After Quitting the Game, I Became the Bai Yueguang of All Npcs.

It was pushed to the home page. It took me two days to read it. It's great! The author is very stable, he must not be a new writer? The cool points are very dense, and the dungeons are also arranged very closely. The characters are used very well. There are no idle words, it is all foreshadowing and foreshadowing. The writing is smooth, and the scene narration makes me empathize. The character design and selection, the concept and design of the dungeons are very interesting and very tense. All in all, the quality is very high, which is rare on Tomato, but the reading experience seems tiring at the moment. My personal summary is that the hospital copy is a bit long, and the plot is too dense, and there is not much space to adjust the atmosphere. The rhythm is a bit heavy, and I read it in one breath. Too much information received at once is tiring - so it is not a big problem. If you follow up, this dense rhythm is fine, and this quality will continue until the end. The author is great [shy] The heroine is a pure heroine in the game, and she is also an independent career woman outside the game. She does not have breasts, so it is very comfortable to watch - female readers can watch it with confidence [Blow Kiss] After being short of books for more than half a year, I finally read a new book, great 🥳 I can't stand the relationship line with the male protagonist. Whoever likes the ignorance of the male protagonist who pretends to be dead at a critical moment can eat it. I really feel sick for the female protagonist.

The writing is very good and very novel, but it's just not my cup of tea [face covering] It was originally written for the setting of Neptune and Succubus, but it ended up being a suspenseful micro-horror dungeon stream? I couldn't stand the large copy of Mental Hospital. It's too long, and the style of the drama is slightly different from the somewhat funny writing style. I originally wanted to read it quickly, but after reading it for a long time, I realized that there are still dozens of chapters before the copy can be released. [I almost cried] Forget it, I won't force it, but if you like this style, I still recommend it.

It is good-looking, not bad, and the writing is also good. When you watch the temple plot, it can really bring you an exciting and suspenseful atmosphere. The mother and ex-boyfriend who were not good to the heroine were soon offline. The author is very good to the heroine's baby and does not make readers angry at all. The most enjoyable thing is that the heroine is beautiful, but she is a warrior [Punch Out] Help, the mental hospital copy is too long [Petrified] How do you feel when you see the infinite flow in the back?

It's amazing that all the male protagonists have slipped away from my cerebral cortex, leaving only the female protagonist... I can only say that she is a very charming female protagonist, please update soon!

I'm not planning to follow up on the follow-up of Beginning and Ending at the moment. At the beginning, the content is very novel and makes people want to read it. Even though the heroine has some shortcomings in the real world, it generally doesn't have much impact on the content of the article. She also has her own small ideas in some concepts. But I personally think that when I went to the Madhouse dungeon, the content was too long, and the writing was not as smooth as before, and it didn't make people's eyes brighter, so I just skipped through it. If I have the chance, I will come back and read it again. I would like to thank the author for letting me discover a book with novel content. It is getting better and better [Sending my heart]

The game part is really exciting, the imagination is big, the writing is very touching, and the CP is quite easy to master. Anyway, it is just a collection of illustrations. There are relatively few parts outside the game. In fact, I prefer not to form a cp. Maybe the ones in the game are all men with statistics, who are better in all aspects and respect women. The one outside the game only looks good and feels very tasteless in his work. I hope the mullet is beautiful alone. Here is a quote from a passage that I like very much—— ※Your unbridled laughter instantly attracted the attention of people around you. Some people envy you for being unscrupulous and doing whatever you want; some people hate you for being so beautiful and being too showy; some people are intoxicated by your smile and can't extricate themselves, and have a different kind of emotion in their hearts. There were people in the dark who hurriedly took out their guns and cannons, recorded the scene, and secretly posted it online. But the flowers are there, always bright and bright, as warm as fire. She should be open to whatever others think, do, and desire.

Super good-looking. The heroine's character is very interesting. I like it very much. 😘The plot setting is very novel. The connection between the game and real life is very good. Currently, it is mainly about the game plot. Of course our charming girl with an interesting soul must collect all the male protagonists. Each male protagonist has no submissive behavior and has his own personality. The author's description is super good. There is no lengthy description of appearance and scenes. There is no awkwardness at all. They are really beautiful ♥️♥️♥️

Whether in the heroine's real world or the heroine's game world, the heroine is a very charming person! The author is also very talented in writing. He describes almost all the characters that appear (rendered from various angles), so the group portraits feel rich and layered, and very realistic (?) Even if the game world and the real world are treated as two novels (a long reality novel, a short game novel), there is no sense of dissonance. The heroine is a relatively confident girl. She has enough confidence in herself and a strong enough psychological world, so she can calmly and madly fight against the setbacks in the real world! Of course, the heroine must also be very good in terms of modeling (appearance), so she can be strong enough to fight against this face-based world. This is similar to the real world we exist in. Beautiful people are always more tolerant. Of course, only beauty without brains cannot be completely liked. The heroine is probably such a "perfect person" with practical significance, imperfect but beautiful! Confident people are the most beautiful (that's what I want to be like)!

