Furry, If There Are Two Opportunities

It's a bit of a hit, but I want to keep reading for some reason. The growth of the little fox is inexplicably a bit satisfying. However, the article is different and has 10,000 words. It can be more streamlined. Some parts are too cumbersome. The beginning can be modified to be more attractive. This book is quite to my liking, and I hope that by the time it is finished, the author will not lose confidence. [Eat melon]

The writing style is very good [like] I like this kind of story that is not too biased towards the Internet style. The worldview is also good. Nowadays, few online writers can come up with an independent worldview for their works. I hope the author can persevere () I don't necessarily have to say how much more will be added every day, just keep updating so that readers can see the ending [laughs]

I always feel that there is a referential style of writing that can arouse emotions, momentary tension, depression, contradictions, and divisions. The details of the inner narrative and psychological perception make it very immersive, the language is sharp and concise, and the expression is also a characteristic. I have not read much Western literature, and it is very similar to the ones in magazines. The subjective aesthetic is not bad, the details are appropriate, and it is a refreshing reading experience. The author may have deliberately practiced and imitated it, but I have a small suggestion. You can add translation notes after each new English word. I am not good at English and have a poor memory of words at a glance, especially in novels. Well, I have said a lot, the danger lurking in the darkness, the fear of the ancient unknown, the indescribable... Finally, I wish the author to finish the book and take care of your health.

There are very few people who write seriously now. I hope more people will read the author's books awa

It's so cool, I can write 10,000 words a day, brother, you are so talented [crying]

I can give it five stars. In a tomato environment, this is a treasure [eating melon]

It's okay, but it's a bit lacking. Give it a four-star rating to encourage your creation.

Come on, author, it's pretty good.

I like this style (ºº ) It's delicious [laughs]

I really want to have a friend

The writing is very good and the content is thought-provoking But it's really depressing

Very beautiful The protagonist is not brainless and very decisive

Give up [Innocence] and change [Soul] Full of [Determination] Embrace [Cold-blooded] But in this sad world where swords are facing each other, only love can change everything... Right?

Really nice looking, overall dark Come on, author＾0＾~