Paradox Blade

This book is very interesting. I was stunned by the paradox when Lin Yuan appeared. The plot is very attractive. Each character has his or her own characteristics. I think it's a pity that Ye Zhou didn't survive for a few chapters [crying]. The man in black robe next to Lin Yuan is very suspicious. I wonder how someone like Director Sachi could survive [scroll]. He was beaten by Leng Chuan and the President of the United States and still ran away. At that time The one who is related and the one who is not human are having a good time [smirking] (forgot their names, sorry) Sister Lan is also very cute. Each of the friends has their own characteristics, and they are all very, very good, always thinking about others. I feel that this is the friend I yearn for. Sister Lan's little monster is also very cute, and it needs to be turned into a cute one. The good guy has two cute tentacles at the beginning There are also two big eyes, and they are so cute when angry, hahaha [laughs], in short, it is very good-looking, the writing is good, the plot is also very attractive, the paradox is also quite novel, the protagonist is not brainless, and the official people don't know that the protagonist joins the Void Corps, so they will think about the reasons. Come on, I'm looking forward to the author's next updated article [Thoughts] (The author is very good, he will accept advice, and will correct any mistakes. I hope everyone will take a look, I think it will attract your [heartfelt])

It's really good to read, but very few people have read it. I've been hoping for a long time that someone would write about this kind of subject, but I just found a mysterious fanfic. It's just that there are still a little less paradoxes appearing now, and it always feels a little tasteless when I look at it. I can't put it into words, just like the kind of feeling that is not pleasant when it is pleasant, and poisonous when it is not.

This is my first book. I will try my best to listen to everyone's opinions and write a better story.

What a great book, why doesn't anyone read it?

Can be very interested in me

Okay, it's very new, the settings are not stable, and the realm is a bit fuzzy.

The writing is very good, the subject matter is novel, and it is very interesting to read. It is a pity that it is not very popular. Maybe the audience has restricted the flow of the work [face covering]

To be honest, this book is really awesome.

The subject matter is very novel, but it's a pity that I discovered it too early and it's not enough to watch.

Yes, except that the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist inexplicably at first sight.

The subject matter is novel and the writing is good

Very nice, but Ye Zhou is a bit pity

This is a book for a newbie. The storyline is not like that of a novice. The logic of the whole book is very rigorous and the setting is very good. The ability to use paradox is very attractive.

New settings, great imagination

What! Is it the breath of lifespan theory? Where's Marisa? Help!

The details are quite delicate [covers face] Generally speaking, it's still readable.

Okay, pretty good-looking

This is a very good work

The subject matter is very novel and full of creativity. However, the writing style of the new author may not be very good. I would like to give you five stars to encourage you.

The setting is novel and interesting, but a little vague. The characterization is not clear and the sensationalism is a bit too much. Come on [like]

The writing is quite good, and the setting is relatively novel. The only shortcoming is that the plot is a bit routine. I am looking forward to the author's next updates. The author's writing skills are not strong enough, and he cannot fully grasp his article, and the logic cannot fully fit together. Moreover, the description of the emotional drama is like a wooden board, which makes reading tasteless and extremely dull. Moreover, there is a chapter about the recognition of siblings. The author's method of determining blood relationship is to rely on acquaintances. A little girl who was lost more than ten years ago can be recognized at a glance after meeting again after such a long time. In an era of technological development, In a city that is similar to modern times, there are even superpowers and flesh-transformation technology. Can't you think of DNA as a way to verify bloodline? Even if it cannot be realized due to plot or time reasons, it must be mentioned. The article even lists acquaintances as the only way to verify identity. It can only be said that the author still lacks thinking and logic. Of course, as a new writer, this is excusable. I originally wanted to give one star, but changed it to three stars.