[Cthulhu + steampunk + sequences + ensemble cast]
Gunfire flashes, illuminating a corner of the ritual array.
Ironclad steamships bring the fragrance of spices from distant lands.
Dragons circle above a plateau strewn with bones.
The royal army spreads the flames of war across the lands of foreign peoples.
Gods walk among mortals, amused or compassionate.
The stakes are a newly claimed divine throne, or a descent into madness.
Watching everything before him twist and collapse,
Morse sits on the throne and prays softly:
“By the Code.”
The opening may feel a little dull, without many exciting payoffs, but it gets much better once new maps gradually unlock later on.
It's pretty good 🙂, but the protagonist's level rises too slowly. Tomato's pace should be faster. It's impossible for you to write more than 1,000 novels like this in Tomato.
It can be seen that the author is also a fan of mysteries, but I hope that the subsequent plot and settings will have more of my own characteristics.
Good, good. Very good, nice description of scenes and action. It feels very good. It's huge in terms of the current new world view. But the term codex is not an accurate description here. I prefer the look of a serial book. Saw this title and introduction. I've seen a man wearing a standard black and white uniform holding a codex. Declare the other party's death sentence solemnly and solemnly. Use the Code to guide the rules of heaven and earth. But no. Also, in the first stage of the Silver Series, you are a beginner, but in the second stage, you become a puzzler. There is almost no connection between the two.
From now on, the writing is quite good. Is the author able to name each stage and its ability? There are so many ways. Is the author ready to write it? Is the plot too tight? Just after finishing one thing, another thing happens just after sitting down. Is the plot too intense? Write it in a calmer way. Events are always passively caused. I just woke up after taking a nap today and there is something. Wait until it is over and calm down. After all, there can't be so many things in the capital.
Okay, just a little less
Lord of Mysteries style
Very good, the rating is definitely low
A remake of Lord of Mysteries
It's very well written, keep up the good work and don't be a eunuch.
At present it seems ok