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It's a very interesting book. It doesn't have any poisonous points so far. At least that's what I personally think. I enjoyed reading it. The only question I have is where did the original consciousness of the body go before the protagonist takes control of the body? The editing logic of the protagonist's witch is not very clear, at least I don't quite understand it. Is it creating something out of thin air, or is it taking a body? If it's a body snatching, it would be a bit weird, not to mention uncomfortable, at least a bit uncomfortable. If it is a creation out of thin air, what is the corresponding identity and family environment of the witch? , Of course, if it can come back perfectly, I personally think it will be called a good work. I hope it can come back. Come on, please update more, don't let it be unfinished😱

It's good-looking, and you can tell from many details that the author has put a lot of thought into it. The character creation is wonderful, but it feels like it could be richer, but it also has some shortcomings: The author's writing is not strong enough, and many places that could be twisted and intensified to intensify the conflict are brushed aside. Such as the scene where the Flame Witch comes out of the ice, and the scene where the Devouring Witch breaks free from her halter (watching this I wonder how the spear wielder suppressed her, how she could break the seal by pulling like crazy, and how she was trapped for thousands of years) There was a certain degree of combat power collapse (not very sure). The person in control was a little too weak. He killed 21 in a single [face covering] (and let the opponent run away). The bomb also had a reminder. The enemy's combat power is not obvious, and the sense of conflict is too weak. The protagonist upgrades too quickly, and the spirit of B+ appears in less than 100 chapters. The subsequent writing is likely to be very tiring. With three witches and the protagonist, the four lines may become a problem in the later stages. As the first lily novel I read, I didn't emphasize the lily. I like it very much. It's like smoking it every day. It's addictive, but I always feel that it can be better. I wish the author a long series and break the million. However, the characters still feel a bit labeled and could be enriched with other characteristics. The supporting characters are a bit thin. Good is good and bad is bad. Some character arcs could be added to make the story more interesting.

I finally found a good-looking article about changing a hundred articles. The posts between girls are great, and the author's writing style is also very good! And the Wildfire Witch is so cool! It's just too little, not enough to see! [Cry][cry][cry] I love the Wildfire Witch so much, she is like a phoenix crawling out of the ashes [Adoration][Adoration], so handsome!

It's quite interesting and the plot is good. Is this a multi-female story? Each identity is paired with a female character to help the heroine. It's too clichéd, and it's quite refreshing to see that she doesn't like men. However, the word girl is used too often, and almost all female characters are set as girls. There are no words like middle-aged women, ladies, and women, which gives me the feeling of underage love and slapstick. At the beginning, I wanted to complain about how the descriptions and interactions between the protagonist's clones were so weird. When I saw the Narcissus tag added in the introduction, the sky fell [crying], I was wrong, I will never say that the author's writing is too cliche [crying] [crying] [crying], oh my god

What's interesting is that the heroine's clone directly occupies someone else's body, or um... The game's divine power directly creates a body with various backgrounds? In other words, the original owner died, and then the heroine came. Originally, I didn't have this question, but the third witch clone had living parents, which made me have this question. Also, I like stickers, and Lily is great. It would be even better if I could get closer [I understand]

Good-looking (who knew that 1,000 sweet flower-stuffed chickens in the bag turned out to be useless, 150 pumps were not good enough for a young lady, the newly saved ninja was cut in seconds, top-secret Bakshi was kicked to death in 6 sets, the TV station was forced to block the fat bag after being surrounded by three scavengers, tile 21 He failed to kill and was whipped to death. He was stuck in overtime in the live game and was killed by a penalty kick for hundreds of seconds. The king's resistance to pressure and headwind comeback resulted in the team's lowest rating. Channel 53 lost in a flash. Emperor Cheng's favorite woman was poisoned and forgot to save. The mission was whipped to death with a big elbow.

It's so beautiful, but there are only two updates a day, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this [laughter]

If you just like to read posts, you can read it. The subject matter is also very interesting, the writing style is average, and there are some poisonous points. The following are the main poisonous points in my opinion: 1. The relationship between the protagonist and the doctor is a bit inexplicable. If you don't fall in love with the protagonist quickly, you can blame Charm A, but the protagonist falls too quickly. 2. The protagonist inherits Bi Li's interpersonal relationship and has an ambiguous relationship with Riley, but is also suspected of internal digestion with the Wildfire Witch. 3. Until now, there is no clear standard for the power system. Most of the protagonists fight are miscellaneous monsters. Currently, they have not seen even a slightly stronger abnormal body, and they have no specific concept of S-class abnormal bodies. 4. Except for the country where Bili is located, other places are as if the Internet is disconnected. There is no sense of a large society like a city, but more like a small village. 5. Although the author emphasized that the several clones are the same protagonist no matter what, but in actual reading, they still feel like different people. There is too much interaction between the witches in the back and they are not written about the main character. It feels like the supporting characters take up the protagonist's role. Although there are some poisonous points, in general it is okay. If you have a certain resistance to poison and like to read posts, you can read it. It is recommended to store your brain before watching.

