Another World *********

The subject matter of this book has a lot of room for writing. Although most of the light novels are called "peaceful alternate world" (some of the names of the dead kings are written in a string), it would also be interesting to streamline part of the original plot, or substitute Chinese Internet words, etc. But in some places, it may be because I only think about replacing words, which makes some places too written or stiff. You can think more about it before writing. Personally, I feel that the Elf Forest part of the original text is really too cumbersome after the sixth volume. It can be streamlined if written.

The theme of this novel is similar to that of a light novel: "Being Involved in the Call of the Brave Incident but Discovering that Another World is Peaceful". Even the character settings are similar, but it seems to have been slightly modified based on the author's xp. Overall, the article is good and I look forward to the follow-up.

The King of Death is the main character, and a patch was added later to make Kelin feel that she doesn't really like the male protagonist. But King of Death, just treat it as a patch. After finishing it, I found that the ID numbers written on them were all male protagonists. Kelin is the kind of person who simply has nothing to do and wants to experience the feeling of love. But the Death King really likes it. To put it bluntly, the King of Death is the real palace

(●'◡'●) It's okay, but there are some things that Kelin finds interesting, and the God of Creation of the God Realm also finds it interesting. Don't you think it's a bit ridiculous, the author? I really can't see what's interesting about the protagonist, but this novel is quite interesting.

It's pretty cool, but why was it taken off the shelves? Am I (listening) reading?

Beautiful and well written You white-haired maniac, you really make me happy [laughing evilly]

It's beautiful. It's a pity that the author stopped updating at a critical time, and there are so few people now.

The rhythm is good, and I feel very comfortable eating it now

It's really well written, invincible

It looks great, support it. It's a pity, that's what tomatoes are like, no one can produce good crops, so people gather to eat big portions [laughing and crying]

It's very beautiful, but I sent it [crying] [crying]

Let's strengthen the male protagonist. He must have some ability to protect himself.

I will vote for the King of Death, and I will vote for [Start]. Author, if you delay the update, be careful and we will make a fool of you. We still have a bottom line of at least two chapters a day, and you must have at least five chapters every day. [Anger]

Hee hee, author, you must write it down...

Haokan[Like][Like][Like] So far it's really good

How shameless! [Crying] Please write novels for the rest of your life! I can do anything [crying]

Okay, there's no poisonous points in front of it, and the plot is okay.

It's okay, but I suspect that the author Qi Shu ran away.

It's pretty cool, but can the author make the names of the heroines (who don't appear) a little more special? [Blowing a kiss] Western surnames (first letter) are a bit easy to string together [I'm full]

It's a very good novel, can the author still come out?

It's pretty good, I love watching it anyway

If the author didn't run away, the score would not be low [laughing evilly] (Can you update 10 times a day?)

It's good to watch, but it's not recommended for those who like fast pace.

It looks good. I like it. Update it soon. I want to watch it with Kelin ~ Of course, I will post it with Alicia [laughing]