Ninth Corona

It's quite sad in the beginning, but it's very artistic, the writing is good, and the logic is reasonable. Why does this elder of the elves hate humans so much? It feels like there's a hidden story, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the plot.

I only read the beginning, and I feel it is very well written. This is a true portrayal of an ordinary person traveling to another world without any system or cheats. This is the real other world that is cold, cruel, and full of villains. In fact, there is nothing wrong with any of them, but they have different positions and different perspectives from the other side.

There are few good books in Tomato. Currently, this is the only one in Tomato and The God of Drama that I can follow. I don't quite understand the shortcomings mentioned by other negative reviews. But I also feel that there is a problem on the part of the author. He did not clarify the absence of harem and single male protagonist in time [laughing awkwardly]. But at least he will read the readers' comments and correct the problems, so I still feel that the score of 7.4 Is low.

In fact, as long as you can accept that the protagonist is not all smooth sailing, and keep watching, you will find it very interesting. It just feels a bit too overwhelming for the protagonist, but considering that the protagonist has not grown up, it is quite normal.

Nb is so powerful that it made me, a man in his 20s, cry.

The description is beautiful and full of children's unique romantic color and imagination. The emotions are sincere. From the third chapter onwards, the reader's heart has been ups and downs with the plot. This is not only a Western fantasy novel, but also a masterpiece that combines fantasy color with realistic criticism! A novel tells about the origin of race, the distinction between good and evil, class, system and other philosophical theories!

It's beautiful, that's right! This probably won't be a double male protagonist, right? (Lin = Ling 0 I hope I'm wrong) Your brotherhood is just brotherhood, why do you describe it in such a way? I hope it won't be like the Patriarch of the Demonic Way who wrote about two people kissing each other.

"A secret about apple pie, pear blossoms, and life's first friends." I like this sentence

If you like reading dark stories, don't get involved. This book is a story about a perfect protagonist who survives in a dark world. The protagonist has both a bottom line and a means.

The narrative method of the grown-up male protagonist is still very clear, but the reason for helping others without hesitation is not enough, and it feels a bit forced and sensational. I prefer the academy chapter at the end, but unfortunately the elf chapter is too short. I don't understand what the author's outline is like. What's written in the back is a complete mess. The fox was written with great effort in the front. In the ghost chapter, the fox is kicked out. Instead, the little prince returns to the plot. Moreover, the person who invites the fox to join the team is actually the sword master instead of the protagonist. The fox sees the ghost in the back. The person I'm hugging is also the Sword Master. If you don't want to fire the fox cp, don't bother writing it. Also, can the gender of the little prince be put on the agenda quickly? Don't let the protagonist know, at least let us know. He cries at every turn, pulls his clothes and sleeps in the same bed. I'm not from Chengdu, so it's really disgusting [laughter]

It's a very good book, with solid and simple content and strong emotions. It's a very orthodox Western fantasy novel. The writing style is really, really good, well-organized. Although sometimes the author's hallucinations are a little serious, and words like male protagonist occasionally appear, the flaws are not concealed. I don't know if there will be a female protagonist at the moment, and I really don't hope there will be one. After all, in such a miserable and painful garbage world, eternal love is still too illusory.

The book is okay. If you want to read it, I recommend it. If you like the protagonist being imprisoned and whipped, you can read the previous content [laughs] [laughs] Although the protagonist here takes a route similar to Good Boy, it is still okay. But maybe our protagonist is a human. Faced with elves and humans, and imprisoned and spurred, we prefer elves. Although we were imprisoned and spurred by elves at the beginning, elves (partly) are not good things. I just don't know if there will be revenge in the future, but if there is revenge, the two childhood sweethearts may not be childhood sweethearts [laughs][laughs]

The protagonist has a certain amount of courage and is a relatively positive phenomenon. He loves taking risks, which is the image of most protagonists. Until the later updates, life begins to be stable. In short, it meets the standards of most normal novels. It has a lot of emotional descriptions, life and battle descriptions are taken into account, and the relationships between people are relatively clear. The early stage is quite cruel, mainly because the protagonist is too weak in the early stage and has no backing. There are unreasonable behaviors, not too many, and more are mistakes on the protagonist's growth. It can be seen that the updates are relatively stable. The protagonist's growth rate is relatively slow, and it is not a fast-paced article. There are more depictions of growth.

Conferred God, the best, that sentence "so tired" is the best, that sentence "Mom" is truly made a God.