The subject matter is very novel, the plot has no poisonous points, and the plot is tight and tight. Each witch has a really different personality. The only shortcoming is that I can't get enough of it. I hope the author can update it more quickly.

Talented newcomers or veteran reincarnations, the heartwarming scenes are well written Disadvantages: Some stalks appear too frequently, moderate discomfort General: Excellent Xiaobaiwen [Like][Like] The plot of the witch after Fire Witch is... Almost boring

I have just read part of it, and I feel that it is relatively good in the vest and behind-the-scenes stories. I am looking forward to the following content, and the two elements of narcissus and transformation are quite novel [laughing] (I was mainly attracted by the word narcissus in the introduction.

It looks good. In fact, to put it simply, it is Lily Harem. At least it looks similar. The narcissus element is not that strong. The protagonist is still Magneto. If you can accept it, it will be very comfortable to watch. I don't know if you can't accept it. But there is a small problem. Some of the original friends of those people may not be taken care of.

To be honest, I think this article is low, and it should be rated 9.0. The author's writing style is very good, and the interaction between several witches is very interesting. Come on, author. In the end, it's just a little bit lacking, not enough to watch.

It's so good. I mean, even this amount is too little, right? The author will update me soon. The subject matter is novel and top-notch, and I can't stop talking about Lily CP. It feels like all the Lily people's

The concept is pretty good, and the world view is self-consistent. The book is not an ordinary male video, it has some emotional lines, but it is far from the ordinary female channel that just cuts off the emotional lines. The look and feel is more like a light novel, for the following two reasons: 1. The characters are clearly created and have their own "labeling". The characters have outstanding personalities and often have obvious "cute points" or "attributes", making it easy for readers to quickly remember and develop a good impression. 2. Although it involves combat elements, it is interspersed with relaxed daily interactions, complaints or humorous moments to balance the tension. Others have said that the novel is not cool enough, and the writing is indeed a bit lacking. Personally, I think it is because the author is not proficient in shaping it, but it is not a big problem. Shuangdian is generally affected by the following two points: 1. Character design. Compared with the character of "Asasi", the character of "I don't eat beef" of the motherland is easier to shape. As a character in a game I played said: "As expected of the good man Sambo, he is fun and reliable. But the biggest problem with this brother is that he still has a bottom line. Restraining one's hands is a taboo for happiness." After all, in reality, people are more likely to prefer "not eating beef" after gaining abilities. The character created by the author has been affected to a certain extent, but I think the second point is actually more important, because even if the first point is chosen to "not eat beef", the shaping requirements of Shuangdian will be lowered, but the quality will also easily become lower. Although the positive character setting will make the shaping requirements of Shuangdian higher, it is in line with people's ideal of "truth, goodness and beauty" and can achieve a higher level of Shuangdian. 2. Plot, excitement points generally involve factors such as expectation subversion, cognitive reversal, emotional backlog and immediate release, strong stimulating feedback, etc. An excellent plot can give birth to high-quality excitement points. That's all for now, author, come on վ'ᴗ' ի There is more to add, expand to see Oops, I didn't make it clear above ☝️. The protagonist's character is positive, kind and lawful, not "I don't eat beef" Supplement: Not an emulator Supplement: The avatar has its own personality and thoughts Supplement: The protagonist is not hostile to humans Supplement: There are not many emotional lines but not too many, and they also occupy key plot points. Supplement: The plot does not focus on combat, and the combat is less exciting. Supplement: If you have only watched male videos and female videos and don't understand light novels, use male videos and female videos to explain, and your impression will be more biased towards female videos. Supplement: Although there is a behind-the-scenes flow, it lacks the feeling of strategizing and controlling the overall situation. The development of the story is not guided by the protagonist. The protagonist has weak action and passive performance.

It's not bad, it's a group portrait story, but it feels like one person. The plot focuses on upgrading and becoming stronger. There are no ups and downs. It's a bit uninteresting. It's a bit similar to the routine of the book My Incarnation is Becoming the Final Boss.

