After Passing Through the Book, I Saved Long Aotian

"It's been a long journey to become an immortal. As a mere mortal, I have been able to reach where I am today only by fighting against the earth and the sky. I never put my life in the hands of others." "The sect has entrusted me with this important task. I believe that what you are asking for is more than just this bone-eroding orchid." His eyes swept over Lin Wei, Xie Moshi, and Xi Wuji. "It is also to sharpen you so-called geniuses-to grind away dependence, crush luck, and temper the instinct of survival and unyielding character in a real desperate situation." - Qin Xiao. I don't know how the book describes Qin Xiao's "darkness", but in these few sentences the author completely establishes the character of Qin Xiao. In a good book, the characters should not be purely good or purely bad, and the descriptions cannot be single, such as the richness of human nature, sincere emotions, and sufficient self-interest. Readers cannot evaluate the quality of the characters. In my opinion, it can be considered a good book. Come on author, I support you🥰

I thought about it for a long time and really wanted to give the teacher a good evaluation, but I found that I couldn't write it at all. I'm really not good at praising others (I refuse to do reading comprehension bushi). The teacher's writing is really beautiful!! I like it very much. When I saw the fantasy chapter, I cried when I read it. I felt that Qin Xiao's character became fuller at once. Oh my god, I really like the look of Li Yi riding a horse. The boyish anger, the step-by-step emotional line, I felt extremely comfortable watching it, and finally I didn't like it out of nowhere! (Yes) Oh my God, my own author! I am willing to watch a minute and a half of the commercial for you! (Bushi) Why doesn't everyone come to see it? Everyone comes to see it! The writing is really great, the two little ones are very cute, I hope to see their final sweet ending! (Sweet!)

Qin Xiao's character is very interesting, possessive, paranoid, and a husband. Shen Lioyi became his accident during the long journey of cultivating immortality. Xiao Qin doesn't know how to love, and no one has taught him how to love. But he could learn it for Shen Luoyi. It was the braised pork after guiding Xiao Shen to practice sword making. It was a promise made by only him [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The ice that has never changed in his eyes gradually came to life because of Xiao Shen's arrival. He would get jealous when Xiao Shen said he liked Lin Wei, and he would get jealous because of Lin Wei's approach when going to the cafeteria to eat. He is often jealous [thinking] (I feel sorry for Xiao Qin Xiao who has not caught up with his wife for a second [grievance]) The author must rest and not be tired when writing, but the speed of coding cannot stop [shy][shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very nice book. It's really heartbreaking to see that not many people have read this book. The plot is really attractive. The author wrote it in three parts, and each part is progressive in terms of emotions. The characters are created very well. Qin always insisted on becoming stronger in the early stage, but after meeting Shen Lieyi later, he changed to live for Shen. There is also Xie Moshe who has a cold face but only tolerates Lin Wei, Lin Wei who cares about his fellow disciples not to be pampered because of his status, etc. Are all very good. The logic is very smooth, and there are no abrupt plots. The article is not finished yet, but you can see that the author has buried some baggage in the first part, and I am looking forward to the content about these baggage in the following part. In fact, I feel that the author's writing is quite in-depth (maybe it's because the articles on cultivating immortals that I read before were very easy). The road to cultivating immortals is not easy, and there must be some requirements for the character of the cultivators. I still like what I see here. Both people are trying to communicate and solve problems. Although there are inevitable obstacles in the middle, for those you like, you should work hard to maintain the relationship between the two people. My review felt very dry and did not express the advantages of this book very well. I should really learn Chinese reading comprehension [laughs]. I hope more people will read this good book!

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Haokan! I especially like the description of Qin Xiao's fantasyland. The writing style is very good! Why is there no one?

It is strange that no one can share this wonderful book with me. After a brief glance, I was surprised that there is such a good book in Tomato. I am excited to comment on the book. I hope you all will enjoy it with me. It's so good, so good~

So pretty! ! Before I went to bed, I read a few chapters in a daze and barely understood it. After a few days, I read it again during the day and finally came across this delicious character and setting! ! Can't wait to comment! ! What a delicious little couple! !

The writing is great, why are there so few people?

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That's it again! ! ! You can always find good novels in the book shortage! ! ! Why are there so few people! ! ! The author has a big competition! ! ! I will become your believer [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [Love] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

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Ahhhhhhh, the only shortcoming is that the update is too slow, not enough to watch, ahhhhhhh, why is it not finished, not enough to watch [crying][crying][crying][crying]

I have read Chapter 61 now. I particularly like the description of Chapter 61. The author writes it so well, it seems like I can see the scene of a woman being stuffed into a sedan chair. Sharp sounds and festive suona sounds mixed together. Becomes a wail. It's rare to see such solid writing skills in Tomato, and the image is very strong! I feel that the writing is much better than the articles I wrote at the top of the list with high traffic! Writing about ancient times and cultivation genres especially tests your writing skills. The author writes really well! Come on!

It's really beautiful I suddenly thought of a song while reading the introduction If we were too surprised when we first met, Enough to remember for hundreds of years, The passing time is just enough time to understand, If I want to describe this inexplicable feeling, Appropriateness can only last a thousand years, Spring, summer, autumn and winter are not considered changes; It's just the season, Crowds of people walk through the forest, A you appears, You seem to carry a mark, Feeling familiar mobilizes memory, The paintbrush in my mind, Edited a few times to make it clearer. Afraid to get close, panicking and wanting to give up, But I'm even more afraid of missing it like this, I would really regret it. [Laugh]

Come on, the writing is super good [shy][shy] I have decided to follow this book

Oh my God, it's so beautiful (✧∀✧). Can the misunderstanding between the young lovers be resolved quickly? It was tied in one day [crying] [crying]

It looks great. The score can't be so low.

Good-looking [Adoration] I dig for gold in tomatoes every day

It's really well written, no worse than other W articles. A rating of more than six points is too humiliating.

It's nice to look at, I like the protagonist's character

It's very beautiful, keep it up

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The boss's writing is very beautiful, and it feels good to torture people.

They look good, both of them are good babies.

Delicious, love to eat😋😋😋😋😋Little couple 99

Awesome, awesome, realistic, awesome

Not bad, good, good-looking

It looks good, praise the author [blowing kiss]