The Great Expedition begins! Kill the aliens! Burn the heretics! Long live humanity!

Can this be 7.4? To be honest, the writing is better than most of Tomato's fantasy novels, and the plot is not a cookie-cutter routine. The emotions are detailed and full, and the characters are well established. It's just a little bit sharp, but I can't stop reading. It's so good 😄I love reading it😄

Howl look. The protagonist is really one of the few people with the trait of "kindness" in Tomato's current environment. It is not the kind of kindness that is seen on the street, but the kind of kindness that will sacrifice everything for the sake of emotion in the true sense. Although I hope that the protagonist should treat everything around him rationally and maximize the use of those elves, but after carefully thinking about the world view portrayed by the author, I suddenly feel that it is impossible for the protagonist to be rational in that environment. After all, Lin feels very emotional, and because of the experience of being an orphan, his emotions are very reasonable ( Maybe it's because I haven't seen enough and can't detect the strange phenomena), I just feel that the psychology of people in this environment is partially distorted, but I don't feel that Lin has any major psychological problems (it seems that in the current era, unconditional giving seems to be a kind of mental illness?), In short, the protagonist's character is very good. The author also writes very well. [Full] [Full] [Full] [Full] [Full]

The world kissed me with pain, but I responded with songs. Very good, keep up the good work. There are still some flaws, and I hope they can be polished in more detail. There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the plot needs deeper thinking.

I'll give it four stars. I'll give it my own opinion after reading a few pictures. The protagonist is a true time traveler with no system or plug-ins. He is very kind and kind enough to save those elves at all costs. However, this is also a point that I cannot sympathize with. The protagonist's inhuman physique and perseverance surprised me. If it were the body of an eight-year-old child, after experiencing a series of tortures, it would soon start to develop a high fever and become dehydrated and on the verge of death (in fact, it is more realistic that he should die before it is over), but the protagonist seems to be just weak? Also, from the beginning to the part I watched, the protagonist never seemed to think about the consequences of doing this. Saving people is good, but I prefer the protagonist to do these things when he is confident. Of course, this is a situation where the environment is limited and the time is short, so I hope that the subsequent plot will make the protagonist tougher. After all, strong strength is always his retreat. Selfish ps: Actually, I don't really want the protagonist to have any close contact with the elves in the future. The reason may be because I am a bit obsessed with the protagonist. I always feel that everything I experienced in the elves can be the reason for the protagonist to stay away, even if it is because of "The Sheep is Coming"

Read Chapter 22, so sweet kids This protagonist deserves to be the protagonist This article is so sweet hahaha

Not everyone can survive this, the protagonist is simply a legendary kill king in the early stage

Author, you know what I want to say, sweet, so sweet, I really want to thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Author, I beg you, give Yura and Ron a good ending, can you [cry]

It's quite good to watch. The early ordeals made me heart-wrenched. The opening chapter caught my attention and made me want to continue reading. It's good and different.

The writing is very good and gives me a feeling like I used to read Yilin Youth Magazine. The first two volumes were all about practice, but the third volume really let me write freely. It's rare to see such a bold plot in Tomato.

It looks good, but the author loves to torture the protagonist (Also, the positioning is confusing. In the introduction, it was a single male protagonist, but some comments said that it was a single female protagonist, but it was written like a double male protagonist. I gave it up for now and will look at it when the positioning is clear)

The writing is very good, by far the best I have ever seen. It is neat and elegant, and reads smoothly and naturally. The plot is average, but the appeal and foil created by the writing are unique.

Hahahaha, so... So... Good-looking! To be honest, coming to Tomato is really a waste of talent.

I like it. It has Western magic, reason, and growth. It meets all my expectations. It is one of my favorite books in Tomato, but I don't know why it is not popular. Maybe it is not "cool" enough and does not meet the needs of contemporary readers, but it is still a good book. I love it firmly, and I am also grateful to its author. Thank you very much.

It's so beautiful, the writing is very real, and the emotions are very rich, especially his short-term beauty, freedom and yearning, etc. I really long for it [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][like]

It's a very good novel about another world. The emotional portrayal of the characters is excellent. Personally, I feel that some of the rhetorical descriptions are very repetitive. As I read it, I felt a sense of immediacy [face covering], but it does not hinder the overall impression [like] Impressionism, do you understand? [Pauses face] I might really have to pay you to read this novel.