Pokemon: A Starbound Dream Journey

Beautifully written It feels very much like the Pokémon anime, with that boyish feeling (sigh) In other words, it feels like a game, especially when facing evil organizations or something like that. One thing is the problem of paragraphing. It seems that some paragraphs are too long and people have no desire to read them. I personally like the emotional scenes between the protagonists🥰that kind of cute and light feeling

I finished reading it in one sitting, it's so beautiful! Both the characters and the plot are very interesting. The young relationship between the male protagonists is also very well written. The content of the gym is also very interesting. The Pokémon are also very cute. They are cute and strong and feel at ease. Lin Xi and Luo Xian are very gentle to the Pokémon! The supporting cast is also very good! They are all very unique! Except for that villain organization, everyone else is a good boy! Goddess, your writing is so good. I will always support you [laughs]

First of all, I would like to praise the author for his good writing style. The description of the characters is very detailed, but some sentences are embellished with too many words, which makes it look a bit boring and not as amazing as it was at the beginning. There are a little bit of language problems in the article, which generally tends to repeat the meaning. Then there is the plot. Personally I don't think it is particularly attractive, it is still a bit cliché, but it still has the author's own ideas, just like the gym in the article, but it is limited to those with special ideas. The plot is still a very ordinary growth-oriented kind, not as expressive as the comment section said 🤔

Very good. As a travel article, it is not a template. Every place is unique and innovative. It feels very suitable for the Pokémon anime.

I like it so much, it has the same flavor as watching Pokémon before!! 🍽🍽🍽🍽🍽🍽🍽🍽😭😭😭😭😭😭😇😇😇😇😇😇🥹 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

It's very interesting to watch, the ambiguous youthful feeling between the characters is well written, the friendship and tacit understanding between the partners are also very good, and the battles are also very clear! I've re-swiped it several times, but it's not enough!

I really like this book 😘 The interaction and ambiguous atmosphere between Luo Xian and Lin Xi made me look at the corner of my mouth and the sun side by side 🥰 The battle part is also well written, with the flavor of animation 👍 Come on, the author is great 👍

It looks very comfortable and has a feeling of the real Pokémon world. The character creation is also very good. The emotions of the two little animals are ignorant and innocent. The relationship between humans and Pokémon is warm. This is the way to get along with Pokémon. All in all, this is a very good Pokémon article😋😋😋

Looks good! This feeling is super comfortable! I hope you will continue to work hard! 🤭

It looks good, I like it, good luck to the author