At the opening ceremony, the moment my last name was displayed on the branch crystal ball, the whole place fell into dead silence.
"Children of the Yinhui family?" The principal's beard trembled with excitement, "Quickly inform Eye of the Stars and Hands of Hell!"
I was confused: "Who?"
It turns out that my parents are the legendary heroic couple who saved the magical world.
From then on, campus life completely collapsed: the principal was my dad's crush, and the strongest witch was my mom's best friend.
"Don't come over here!" I screamed while holding onto the wall of honor, "Those two heroes are just ordinary middle-aged couples in my family!"
On the wall are photos of parents with kind smiles, and an inscription below: A magical legend that saves the world.
Reader comments
It's obvious that the author has some ideas, so I'll say a few more words (please don't comment if you don't like my personal opinion)
The subject matter is good. I skipped through about ten chapters. It has an original plot. If you want to read some HP or interesting stories, you can put it away.
The writing is good, the writing style is good, the details are well described, the paragraphs are generally long, some descriptions are a bit stiff, and the language still needs to be optimized (I don't know how to evaluate Professor Siebel's language, it feels weird). I feel that many people will think that it is a second grader.
The description of the group portraits is a bit weak. It is recommended to add more sub-highlight characters.
In addition, it is recommended that the author think more about the plot development design, work out the emotional value of the plot, and polish the behavioral logic of the characters (whether passers-by or whoever they are).
I recommend friends with patience to try a different flavor. 4 Stars is an encouragement.
It's obvious that the author has some ideas, so I'll say a few more words (please don't comment if you don't like my personal opinion) The subject matter is good. I skipped through about ten chapters. It has an original plot. If you want to read some HP or interesting stories, you can put it away. The writing is good, the writing style is good, the details are well described, the paragraphs are generally long, some descriptions are a bit stiff, and the language still needs to be optimized (I don't know how to evaluate Professor Siebel's language, it feels weird). I feel that many people will think that it is a second grader. The description of the group portraits is a bit weak. It is recommended to add more sub-highlight characters. In addition, it is recommended that the author think more about the plot development design, work out the emotional value of the plot, and polish the behavioral logic of the characters (whether passers-by or whoever they are). I recommend friends with patience to try a different flavor. 4 Stars is an encouragement.