Base Emotions

Mengchen's masterpiece is very exciting. The writing style is simple and unpretentious but directly touches people's hearts. The large writing style is one of the best among all the authors I have seen. It really feels like reading a classic. The characters in it are very complex, the emotions between the characters are crazy and twisted, and the reversal is particularly unexpected. To be honest, if the writing was more restrained, this book might become popular. As a bookworm for about ten years, I would like to give some advice to you. The writing is really very good. Everyone has his or her own ambiguity. If taken alone, each person can be the protagonist. Everyone has his own story line and his own unique charm. But because of this, it feels a bit overwhelming. Too much time was spent on some supporting characters, and it felt like countless protagonists were being created at the same time. Even if it is a group portrait, it should be relaxed and relaxed. Sometimes it is good not to be overly descriptive and just leave a little white space. The point of convergence mentioned above actually means that you don't need to make everyone so complicated. I suggest you reduce the shaping of other supporting characters and focus more on the protagonist (in fact, sometimes, a simple profile can also create a thrilling supporting character). Another point is that the overall style of this book is a little dark. It feels like everyone has difficulties and everyone is living a miserable life. There are a lot of normal people missing in it, that is, ordinary, kind and simple passers-by. Of course, Dada is already very good now. I really can't say anything about his writing style. If this is Dada's writing style, then please don't change it. Every author has his own characteristics. (Personal feelings, if it offends you, you can delete it)

How to put it, just like the name of the novel, it is really a despicable emotion, and Yu's feelings are really humble. Just like what the author has been saying, Haji Wang, Yu is like a chess piece in other people's lives. She has never been the one playing chess, she has been used and hurt until she met Xue. , For the later stage, I still hope to fight back one by one. I don't want Yu to be hurt all the time. I really hope to fight back (｀ω´)

The book is really beautiful, really rotten, and not cliche at all. Seeing now, I thought Lu was dark at first, but after a comparison, Ma Ye was like a breath of fresh air.

I will write more book reviews at the end, but this book is really great. The only shortcoming is that it is not popular, but I hope it can become popular soon, but it may have to be revised after it becomes popular. Fortunately, I read it before it became popular. It is a very good book. The portrayal between the two protagonists is also particularly perfect, and the plot is also very compact. It depicts the reality of human nature and the despicability and distortion of the human heart. After reading the whole story, I feel that only Lu is the kindest person. Although he is a mess, his heart is the purest. The ending is full of flowers! !

Ah, okay. I thought it was a joke to give so many labels at the beginning, but I didn't expect them all to be really crazy. The main character is the most normal gangster.

There is a sense of reality and magic at the end, which is rare. This book simply attracted me with its title and then killed me 🙂

It looks good but there are few people

A weak-looking student with a dark underbelly [top post]

Very delicate writing style, I think it is very good

It's very interesting. I like reading this kind of crazy writing.

It's pretty cool, but why are there so few people watching it?

It's really good-looking, but I didn't expect that Yang's appearance was mediocre, because I always thought that the protagonists were all very pretty. The storyline was really good.

It's good-looking, and the author's thoughts are also good-looking.

Not bad, not bad, but Sun Zheng surprised me a little bit To be honest, why are there so few people watching it? I think this is definitely worth watching.

I sincerely recommend it, it's very beautiful [Adoration]

Author Amynos!

It was good, I thought it would end in that fire.

It's good-looking, and the characters' emotions and images are vividly created.

It's so pretty, shockingly delicious. It's just that the ending made me a little depressed, even though they were indeed together.

To be honest, it's beautiful, it's so awesome, it keeps turning around

The writing is so exciting and exciting. It's worth reading. I couldn't imagine the follow-up development. It's a very rare book on Tomato.

All the villains are really well written and quite touching. I just want to be able to remove the moral bottom line of the heroine.

Is it really a pure love story? Why do you add a couple who can cook? [What]