Ordinary Woman *********

Dear readers, this is my first time writing a female channel, and I want to write about a super heroine in the world of immortality. However, the data so far is very poor, and I lack the motivation to write. I don't know what the bad points are, or the title of the book is not good, or the plot is not good. I hope you can give me your opinions. Or is the golden finger very vague? In fact, the fairy tale I want to write does not want to fight monsters and beasts, because all the immortal cultivators are killing monsters and monsters, and the monsters have been exterminated. I want to use my golden finger to cultivate big monsters, fairy beasts, holy beasts, mythical beasts, etc. The final decisive battle against the extraterrestrial demons and the alien race of birds and humans. If I have experienced it, I would like to have a collision between Eastern deification and Western mythology. The battle between cultivating immortals and magic. Cultivation of immortals is against heaven, while magic is faith. It's a pity that the current data seems to be in a hurry. Is it a male channel? Do any sisters support me in writing? I especially want to write about a super strong person on the female channel. I want a Ling Lao Mo to appear on the female channel. Dear readers, please help me think of some suitable book titles. This title of mine is not popular! [Cry]

The writing is still very good and the plot is okay. Just the update speed, it feels a bit slow. Especially when dealing with female cultivators, he is particularly gentle. It is particularly good to establish a women's organization.

I discovered it by accident. It's a very interesting story. I just finished reading it and waited for the update.

It's very beautiful, the heroine is very tenacious and grows up step by step.

It's quite good-looking. The heroine is decisive in killing and never gets mad. I really like this kind of counterattack heroine story [laughing]

Pretty good-looking, okay

It's very good-looking. It's a cool novel about a heroine.

It's a little fluent at the beginning, but after the first 10 chapters or so, the writing becomes much smoother. Come on, author!

Let me give you full marks first. Wenwen has great potential, but it's a pity that there are too few of them. It's still so exciting while I'm still in the Qi training period. I don't know what the scenes of foundation building and pill formation will be like in the future. Every fight of the heroine is very detailed. The heroine has gone from being a novice who doesn't understand anything to now, and her luck is really against the sky. It's really cool.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but I feel it is really novel. The first one is written from the perspective of magic. It is not a traditional upright chivalry. It may feel very cruel. Anyway, it is very good. I really recommend everyone to read it. I also hope that the author can update it as soon as possible [smirk][snicker][snicker][snicker][smirk]

So far it looks very good and worth recommending

Not bad, not bad. After reading it, I can see that the author is a veteran, reasonable and has no flaws.

Kill decisively, not the Holy Mother! The heroine is very personal and the writing speeds up the update! ! ! !

Very good novel, keep it up

Kill decisively and enjoy it to the extreme! This is what a leading heroine should look like!

Yes, the character description is to my liking. I like pets.

It's good-looking and has a lot of fighting scenes. Other books don't have such detailed fighting scenes.

Asking questions about things is fascinating. The author is attentive. Come on.