obvious autonomy. Sex, under such a premise, one has to write the true character behind the male protagonist's debauchery with strong writing skills, and create a plot like falling in love with the soul in the veil, or it will be difficult to advance the emotional line... Anyway, so far I have not seen anything worthy of the female protagonist's liking, only a bunch of physiologically controlled A [Petrified] [Petrified]

Really great! ! ! ! Waiting for updates every day [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] One chapter a day is really not enough! ! I want to wait for more points to read, but every time I see the update mark, I click in [crying]

Super pretty (♥∀♥) I like it (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

🤤His haha directly Super beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Good looking (✧∀✧) Author, please come on ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Teacher, teacher, besides the male protagonists on the list, how many others are there?

It's okay, but I don't think it's exciting enough.

It's very interesting. I came here from the author's previous book! [Sending Hearts]

Nice and interesting article, An An is very cute

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've seen this type of novel. The author is so awesome [blowing kiss]

It's nice to watch, very novel setting, I like it, more updates, twenty chapters a day [snickering] [smirking]