It's ok, it's ok, brothers, it's ok! It feels like I am playing a game, and I also want to play a text interactive game. However, I am one of those people who can only gg without saving the necessary options QAQ The characters in the illustrations (supporting male characters) that have appeared so far are also very good, and the female protagonist's baby is even more outstanding. What makes me most happy is that the original black heroine part is not too long. Otherwise, the typical and clichéd plot would be unpalatable (after all, even if I can skip it, I don't want the update result that I have been waiting for to stay with the black heroine) and it will be over after a while. I hope the heroine's baby can truly have her own "second life" I don't really want to write it here. I think book reviews are the right of readers. Regardless of gender, readers have the right to evaluate. A book review is just a book review, I give it to readers, thank you. Not here to stir up trouble. I can't understand why he came up to vent his anger out of nowhere. So stressful? Sure enough, it is still affected by the influence of the Internet, and normal sentences must be interpreted arbitrarily. --- But it feels like too many people now lack the ability to read patiently (as if they are illiterate - angry). I replied to so many words and none of them were read (it seemed like they were swallowed, it doesn't matter). Then I can't change my first comment. I don't think it's necessary to delete it. What do you think ´ᯅ`I am really at my wits end. I didn't want to make a fuss and didn't bother to reply, and no one took my reply seriously. It's better to just write it here and I'm sure no one will read it (you don't need to expand a lot, and the word limit is small. I really can't figure out why you have to argue with some people about things that have nothing to do with the book in the review of a book) and then review it by the way. Otherwise there would be no book review at all. --- Here is the evaluation of the book --- First of all, I haven't read this article for a long time, so it is a bit difficult to evaluate the recent performance, but I think it is OK in the early stage, but the middle stage (according to this number of chapters, it should be considered the middle stage) is also the reason why I gave up on one chapter. It is too difficult to distinguish between games and reality (I gave a high score in the previous book review because I said it felt like playing a game, but right. But in fact, it is not very influential, after all, it is about love?) I don't know about the later stage. I may change my evaluation after reading it. This is the point of contention in my reply. I only need to read the book review below, and I don't bother to segment it. Orz--- Secondly, as I mentioned earlier, I don't think it is necessary, but there may be people who have the patience to read it. My tone may not have been very good when I replied to the first person (?). I didn't wake up at that time, and I was a little emotional at the moment (maybe). Then there were people who didn't read the book review and didn't care about the book itself, but only cared about the sentence "brothers". As a result, I reread my review several times, and my mood was even more complicated and inexplicable. Well, I was also angry. (Those three words were criticized directly) I seemed to have explained it several times but no one cared. When I'm excited (I'm very excited when I read a good book), I rarely think about it when I type (it's not a confession or something that requires careful consideration). Is it difficult to understand the oral habit? This doesn't seem to be a particularly serious occasion, right? If a girl feels that the brothers are mistaking her for a boy by saying this, just pretend that she is not meant for you. In fact, I am not speaking to any gender group, I am simply speaking to readers who may read this book. (I just pick this part, and don't care about the book review or the book itself. I personally don't think I am a book friend. Is this a book enemy?) I feel that the shackles are getting heavier and heavier now. In the past, if the author wrote about a boy and wrote a boy, he would be criticized and changed to a boy (but in fact it can be used for both genders. They may know, but they should just turn on the "attack" mode). I personally think that the sexist changes are good, but the words that can be used together are completely harmless. Also, this is obviously a normal name for brothers, when did it become a curse? Isn't this inexplicable discrimination? How is this different from some of the messy people before? But it felt like they were a bunch of kids and they were too lazy to say anything. If you still don't understand the meaning of respect when you are so old, go back to elementary school and learn what respect is. --- To sum up, I am just a reader. It's not a male reader or a female reader, I'm just a reader here. Stop arguing about gender and read a book, okay? Brothers and sisters, adults! (If I keep doing this, plastic bags from Walmart will be fine, right? Orz) If there are still people who continue to attack inexplicably because of these three words, then I really have no choice. Orz, why do you have to identify yourself as a man? If you think your brother calls you a boy, then you are a girl. What do you think of this?

