Simultaneous Travel: the Power of Long Yin at the Beginning

The writing is good, but it is a bit overwhelming. The 99 stream is suitable for the Invincible stream to have fun. Write more about daily life and fun, and then slowly push the main line. For example, write some imagination, the integration of different abilities in the world, or take off with the left foot and the right foot.

It looks pretty good so far. The combat power of the same wearer expands very quickly. As long as you control it appropriately, it still looks pretty good. I thought the author's new novel would be a comprehensive comic or a book similar to the one that quickly travels through other anime worlds to collect various systems of righteousness. I didn't expect that they would be wearing the same clothes. I hope it won't collapse in the later stages.

The Warhammer part was great, but maybe I had a problem with Yun and didn't notice it, but the Naruto part was a little bit worse. There were too many problems like contacting Kushina and talking to Danzo. Overall good, some flaws are acceptable To be honest, this Warhammer part could be written as a stand-alone novel.

Although it is written about the cesspit Warhammer, the combat power plug-in breaks out of this limitation. The whole article shows a kind of sandstorm temperament. It can be said that among all the Warhammer articles I have read, it is the least desperate, least dark, and most interesting [Adoration]

First of all, this is my personal opinion (don't comment if you don't like it) I have read more than a hundred chapters in this book and I think there are two main shortcomings. The first is that Naruto's love line is a bit awkward, but the rest is okay. The second is that it is a bit overwhelming in terms of combat effectiveness. There is nothing wrong with you saying that the protagonist of Warhammer is not strong enough. I also agree that the protagonists of Naruto and Juju are not strong enough. One world has a high limit and the other is just developed. But the protagonist of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba is not strong enough to speed pass. It is a bit overwhelming. Which of the above three worlds is not stronger than Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba? This is a bit unjustifiable. I also hope that the author can correct these two shortcomings. I also very much hope that this book will not be discontinued, and I hope that the author can achieve greater success again. Don't say it externally, don't complain if you don't like it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Not bad, not bad, I finally have a wolf to play with with Immortal Slash, I don't say he is strong or not, but he is handsome [laughing evilly]

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? For example, it seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The older brother's body is weak and the body is weak. If the younger brother presses the older brother like this, it is actually the younger brother's fault. It hurts the older brother's body, which also makes the younger brother feel distressed. But whether the older brother is injured or not has anything to do with the younger brother? ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚

It's pretty good, but the Hokage part is a little aggrieved, but he's still a weakling after all!

After seeing so many worlds, the most comfortable ones to enter are the Warhammer with its own subspace essence and the Dragon Clan with its own White King's power. They are not very powerful but very comfortable. I feel that the setting of the dragon protagonist is more reasonable than many dragon novels I have read, and it can be read as a stand-alone book.

The whole novel is divided into many single volumes. The protagonist's soul is divided and he travels through different fan worlds. Some are well written, and some are very poisonous. Similar to those written in the comic book world, it is too licking, but the poisonous chapters can be skipped directly. The plot does not affect other worlds, so it is a book that can be read.

I can love you, but that doesn't mean I can tolerate your relatives. 🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬 A group of people who are as humble and careful as old slaves. Aren't these nannies? 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬 Isn't invisible protection a nanny? Am I going to shelter you and take care of you forever like an old hen? Don't you have my time? Why? Do I have to protect you just because you are the protagonist?

Provincial stream: Matryoshka Invincible stream, with a female protagonist (doubtful), All Heavens Clone stream, the protagonist's soul is knocked apart and travels to different worlds, and also unlocks different abilities. Every time the protagonist is about to die, he will enter the clone space, and then gain the power of different times. In the end, he will not eat beef. ————Dividing line———— It is the same as mentioned above. Every time there is a new world, you will first adventure for a while, then establish a bond with a new partner, then be killed by the villain, and finally enter the clone space, and finally gain the ability not to eat beef. Different worlds have always been like this, and the matryoshka dolls keep getting stronger [face covering]

The writing is good, smooth, non-toxic, unfolds slowly, and the rhythm is very similar to 99 Duke. It is also the most comfortable book in the 99 series that I have read after 99 Duke.

