Echoes of the End: Forbidden File No. 001

The author, I don't know if it's because of my ability to read ten lines at a glance. I can't quite understand it. I'm also confused about the world view setting. Maybe I'm used to the introduction at the beginning of a general novel. Anyway, I'm not very readable and understandable. And I always feel like I haven't read anything after reading one chapter [scroll] [scroll] [scroll] But um... Your writing is awesome, sir (◐‿◑) Off-topic: Damn, don't you go to school or go to work? The number of words you write is much more than that of other authors. I feel like I've seen someone coding passionately [staring][staring] Also, for the sake of five stars, please don't say that I don't read the book carefully! ♪—O (≧∇≦) O—♪

Feeling okay? But here's a small suggestion: The author can try not to use "cold" so much. This word appears so many times in every chapter. I feel like I'm going to be cold to death [crazy]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! Let me start by saying that the first 25 chapters are somewhat of a story. It feels like there is no purpose later on, which is weird. When I read Chapter 30, I feel like there are only gorgeous words, but I personally don't know what it is doing, and I don't really understand it. That's my personal feeling, maybe I didn't read it carefully. The author's writing is very good, keep up the good work! !

Support the new book [laughing] I personally think the writing is good (*≧∪≦). Judging from the current content, the world view gives me a great feeling. I hope you don't abandon the update. I really hope to see its development. But I want to ask whether the protagonist can be transformed into an adult in the future or Other than that, I wrote a group of dark shadows, which made me think of a big wriggling carrion, and I think if the body is big, it will affect the movement. Finally, come on, this book is a hit and I am your old fan.

It's very interesting. The language is very logical. It's not blind. It has clear understanding. It's a very interesting book.

The world view is broad, and there are many incomprehensible words. It feels a bit like discontinuous reading seen during exams. But overall it looks pretty good

The writing is good, but the plot develops too slowly and lacks a certain amount of interest. The descriptive vocabulary takes up a lot of space, which is very torture for those who are impatient [face covering]

The detailed character settings at the beginning are very attractive. I can keep reading. However, I feel that the description of the characters is still not enough. Especially at the end of the book, there is nothing very interesting. The reproduction of characters is not very good for the senses, but it can be understood by a novice. The author also worked hard on the code.

Please support me again [laughing][laughing]

Although I have just read Chapter 7 or 8, it is so good [Like][Love] emm, I don't know what to say