Very well written. Compared with the game part, the plot of the real part is slightly inferior. The heroine's encounter in reality at the beginning is not as enjoyable to read, and the interaction with the male protagonist is not as interesting as the interaction with the male character in the game. But there is no problem with this part of the plot itself, it just seems a bit monotonous against the backdrop of the game. The gameplay portion of the story is excellent. The plot is lighthearted, humorous and occasionally exciting. The author's writing skills are very good. Although the title and copywriting are as crude as most of Tomato's novels, the content and writing style are far above average. There are many kinds of plots in the game, and different types of short stories and dungeons are well written. If the author writes pure unlimited flow/unit articles/entertainment industry articles, they can be very interesting. (To be honest, many of the stories in Infinite Liuwen now are just nonsense and stacking elements. The author doesn't know what he wants to write.)

Why does such a beautiful and interesting book have such a low rating? I feel that some of the heroine's behaviors are very unreasonable, but they can bring novel experiences. Well, the author's writing is still very good. Moreover, something happened to him in this game, and it feels like various copies. Very interesting. Something supernatural. Suspenseful. It feels so rich in content, my mom. You, the author, are underestimating your talents by getting this score. Moreover, the reason why the heroine conquered the male protagonists is very normal. It is a very delicious novel, Yamiami.

The writing is very good, there is no abuse of women, it is a reflection on women's shoes. Whether women are friendly is not a matter of picking a few loopholes, but exists between the lines. What the author thinks, the readers can feel.

It's a really beautiful and novel theme! Ye Zhen is super charming and smart, and her relationship with the male protagonist is natural and not obtrusive at all. Every NPC is very three-dimensional and vivid. Pan Yueyuan is my favorite in Madoka's story and is also a particularly good name! Each plot has a natural transition and the copy design is very interesting! It's really a masterpiece. I don't know why it's not popular! After reading this, I really wish there was a game called Second Life that would allow me to experience Second Life... Hundreds of thousands of words written in one go are simply not enough! I will be waiting for when the teacher will write a new book...

The subject matter is novel, but the plot needs to be polished. The writing is not particularly good, but it is considered one of the better ones in Tomato. Regarding the guide, I can't read it too closely, but it's really fun to watch. The switching between reality and games is not particularly frequent, and there are relatively few comments in the live broadcast format. However, why is this place in the mental hospital so long? It's a bit like an infinite flow. After reading the first 30 chapters, it successfully gave me nightmares. I felt so happy when I read the previous chapters, but this place is too long... Please wait and read again...

The writing in the game is very interesting. You can get the brain circuit of the protagonist when playing the game. I am very curious about the several genres she played before being banned. The names are very interesting. But the real world really makes me feel a little bit stuck in my throat. I was falsely accused at the beginning, and my ex-boyfriend always jumped up and let it go. Sooner or later, I was slapped in the face. After the protagonist's lawsuit failed, he accepted his fate and continued to live broadcast. When he was targeted and did not take action, a game producer who was suspected to be the male protagonist came out. He pretended to be a classic hero who saves the beauty and hides his financial resources. The stereotypical persona. I know that it is normal for the protagonist to be talented and the company wants to sign the contract, but if it is written as if the producer is interested in the protagonist and only gives such good conditions, the interaction is too greasy. . Reality (suspected to be 1v1 with the producer) accounts for a large proportion and is in sharp contrast to the game world (collection of illustrations), and it was mentioned in the comment section that due to the relationship between the real producer, the game cannot be used freely. It is very uncomfortable for people like me who read the title and introduction of the book only for the game part. I left a comment and waited to see the ending to see the ending. Sisters who don't mind what I'm talking about, don't worry, the writing is relatively smooth, and the game world is worth a look.