I thought about it for a while, and finally gave it full marks. To be honest, the author's writing of the story was okay. There wasn't much of a problem. The only problem was that multiple characters were written together. I saved up to read it together. If I read two chapters in a series, I would soon forget the story of the previous character. This is the only shortcoming, but writing 40k is really exciting. Although I am Yunmai, but in my mind Huangpizi should be like that. I don't think the Emperor will destroy the Thunder Warriors for no reason. Secondly, he must be for humanity. As for the state religion, although it is deformed, the sad 10k human beings need faith and hope to survive. In my personal opinion, I always hope that the author will not be too scattered in the later period. Originally, each story could be written very well if he wrote his own story.

Give the author a suggestion! This book is really well written! But I feel that the current style has changed a bit from the previous period! I think writing novels should not just develop the power system blindly, but also have some fun. Later, we can have some time-travel worlds with game world backgrounds, such as Devil May Cry world, such as World of Warcraft, such as Red Dead Redemption world. All worlds cannot have the same style. For example, if the theme of some worlds is to resist the protagonist's awakening power, it cannot be directly the ceiling, so just write it to death! The only thing that can be common in all worlds is knowledge. The laws are different but knowledge always has something in common. By trying to combine the optimal power system, we can grow as quickly as possible and bring improvement to everyone! Growing too fast actually shortens the life and interest of the book!

I won't act anymore, I'm a sailor [Adoration]

99 Anorectal Flow, I have seen 231 pictures so far, except that the manga Curse World is a bit too toxic and Yukino is too stereotyped, everything else is fine. As I said before, the world of magic is too poisonous, so just skip it or give it a rough scan.

There is nothing too poisonous, but you can just skip the Naruto part. It is quite poisonous. If you can bear it, you can read it. Although it is not very poisonous, it is still a little poisonous. The other one is the one in Warhammer, which always feels a bit silly.

♡ℍ𝕒𝕡𝕡𝕪 𝕊𝕦𝕞𝕞𝕖𝕣 ♡ --🍃 🍦 🍉 🍊 🍃—- The beginning of the dog days, looking for a cool place to get some peace of mind--🌿 🍍 🍦 🍉 🌿—- ᵀᴴᴱ ᴮᴱˢᵀ ᴵˢ ᶠᴼᴿ ᵞᴼᵁ The summer wind rises from the fields and first falls, allowing all things to grow--🌿 🍍 🍦 🍉 🌿—- ᵀᴴᴱ ᴮᴱˢᵀ ᴵˢ ᶠᴼᴿ ᵞᴼᵁ The night is short, the summer dream is long, and the first fall has arrived

To be honest, with so many worlds, there are always people who have never watched anime and can't watch it. But if the author only writes about 40k or some larger worlds, or other novel worlds, it will be really unbeatable and beautiful.

Except for Warhammer, the rest are all enjoyable to watch. But the writing is okay

99 Stream, it covers a lot of subjects, not just the sea of ​​​​death and fire, I hope the author can keep it up

Although it is a 99 stream, the scenes are switched too frequently, which can easily lead to negative emotions and reduce the reading experience. Please pay attention to the author.

It's okay, but the combat power collapsed in the later stage, so it basically has nothing to do with the same wear. I have been fighting on my own for dozens of chapters, and I haven't interacted with him yet.

How should I put it, writing the book went too fast. The previous one and the next one are completely different worlds. Three worlds are cut into three pictures, which is really invincible.

This five star is for those who give five stars, nb

It would be nice not to write so much about Naruto

Of all the worlds you write, I still like Warhammer [smile]

Why don't the author write the Warhammer part separately?

Author, the author's first world is a wolf game, right? You can search online. I remember that there seemed to be a foreign great god who completed the world view. It is very powerful and grand. Does the author plan to add it? Ask the author to reply to "Wei Original World Record" @After July is August @