[Cthulhu + Steampunk + Sequence + Group Portrait]
The burst of muskets illuminates a corner of the ritual circle
The steel ship brings the fragrance of exotic spices
The dragon hovers above the plateau strewn with bones.
The royal army spreads the flames of war to foreign lands
The gods are joking or showing compassion as they walk on the earthly road
The bet is either a new throne or a descent into madness
Looking at everything twisted and collapsed in front of me,
Morse sat on the throne and prayed softly:
"The code is above."
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It may be boring at the beginning and not too exciting, but it will get much better as new maps are slowly unlocked later on.
Reader comments
It's pretty good [smile], but the protagonist's level rises too slowly. Tomato's pace should be faster. It's impossible for you to write more than 1,000 novels like this in Tomato.
It can be seen that the author is also a fan of mysteries, but I hope that the subsequent plot and settings will have more of my own characteristics.
Good, good. Very good, nice description of scenes and action. It feels very good. It's huge in terms of the current new world view. But the term codex is not an accurate description here. I prefer the look of a serial book. Saw this title and introduction. I've seen a man wearing a standard black and white uniform holding a codex. Declare the other party's death sentence solemnly and solemnly. Use the Code to guide the rules of heaven and earth. But no. Also, in the first stage of the Silver Series, you are a beginner, but in the second stage, you become a puzzler. There is almost no connection between the two.
Okay, just a little less
From now on, the writing is quite good. Is the author able to name each stage and its ability? There are so many ways. Is the author ready to write it?
Is the plot too tight? Just after finishing one thing, another thing happens just after sitting down. Is the plot too intense? Write it in a calmer way. Events are always passively caused. I just woke up after taking a nap today and there is something. Wait until it is over and calm down. After all, there can't be so many things in the capital.
Praise the great Kemeow [laughing]
At present it seems ok
A remake of Lord of Mysteries
Very good, the rating is definitely low
Lord of Mysteries style
A journey of survival that started with a hang-up is okay
It would be better if the protagonist has a fiefdom٩(♡㉨♡ )۶
It's a bit similar to the Western fantasy of Lord of Mysteries and Whispering Poems, very good
It's very well written, keep up the good work and don't be a eunuch.
The writing is good and the language skills are also good.
It feels a bit like the Lord of Mysteries, looking forward to it
It's well written, the plot has ups and downs, and the pace is good. For books with a rating of 9.5 Or above, go for the author [Adore] [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece] [Already Planted] [Add One to Bookshelf]
It's pretty good [smile], but the protagonist's level rises too slowly. Tomato's pace should be faster. It's impossible for you to write more than 1,000 novels like this in Tomato.
It can be seen that the author is also a fan of mysteries, but I hope that the subsequent plot and settings will have more of my own characteristics.
Good, good. Very good, nice description of scenes and action. It feels very good. It's huge in terms of the current new world view. But the term codex is not an accurate description here. I prefer the look of a serial book. Saw this title and introduction. I've seen a man wearing a standard black and white uniform holding a codex. Declare the other party's death sentence solemnly and solemnly. Use the Code to guide the rules of heaven and earth. But no. Also, in the first stage of the Silver Series, you are a beginner, but in the second stage, you become a puzzler. There is almost no connection between the two.
Okay, just a little less
From now on, the writing is quite good. Is the author able to name each stage and its ability? There are so many ways. Is the author ready to write it? Is the plot too tight? Just after finishing one thing, another thing happens just after sitting down. Is the plot too intense? Write it in a calmer way. Events are always passively caused. I just woke up after taking a nap today and there is something. Wait until it is over and calm down. After all, there can't be so many things in the capital.
Praise the great Kemeow [laughing]
At present it seems ok
A remake of Lord of Mysteries
Very good, the rating is definitely low
Lord of Mysteries style
A journey of survival that started with a hang-up is okay
It would be better if the protagonist has a fiefdom٩(♡㉨♡ )۶
It's a bit similar to the Western fantasy of Lord of Mysteries and Whispering Poems, very good
It's very well written, keep up the good work and don't be a eunuch.
The writing is good and the language skills are also good.
It feels a bit like the Lord of Mysteries, looking forward to it
It's well written, the plot has ups and downs, and the pace is good. For books with a rating of 9.5 Or above, go for the author [Adore] [Sparrow Eater Masterpiece] [Already Planted] [Add One to Bookshelf]