It's good to read, very interesting, and it has two female protagonists, which makes this book even more rare (in my opinion). There are currently no outstanding points. The only shortcoming is that there are too few! It's not enough to watch!

Being able to finish reading it is my greatest recognition of a novel! The author is careful. The article is not a cool one, and some people won't be able to accept it. The content is very reasonable. I disagree with those negative reviews and even some reviews that took less than 30 minutes to read.

It's a good book, but it has its flaws, and sometimes it looks a bit confusing, but overall it has flaws. I personally don't like Bai that much, it's acceptable. If someone has an appetite, it's a bonus. The consciousness of the witch belongs to the protagonist, and can be regarded as a clone. However, the consciousness of the protagonist is reflected differently in different clones, and will also be affected by the original character. Yes, but looking at it this way, I just feel it is very messy, especially when these people are posting and cooperating (I don't know if you can understand this point, anyway, I think it looks very messy and strange) The main line is relatively clear, the branches of the line are quite interesting, and the structural framework is very good. Although some plots have some poisonous points, the overall story is quite good. Of course, some plots are too deliberately written, and the heroine is a bit inexplicable. Of course, even so, the shaping of these witches is still very good, with flesh and blood. Maybe it is because of this that I think it would be strange to use Su Modie's consciousness to control these people. To be honest, it really looks like a large-scale split scene. I heard that Shen He was killed, so I can only say that it's a pity that I can't see the ending.

It's beautiful, whether it's the real body, the witch and other girls, or herself and herself, it's all amazing! ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧ What I want to see is this mouth tooth! (✧∇✧) Please be sure to order more! ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

Good looking. Love to see more. Big cheers to the author

It's very good for my taste. Well, I recommend this book. The author is also very fast. Well, I can't say it is much better than some books that write one chapter every ten days. At least one or two chapters a day.

I feel so happy after reading this novel! As a 3,000-hour bookworm, I really like watching it.

The subject matter is interesting, and each witch has a distinct personality and different abilities. I like this book very much, especially the part about Su Mo Diehe's life in the Administration, the part about scaring Shirley, and the part about Grotus leading the revolution. I don't understand why Hao Haoluo entered the little dark room. Although there are stickers, compared with other platforms, or even compared with other books I have read on this platform, it is not at all bitter or bloody. I feel very sorry for entering the dark room. Finally, I would like to thank the author for bringing me an interesting memory

It is a very interesting novel about clones. The protagonist is more like a link between the clones. Each clone has its own character and a micro-main line. Overall, there is also a long line. It is also a novel novel in the same genre.

If I had to give it, I would give it five stars. It's pretty good, but it's a little lacking. The subject matter is novel, which is not common in transformations, and the content is not bad. I look forward to the follow-up. It's very important not to stop updating eunuchs [cry] [cry] [cry]

I just read the first few dozen chapters, and I don't know what will happen later, but so far it seems that this is definitely a very excellent work. The design of the multi-line witch makes it difficult for the plot to become boring, and the early plot also made me laugh like an aunt. The author's writing is very good. I also know how not to show off my writing. The only shortcoming is that sometimes the description of the battle scenes is a bit boring. (In the later stage, I almost forgot that the protagonist turned out to be a boy)

In fact, I was a little resistant when I first saw the male-to-female Lily, but I couldn't help but it was so beautiful. Later on, I felt that the male mentality had completely transformed into a female. The writing became more and more exciting. Each witch's character has its own strengths and weaknesses and similarities. I think it is very well written! !

It's been a long time since I've read this to leave a comment. Overall, it is a very relaxing book to read. I was originally attracted by the setting of "the witches I created clinging to each other". At present, it seems that the witch basically has a human CP except for internal digestion. I don't know how it will develop in the end. However, I feel that the progress is a little slow. I feel that each witch, including the main body, still has a lot to deal with. Especially for the main body, it took 20 episodes in the control bureau exam to reach C. It will take years and months to achieve the goal of controlling the control bureau. Exploration is 100%, the vest is broken, and new witches are met. It feels like the author is trying to play a big game, but I don't know if it can be finished. For me, as long as the protagonist doesn't reconcile with humans in the end and turns around to help humans capture anomalies or witches, it's acceptable. I just want to watch the witch-faced protagonist and the witch interact with each other in their daily life, which is quite satisfying.

Lily. The heroine has different avatars, each with different emotional lines. It's a refreshing novel. The main character is "loved by everyone" and his clones are very strong.