In fact, I have seen it on the homepage several times, but I have never clicked in (now I am lucky that I did not miss it too early, otherwise it was tied all of a sudden, which is really uncomfortable ( ͡ ° ᴥ ͡ ° ʋ )) The subject matter is very fresh, the content of the game is also very special, and there are even independent large and small dungeons in it, which makes me want to play Second Life (sad) It seems that many people don't like the Mental Hospital book, but I think this large book and the Thousand Eyes Temple book are my two favorites. It seems that many people don't like the Mental Hospital book, but I think this large book and the Thousand Eyes Temple book are my two favorites. The hospital book has a lot of content and covers a lot of topics, so it's actually neither boring nor dull to watch. In addition, the author's surfing progress is very cutting-edge, and there are many funny stories. It's slightly scary but not so overwhelming that people won't dare to read it. On the contrary, it feels very exciting! I really like this book so much that I even started to think about what other ways or stories they would have if my favorite female protagonists of Infinite Flow came to this book. This is the first time I read a book and I have this kind of imagination. This book is really amazing. As for the problem of the male protagonist that many people are talking about, I actually think that the male protagonist's role is not particularly large, because more of the focus is on the game, and he only appears occasionally, and then gives the female protagonist a sense of existence by exploding gold coins () If you want to say that he appeared in time, but if you think about it carefully, you will find that the female protagonist can actually solve the crisis on her own or has already solved it. His appearance is at most a more perfect ending to things. I would think it would be a pity to abandon this book because it has a male protagonist. And in fact, the author also wrote the emotional line very sweetly... At least that's what I think ˊ:3... In fact, I have never been good at writing book reviews and I don't often write book reviews, but I loved this book so much that I reviewed it! I still hope that if this kind of copy also explores many issues and has many trendy memes, I highly recommend this book! Come on, author, don't give up [crying]!

The copy is good-looking, a little scary, and very interesting. Really bad review, there is CP in reality, and the plot is a bit uncomfortable about the hero saving the beauty. I feel that because this female protagonist game collects men, it is a bit timid. Good review because the copy is really wonderful.

I feel that the character of the protagonist is very real. I have seen the latest chapter and there is no dummy barrage or anything like that. The description feels more emotional. Advantages: The character creation is very interesting. The description of the scene and the character's psychology is very immersive. Occasionally there are some funny dialogues or inner monologues. It mainly tells the story of the protagonist as a live broadcast anchor in the game. What I like most is the heroine's behavior when facing her mother pretending to drink poison. There is no mention of the grinding. Afterwards, she endured a lot of scolding before clarifying. Disadvantages: It's not finished yet. It may not be good for those who like to watch it in one go; some of the protagonist's real-life incidents led to irrational fans complaining during the live broadcast. I still hope that lunch boxes can be distributed to the male and female partners soon (at least I don't feel comfortable watching it, but it is only a problem for some fans now) The above is my personal opinion. There may be some problems with the expression, but for now it is really worth watching (don't criticize me) I wanted to ask by the way if you have CP?

The heroine is super charming! The interactions with various types of male protagonists are also very interesting! So far, I don't think there are any duplicates! No matter what the emotional interaction is, the heroine is not highlighted at all. After watching it, you will only fall in love with the heroine! The author writes well and the writing style is smooth. After reading the introduction, I feel stable and at ease! It's hard work writing the article, please come on, author, I will accompany you until the end [love] [love] [love]

It's a very novel plot. Although the main world is a live broadcast, the "Second World" connects the small worlds of campus, entertainment circle, fantasy, mental hospital... Follow-up, etc., And the heroine is very smart, and her personality is neither a virgin nor extremely vicious. It feels very exciting. I'm too lazy to write reviews, but this novel really attracted me! Highly recommended! ! !

Now that I see it, I feel that the heroine is really an iron-blooded werewolf. She is charming, intelligent, strong-willed, and not romantically inclined. She is very attractive. [Admiration] The author's writing is so good and his writing skills are very solid. He must not be a newbie.

When I saw this title, I thought it was a mindless romance novel, or rather, the kind of novel that doesn't require any brainpower. It was meant to pass the time, and I was going to read a chapter or two, but I stopped reading if it didn't work. But in the end, I found that this book is really attractive to me. The first is that the setting is very interesting, and the second is that the characters are not just paper figures. I feel that it is like the game Invasion that I watched before in shaping the characters. In short, the characters are very full, and I like this book very much. Also, I feel that I very much agree with the author's positioning or feeling about this book in the last article,

⭐I hope this book will be seen]] It's a very good book. It's biased towards the heroine. There are also many 1v1 emotional dramas in stages. There are many styles of illustrations (strategic characters). It is a game format as a whole. It has options, bad endings, and Goldfinger (Black Business). Ye Zhen is very interesting and funny, but she is also very clever. She can often introduce some unexpected endings. This book also includes a small part of time and space overlap and content that breaks the fourth wall. The bloody background of the heroine Ye Zhen in the early stage was not written in the later stage. Maybe the author was forgetful in writing? It's suitable for those who don't have any brains and don't delve into it, who like game elements, big heroines, heartthrobs, and those who like to play life simulators. I like novelty very much, but this book is relatively easy to write and a little bit brain-burning (you won't burn it if you don't use your brains), but it unexpectedly made me very patient to read it. I hope it will be a hit! I will also support it if a physical book is published! (I'm not very good at writing book reviews, it may be a bit illogical)

