Become*******

I was attracted by the introduction. It is a very good book. The characters, story rhythm, multiple perspectives and multi-line narrative are well grasped. However, there are two problems: The first one is that the first-person and third-person perspectives are interspersed a bit strangely. The first one is easy to grasp and orderly. In the later period, the subjective narrative from the protagonist's perspective and the omniscient narrative story and biography are interspersed, which makes it a bit weird to read; The second is that there are some problems with the dialogue content of the characters in the later period. Some of the more important words are a bit brief and feel like they were written in a hurry before they were finished. Some less important dialogues are repetitive and complicated, and a small number of dialogues feel a bit inexplicable and unnecessary. The problem that arises seems to be caused by the author trying to reproduce a scene that gives readers the feeling of a traditional fantasy adventure while also recreating a game, including communication between real characters and NPC dialogue, but he did not grasp the degree of accuracy. (Maybe I'm over-interpreting) It is currently Chapter 68. The problems I found do not cover the entire book. Please refer to

Can this book come back?

Author, what did you write and why did you kill it? 🍅 Are your big hands working hard?

Yes, I often read comic commentary on a certain channel, such as "Supporting Characters Survive in the Academy", "The Flash Genius at the Magic Academy", "A Sashimi Knife Becomes the Strongest", "The Villain Also Wants to Live", etc., And I love reading this kind of Korean comic commentary. I have been searching on Tomato for a long time to see if anyone has written novels of this type. This book is quite in line with the standards. It is a classic academy, a classic time travel novel/game, a classic dungeon/dungeon/maze. The classic male protagonist does not want to get involved with multiple female protagonists but they are interested in joining them. The male protagonist solves various incidents. Although the plot of this book may be a little immature and the writing is not comparable to the works listed above, but for a free platform, it must have taken considerable effort to reach this level, and it deserves encouragement, so I give it five stars.

It's great. I really like the characterization, but I just can't accept multiple female protagonists. It seems to me like a moral flaw. I can accept it if the protagonist is not decent to begin with, or is affected by social factors. We still don't know what the situation is with multiple female protagonists. What is acceptable is to open more weekly shows, promote one person in each show, and have multiple single characters to follow the pseudo-harem flow (?) All in all, it looked good, but I couldn't bear the moral beating from many women, so I left.

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? Don't Die! It's hard to find something to read in the recent book shortage.

I feel like I translated someone else's foreign novel The last time I read someone else's book, one of them was sealed like this.

Ah, why did the author crash?

What's going on? Removed?

The overall feeling is pretty good, but can there be more plot about the master? I have no interest in those who look back, but the master is very interesting. Finally, please give me more updates, the author, this little bit is not enough. @Sujun gives you five stars. Can there be more storylines about the master? [Send heart][Send heart]

No? Where are the books? I have such a big book! ? !

No, bro, what did you do? It was suddenly removed from the shelves. The writing was obviously very good [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's pretty good. The dual-line narrative method makes people feel good.

It's not my brother, I'm in the book

Where is the book? Why is the book missing?

Why are you gone? [Crying]

Why is the book gone? No_(´□`‖ ∠)_

Where are the books? Why was it taken off the shelves? [Cry][cry][cry]

I haven't watched it for two days. It feels like growing crops and they suddenly died.

Why was the book suddenly taken off the shelves?

No? After being here for so long, you told me that I was on the list of gods???????

There is no clear stream of rotten stems in Tomato. There are not many lightning points at the moment. The chapter divisions still feel a bit unclear and the span is a bit large.

Congratulations to the author for being on the list of gods. This definitely proves that this book is definitely a good book.

I like this book very much. The overall pace is slow. People who like fast speed need to consider carefully. As for my personal evaluation, I think the author's views on multiple female protagonists should be different from ordinary people (if you hadn't marked multiple female protagonists, I would have thought you wanted us to engage in a guessing game), but this is not a bad thing. It is always good to have new ideas.

It's a bit cliche but unexpectedly good-looking. It's a little less interesting emotionally, but the group portraits and the story are both good-looking. The birth of all emotions needs to be developed but the author will skip or speed it up, but in fact the problem is very small. This fast pace feels like it can speed up the development of the story. It's good-looking, but the story has just begun. If you don't mind, you can enjoy it. If you don't mind, you can continue to watch the story as it reaches its climax.

It's a light novel, pretty good.

A rare pure academic novel in Tomato, it has the flavor of Japanese and Korean novels on ESJ, and it is well received

Very good, the characters are very detailed

Why was it removed? It won't be...

Looks good, pretty good