Yigong, a Kamen Rider passing through, accidentally falls into the universe of Honkai: Star Rail.
With the Decade Driver in hand, he wields the power of every Rider, and gets cozy with March 7th right from the start.
[KamenRide: Faiz Axel Form!] He ends the battle in ten seconds, cuts through the fog, and confronts the Medicine Buddha’s evil deeds.
[KamenRide: Kabuto Clock Up!] “Walk the path of heaven and command all things!” In a world beyond time, he catches a fleeting eternity and his enemies’ weaknesses!
[Final AttackRide DE-DE-DE-DECADE!] “That only tickled a little.” He hunts down and defeats his enemies with layers of light cards, and kicks an Aeon’s creation to pieces? It’s all just to capture March 7th’s surprised expression!
[KamenRide: Oma Zi-O!] When the Astral Express faces true despair, the benevolent Demon King descends, declaring with absolute power: “The moment of blessing has arrived!”
March 7th: “Yigong, make sure I look cool in today’s photos too! Which Rider form are you going to use to take me flying next time?”
Dan Heng: “His power… doesn’t belong to this universe, but his camera never lies.”
Himeko: “Hehe, Yigong, what ability are you planning to use to surprise us today?”
Stelle: “I don’t think… I remember anything. But following this guy who’s always transforming and March makes me feel really safe, and like I’m in for a lot of fun!”
Where is he headed? Who knows? A Kamen Rider passing through doesn’t need a destination.
The writing is not bad, but I have to make some suggestions: First point: Yi Gong's role is too flat, and there are not even as many psychological descriptions as Hing's. So after reading hundreds of pages, I really have no impression of him except that he is a bit confused and obsessed with the camera thief. On the contrary, Hing has more of a protagonist impression than Yi Gong. Second point: There are too many photo shoots. One chapter can take five or six times, such as ordinary fight scenes. Do not shoot ordinary behaviors, leaving more meaningful scenes: such as reconstruction after the war, family portraits of train crews, etc. Scenes that can both summarize the plot and leave foreshadowing are good. The third point: The feeling of Kamen Rider is really not strong, and it does not reflect the strength and characteristics of the knight. For example, in the space station fight, the ultimate form of Diamond King Lao Wu and Bird Alliance was used, but it did not have the power and characteristics of the ultimate form. It can be replaced with an ordinary form... That's it for the time being. The author's writing is still good, but the plot needs to be polished. At least it must be interesting and not just a plot.
The author's writing is really good, please don't finish it. Please, I finally found an excellent Kamen Rider novel, and I hope it can dig more into the protagonist's heart. If this kind of writing is polished and the plot is carefully polished, it will really create a wonderful character creation. The protagonist's current portrayal is a bit thin, and there is no in-depth portrayal except for being strong and pretending. I hope the author will work harder in the future.
Why don't the author write an article about photography 🤦 It feels like a large part of your writing is about describing the photos taken. You write it in every chapter. You seem to have missed the point.
March single heroine?
The main character is very comfortable to write, but why is it that no one reads it, and updates are discontinued?
It can look good 🙂