Goodbye, Ye Zhen. I don't know why this book has so few readers, even though it is such a good book. At first, I was attracted by the topic of collecting NPCs to maximize their favorability. As I read further, I realized that the excitement of this book is far more than that. Forgive me for simply not being able to think of words to describe it. I think every character in it is deeply loved by me, their character, their emotions, their love... I haven't forgotten it after following this book for so long. I can still recall the way they revealed their true feelings () Although I feel like there are still a few questions that haven't been told to us, but it's enough to write it here. Ye Zhen is really a good person. After reading so many chapters, it seems that I have experienced so many things with her, and I can also see her growth. I am really reluctant to let it end like this. Finished spreading flowers! Looking forward to the author's new work!

When I read the first few chapters, I didn't expect that the content would be so rich. I originally just wanted to read a Mary Sue novel, but I didn't expect that each copy was more exciting than the last. The author is very knowledgeable and not deliberate at all. I'm really looking forward to the following content! Recommend

Strong woman, superior person, crazy review "I love you first" The story is compact, and the script and copy are completely unconventional. It is not a growth stream, but it is very strong in itself. It is said to be a guide, but there is no malicious female competition or anything. Although there is CP, for the heroine, they are just tools. There is no rush to post, and there is no malicious female competition. After I read this article in the early morning, I saw it in the morning The heroine behind the mental hospital doesn't have such a strong feeling. It's not that she's a target for the strategy, it's just a rumor. It's because the mental hospital is too thrilling and exciting. I think the back part is a bit bland. I'll read it again. I'm still interested in this article.

The writing is still very good, and the mental hospital copy is my favorite. It's really smooth and thrilling without any lag, but it's really a little sloppy. . My stereotype of mental hospitals +1 The author's ideological connotations are very profound. Although there are some places where it feels a bit contradictory, overall the flaws are not concealed. However, the author's logic is really rigorous and there are relatively few bugs. But some of the descriptions made me angry, and I felt they were unnecessary and a bit annoying. For example, the cannon fodder in front of the face was taunting and so on, which made me really angry. But the central idea can almost be skipped.

The writing is very good, the plot connection and pit filling are excellent, and there are many twists and turns. The content has nothing to do with the name. On the surface, it is a role-playing entertainment article, but in fact it is an unlimited dungeon clearing type. The existence of the male protagonist can be almost ignored, and the reality and the game can be viewed separately (the dungeons at the beginning of the mental hospital are relatively complex and slightly long, and there are many foreshadowings and reversals. Those who can read it will find it interesting, and those who cannot read it will find it boring. You can choose according to your own interest in reading the article) There are some places with great concepts and very good writing. The one that impressed me deeply was the silent mutual help among the women in the temple dungeon, and the other one was the confrontation with the gaze in the mental hospital dungeon. It really made me feel a little happy watching it!

I like this book very much, the subject matter is very novel! The heroine is kind but not virginal, and her human touch can be seen in many places. The male protagonists in the game are very fond of each other. Don't worry, the female protagonist has never even kissed them and ran away after flirting with them. The plot of the male protagonist in reality is a bit abrupt. Sometimes the male protagonist has to intervene (in a physical sense). Judging from the current readers' opinions, they don't like this male protagonist. To be honest, the plot of the male and female protagonist is indeed a bit confusing (strictly speaking, the male protagonist rarely appears, so those who don't like the realistic plot can skip it). In the early stage, I saw that many people said that it abused women and was too realistic. I don't think so. The heroine is just a game anchor, so she can't always fight back face-to-face, and she can fight back even after a long period of time. I think it's great. After all, reality is reality. How everyone can achieve smooth sailing in reality is not a game world. This is a great way to differentiate games from reality. I am very optimistic about the author! [Love][love] Those who like unlimited streaming and weird rules can also check it out. The copy in the game also includes this part.

Very beautiful! ! The two story lines of the heroine in the game and in reality are parallel, which is very interesting. Although she is a succubus in the game, she is not only entangled with men every day and has love and love. On the other hand, the heroine is also quite sovereign in relationships. She will not be controlled by others or feel aggrieved. Many side tasks are also very interesting and very beautiful! Five-star recommendation! Big cheers for the author!