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It is indeed a very good book! The author writes very carefully❤️Come on [laughter]

The writing is very detailed and good, but it is a bit too detailed. I feel that some descriptions can be simplified appropriately. There is also a question, will there be a mother-son relationship later? I have never read this type of novel [shy]

It's a very good emotional portrayal, and the writing is excellent. It's a rare work in Western countries. It's currently in its seedling stage. The plot design is slightly flawed, but overall it's still excellent. However, the track is still too bt. I always feel that it is difficult to survive this book to the end. Authors with such strong writing skills are quite rare in Tomato. I have read a book about elves before. The writing style is okay, the plot design, and the character portrayal reveal a mindless human-machine feeling from the beginning to the end. She abuses people simply for the sake of abuse. In contrast, although the process of the heroine's identity transformation in this book is not smooth, it is at least reasonable. Every logical thinking has traces to follow. It is a "brainy" book. I'm not sure if it's a cool article at the moment. I feel like the author wouldn't be able to write such a white article with his writing skills. However, the mother-child article is still exaggerated. I feel like the limitations of the platform have come into play. When can I see it in the moderators [Chigua]

The plot is very detailed and not what you can see in Tomato now. It is more like the traditional fantasy novels I read 7 or 8 years ago, but it is a bit too detailed. You can cut out some unnecessary details and environment descriptions. The setting is very good and highly recommended.

The plot is okay. The relationship between mother and child is a major highlight of this book. The descriptions of the environment and facial expressions are very detailed, or rather too detailed, a bit too detailed. These descriptions account for at least half of the word count so far. It would be nice if it could be shorter.

The setting is quite novel, just wait for the filial piety to deteriorate, but it should not be given on Tomato. You can also write about pure love between mother and child. After all, there is no law that stipulates that novels must write about love and love.

Although the theme of mother and child is not a moral theme, the author has a strong grasp of the plot. Although the character description and storyline are suspected of being exaggerated, overall it is still flawless. Moreover, in the subsequent plot, the author's writing power is soaring to the naked eye. The characters are three-dimensional and the plot has ups and downs. It is no exaggeration to say that this is the most valuable scene in Tomato.

I dare not give high marks because I am afraid that the book will be gone. Overall, the writing is pretty good, there are no serious loopholes in the plot, and the author's attitude is also very good. However, the male protagonist, a time traveler, is too naive and has no character characteristics. It is recommended to patch it up. There is also some stiffness in describing the psychology of dialogue between characters, especially in some big occasions and when there are many characters. Also, this book will definitely revolve around the male and female protagonists. I believe that most readers are here for this, so I hope to continue to improve the description and production methods of the emotions between the male and female protagonists.

The quality is so high that it far exceeds the average level of Tomato and even the starting point. Will demons from outside the world come to Tomato to preach?

It can be seen from the article and introduction that the child is his own flesh and blood. But it can be seen in the introduction that the heroine's own child died in the mirror world in the first chapter. Later in the second chapter, the heroine saved her child (the hero) again. Later, it seems that the child lacked the memory in the mirror and was accepted by the heroine as an apprentice. Later, the child confessed to the master (her own mother [laughing awkwardly]) and the heroine told her child (male protagonist) everything [laughing and crying]. It was good. I will give it five stars first.

The writing is good, and almost every piece by this author has more than 7,000 words, and sometimes he updates it twice a day. I am afraid that I will make the author worse, he is a model worker among authors [laughs evilly]

It's good-looking, I can sympathize with it, and the character descriptions are very good. The author said that he can write about three million words. I hope it won't fall apart in the middle. I'll see how the author handles the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I hope this book will get better and better. The author won't make too many mistakes until he can't finish it [laughter]

I will read it and wait for the extras on the moderator that you mentioned [smile][smile] The protagonist, Xiao Mengchuan, has a sense of sight [laughing] [thinking]

I only read two or three chapters, with dual perspectives and detailed scene descriptions, but there are some places that are too detailed. I believe the author's conception of this book should be very mature, and I'm looking forward to the subsequent creations. Come on! Don't stop updating!

Yes, based on my experience watching it, the protagonist has traveled through time. But the performance in the article feels like it really fits the child's mind and age he had after time travel. I think some details in the article can show that the protagonist's behavior is different from that of ordinary children. Otherwise, there are some plots that an adult cannot take in, and it will feel very embarrassing. [Sending Hearts]

Awesome🐮, it's so good, I'd love to read it, so be sure to finish writing it.

I hope to see an enhanced version of this on the moderator in the future [shy]

When does the author go to moderator? Is there a group? Paid and free publicity

Not bad, I'm looking forward to when they become master and apprentice. But now it seems like it will take a long time [Like]

The writing style is relatively hard, so I'm probably not a novice, and the details are well handled, but the connection between chapters and the promotion of the main line seem to be missing.

The writing is great, and Shen Liuli's emotional transformation towards Shenxuan is also very full. Although I haven't read it much, the most important thing about the novel is the plot, but if it stays like this in the future, I will support it. My financial ability is limited, so I can still help the author to read the advertisement. I am looking forward to the plot in the future.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen a story about family relationships. I was moved to tears several times [crying][crying]. The subject matter is very novel and worth reading.

Very good, I found a treasure in Tomato

The writing is very good, much better than those assembly lines.

The writing is really good. The despair described in the early stage is better than the terrifying background atmosphere in most modes. . . . . .

It looks good, the characters are good, the plot is okay, and I feel comfortable watching it. One chapter is over 4,000 words, which I feel is too much, but I like it, it's great [snickering] [smirking] [admiration] [admiration] Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Yesterday was Army Day. Can the author celebrate the 10th chapter in a row? Although I know it will be very hard for you, we have also watched it (the author's hard work is not worth mentioning, mainly because we have watched it) [Like][Like][Like]

A magical book with a novel subject matter. It is one of the best among the new books. It is just a bit slow to gain popularity and contains too little content. I want to keep the book but I am afraid that it will kill me.

It looks good, but there are too many emotional descriptions and it's even annoying, but it's really easy to put in.

After reading Chapter 20, the author is very delicate in describing these details. It can be said that the quality of tomatoes is relatively good. However, the story in the first volume is quite long. It's best to wait and see this later. Because actually what I'm looking forward to more is the content of the second volume.