The Age of Picking up Leaks: Starting with an Egg

How to say it? The writing is quite good and the writing style is very delicate. It's just that there are too many psychological descriptions in the early stage. Recommended to delete. That's probably why the rating is so low. The settings are getting better and better later. Very pretty. I just finished reading it in one sitting.

It's quite good-looking, the heroine is a ruthless person, capable of being stubborn, sensible and sober. The original owner was in poor health. It would be normal if his personality suddenly changed, he rebelled wildly, and he was killed by the wrong hands of his best family members. The heroine endured it until she was about to go to the countryside before vacating the house. She was a wolf killer. I hope that when the heroine meets the hero, she will not turn into a love-minded idiot who gives away golden fingers, and tell the hero about time travel and space. It's good to be content, there's no need to gamble.

The author's writing is too detailed, he has been exaggerating the environment where the heroine lives, and all the actions are enlarged and modified, which makes it very tiring to watch. There should be a clear subject (focus on characterization), and a blurred background or white space (blur processing), so that the priorities can be clearly defined. A small action environment is enlarged repeatedly, which is very tiring to watch. Except for this issue, the author has written very well elsewhere.

The heroine's psychological activities and emotions are so strong, and she also has an indescribable sense of madness, a bit like the sense of déjà vu that occurs when someone suffers from mental problems due to sudden death.

It's very watchable, and the heroine's performance before going to the countryside is wonderful. But the author seems to have made a division for the heroine. It seems that after going to the countryside, the heroine has a brighter future and no longer has any worries brought by her family. But in that special era, the police were very sensitive to enemy agents and criminals, especially if they met the sharp and sharp Anshi police who were injured and retired from the special forces. It was possible that they would pay attention to the heroine when the robbery case of the heroine's house could not be solved, and then discover suspicions and many unreasonable things. For example, before going to the countryside, all the subsidies she had before going to the countryside were taken away by her parents. After the heroine went to the countryside, she only hunted pig grass. How could she support herself for two work points a day? How could the heroine receive large packages from "home" many times (when her home was actually stolen and her life was difficult)? Originally, as a novel, people would say that it doesn't need to be so logical, it just feels good. But in fact, the performance of the heroine before going to the countryside in this book really surprised me. Her rigorous logic and high IQ are fully reflected. I can say without any hesitation that if the character of the heroine can be seen throughout the whole book, this will be another masterpiece. So as an old bookworm, I can't help but set high standards. The author forgives me [laughs] So I hope that the heroine will behave more cautiously in the later period. Of course, it does not mean that the heroine should be depressed. After all, if you have the conditions and ability to live, you can enjoy it. I just suggest that the heroine thinks carefully as she did before going to the countryside, and does not reveal any flaws or traces. It was really an era when a bite of meat could be smelled by those who were sensitive to the oily smell. So I assumed that every time the heroine came out from the space to eat meat or fruit, the space would be deodorized intelligently without the need for the heroine to brush her teeth and wash herself. In addition, the system says that the heroine owns a small spiritual spring space. So what is the consumption of the spiritual spring when using the spiritual spring during daily planting? Will there be insufficient energy in the future and how to make up for it. After all, the heroine's soul is bound to the small spirit spring space, and will be reincarnated with the heroine in the future. The energy of the spirit spring must be maintained and carefully calculated. In any case, this is a novel worth reading. The above issues I mentioned may be purely redundant. The author may have provided additional explanations in the later stages. After all, the book is only a few hundred thousand words long before it is written. The author must update regularly. I look forward to it and have collected it [smile]. By the way, the author defines the heroine as sober and self-centered, which I agree with and appreciate very much. I hope that the heroine can always be "self-conscious" in the future, and don't help the poor!

Objectively speaking, the first few dozen chapters are indeed a bit cumbersome and a lot of content is repetitive, but after reading the plot description becomes clearer, the heroine's living situation has also improved a lot. Overall, it is a pleasant article, and I encourage you to continue writing [Like]

The story is a good one, but the way it is narrated makes people dislike it... The author knows how to communicate with people. It is obvious that the way he describes it will make people feel disconnected at all times, but he still continued to torture himself and finished reading it. [Praise]

The writing style of this book is rare in Tomato. The descriptions of psychology and various action details are super detailed. The heroine is really meticulous when traveling through the book and is cautious to the extreme. The various forbearances and inactions before going to the countryside are not very friendly to readers who like to read fast-paced and exciting stories about the heroine. It's quite good to calm down and watch slowly.

I like this kind of heroine The heroine's character is not suitable for a male protagonist

The author describes a lot of narration and narration in the hearts of the characters, and it seems quite heavy. I don't know if it will get better in the future. I personally feel like it. If you like this kind of writing, you can read it...

There's a feeling of exerting too much force

The author's writing style is very good. This is a different era novel, very similar to the spy war drama of the Republic of China [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. The details, atmosphere, and plot are all like spy novels or suspense novels

Reality is reality, but looking at it makes me want to hit someone [laughing and crying]

The writing is excellent, much better than mine. He has a quick mind and is very good at choosing words and sentences. The author should be highly flexible, with many monologues and extremely rich inner activities. Mobility needs to be developed, but IQ is okay. However, adhering to the characteristics of Oriental women, they cannot carry it with their shoulders or hands. No matter how high the CPU speed of the brain is, it cannot withstand the insufficient HDD space of the layout. The whole thing is very cute, but I didn't realize it myself. The text chapters are very interesting, a bit like Wenquxing. I hope to keep up the good work, not in terms of words, but in terms of identity and motivation. Too soft. Too much is not enough.

It's very realistic, the characters and scenes are vivid, especially the heroine's inner activities. If you are too weak, you can only endure the reality.

The beginning is very good, but I was very nervous... I felt that the golden fingers at the back were too wide, and it didn't look that good.

Although there are too many thoughts in my mind! But it also shows that Er Yatou is too weak and needs time to recover! It's very good and true. There is nothing so incredible that you can feel better immediately after eating it! Come on, I hope you recover soon and clear them out.

The front is a bit verbose But it doesn't matter, I can bear it After the latter system appeared, I felt that the world view was not only about the age, but also very grand. In fact, it was obvious from the beginning that the heroine was unwilling to be ordinary, so she must leave the earth and become an immortal and an ancestor. Come on, author.

It was particularly well written before going to the countryside.

There are still a lot of gold bars hidden on the table, and they move one by one without making a sound, as only novels can do✍[laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Why do the three father and son have the same name?

Although it is written in this era, the heroine is really the most intelligent heroine I have ever seen in these novels. In short, it is very worth reading.

It's very beautiful, the writing is very delicate and realistic, and you'll be immersed in it immediately. I feel like I feel the same way, I don't want to miss a chapter („• ֊ •„)੭

It is really well written. It does not focus on the emotional lines like other period novels, but focuses on the growth of the female protagonist. So far, the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are very natural, slow-burning and long-lasting. If you like this kind of story, you can rush it without thinking.

It's okay, the heroine's IQ is online, as long as she doesn't get charmed by the hero later, [crying] How do I remember the article I was looking for in the completion module?

After the heroine gained mental power, she always felt that the people around her were trying to harm her, and she felt tense and tired.

I guess the heroine is not his child

I still think I can watch it. The main character is just a bit timid.

It's still looking good at this stage. Although the protagonist is described as very cautious, it is right to be cautious in order to survive.

My family, this is really good, [crying] I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. I have been short of books recently. I originally read it with the attitude of giving it a try, but this content is very attractive to me. It is really so good [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] Thank you for the 100 chapters of a big day.