HP: I'm Reforming the Wizarding World at Hogwarts

I have rarely read such a true Slytherin villainy novel recently. I like the heroine so much. The heroine is such a succubus that I was fascinated through the screen. I read a sentence that I think is very suitable for the heroine: The image of an evil woman doesn't even need to be evil. As long as she has the same ambition as a man Ego, ambition, cold-blooded, egoistic, selfish She will become a villain And the gender change He's a real man

A very nice book! I hope Regulus and the heroine can have a perfect ending in the end. I can't wait to see the scene where the heroine becomes stronger. Alas, I have such a complicated view of Sirius. He cares about his family but doesn't care about their feelings. He is such a stubborn man, completely immersed in his own world and unable to extricate himself.

It's a very novel setting. The first time I saw it was the cp article between Sirius's sister and Severus. Moreover, the descriptions of the characters in this book are quite friendly and can be regarded as very objective descriptions. It is a ray of light for Severus. Trust and affirmation are very important to him, especially when he was a child. To be honest, Severus is really a good friend as long as he agrees with people and ignores his blunt mouth, hahaha. There is really no one who Sirius cares about. He is very kind to his own people. I hope he can be nicer to the heroine and Regulus this time... And the part in the article describing Sirius's choice for resistance is quite right. Including Barty Jr. And James, their portrayals are quite three-dimensional. The author's description of Lily is very similar to what I imagined. Lily has a kind of innocent cruelty. The article does not describe any person in a negative light. It is written in a three-dimensional way, both black and white. It is a very good article. I also like the character of the heroine very much. She has a strong temper and a stable mood. I really can't stand some sadistic stories about the heroine! This book is very good! ! There are too few ratings. Please help the author improve the ratings and get more traffic. So far it's been great, I hope it can continue like this and I want to finish the book.

I like this heroine so much! I have always believed that only such a dazzling witch who combines wisdom, talent, and strength can truly attract SS. Therefore, in the article, SS's secret poking and unconscious attention to the heroine, I personally think it is completely reasonable! For me, this is a rare and good article. I hope the author can keep writing and never get into trouble! [Love][love][love]

It's the first time I've seen a story about the protagonist from the perspective of Sirius's sister, and the CP is Sif (Guaishoushou). The past life of the terrifying boss is also very interesting. The heroine is in poor health and needs all kinds of malicious emotions to nourish her, but it doesn't make people feel like a dodder at all. Without knowing the plot, she plans to poach the bald corner (underlings) step by step. The protagonist who is smart and strong and good at digging people's hearts always makes people feel happy (blow a kiss against the wall) I hope more people who like HP derivatives will discover this seedling work (delicious)

It's great. It's one of the top three Sri Lankan texts I've read so far. It's probably ranked second among my readers. The author is very optimistic about you! As for the heroine, she is indeed one of the best in the novels I have read recently. The heroine is extremely ambitious, leadership, and provocative. She is not a nymphomaniac heroine. Although there is a weird buff, the heroine's own ability in the novel makes her as strong as she is today. The heroine can definitely become the first female head of the Black family, but she may also have a sisterly relationship with Rael. At first, I saw that the cp was brought in by Si's teacher, but as it progressed, I felt that the height of the heroine was a bit unworthy of Si as shown in the current article. If the heroine was just because Si bothered to boil the potion for himself as a relationship entry point, I personally felt that it was inconsistent with the early image. Si's ambition did not show the intensity of the heroine. It would be more suitable to be a big heroine or a small Barty. (Personal opinion, the author is listed above) Everyone writes very well.

This article really implements the title from beginning to end! All I can say is, well done! The main background is in the parent generation. As the twin sister of Regulus, Ellie is really weak, pitiful and helpless at the beginning. Even though her emotions have fluctuated greatly in the past of the metropolis, as a weirdo, as long as she can absorb enough malice, she can repair her body, and this is very easy in Slytherin~ After meeting Voldemort, you open the door to a new world, do something to attract the other person's attention, and successfully lay the Dark Mark. This is a real portable power bank. This is a gluttonous feast! Repairing the body, mastering strange rules, and directly using the Dark Mark to reversely control Voldemort, I have to say, this feels great! He was chased and killed because he was unable to escape, and was asked to please Sister Bella. The Horcruxes were harvested and exploited as laborers. If he wanted to destroy them, he was forced to cause trouble. Then he worked with Gellert as the savior and successfully reformed the magic world and formulated new rules... To be honest, Voldemort in this article is so miserable that one can't help but sympathize with him૮₍ ˃̶ ꇴ ˂̶ ₎ა, but the career line of the heroine is really going so well, so let's just use it as a stepping stone for Voldemort~ Anyway, the last diary master Tom also realized his original intention-when I fell in love with the Dark Magic Defense Professor ૮₍ˊᗜˋ₎ა, and I had a baby girl with Bella, in Gryffindor (I never expected this ending ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა) As for the emotional line, the family line that Ellie cares about the most, Rael is no longer ignored and controlled (touched ⁰̴̷̷ ˙̮ ⁰̴̷̷); Sirius was trained like a dog by Ellie (well, he is a dog); Bella is still crazy, but she also cares about her family, and in the end she successfully dispelled her charm, and is still the proud Miss Black; although the love line does not account for a lot, but It's so cute~ Ellie, who is perceptive, noticed Sifu's little thoughts early on, but she didn't say anything. Hey~ It's so funny~ It's super sweet to see the two little ones tugging back and forth~ It's so cute~ Although he was caught and killed by his brother-in-law in the middle, he succeeded in getting the upper hand! Proud. Jpg～ੈ♡‧₊˚_( :⁍ )_Has fainted... The creation of other characters is also lively and fun. Little Barty, who is extremely filial, has the advantage of destroying his father's workplace. After finishing it, he asked: Why don't you go to work if you love work? ૮₍ˊᗜˋ₎ა; The small group of robbers was destroyed, and the mice could only be mice in the dark! Lily has also gained the pursuit of growth and career; Garrett said that there are too many students that Al cares about, and he can't keep an eye on them (but he still has to keep an eye on them!!!)... Lightning protection: The heroine herself is weird, belongs to the chaotic camp, and is not a good person, so she has done many bad things and has no morality at all. Let me explain in advance. If you are concerned, you avoid it in advance and accuse her of killing people and being immoral in the comment area... Is she a villain to be defeated? The entire magical world has been reformed and reborn. All the main plot characters have survived, and everyone has a bright future ~ Highly recommended! So pretty~

It's quite good-looking. The heroine is ambitious and powerful. Although she has a golden finger, she is not buggy. Although she has the ability to rule as a rule in her past life, she is constrained by her current body. It makes people nervous when will this constraint be lifted x The story line before the past life became a rule has now been written from the extra chapter. At first, I thought that the heroine was a naturally formed rule, but I didn't expect it to be because of this kind of hatred? Or unwilling twisting has become the rule, poor sister;; I hope this life can have a happy ending in HP In addition, speaking of Sirius, it seems that I have rarely seen this kind of choice from the perspective of family and friends before. Indeed, he is a very good friend, but it is very painful for my sister and Regulus. I hope it will change in the future TT

Very good, the heroine has a very charming personality and is good at debating. The heroine is growing stronger and stronger, and her body has recovered in the later period. Recommended to watch I would like to ask, after the heroine and Snape got together, did Snape change his surname to Black? After all, the heroine should carry forward the noble Black, and there is no need to pass on the surname of Snape, an alcoholic father.

The ending is coming, it's really beautiful. The next generation of parents. The heroine turned out to be a weirdo with rules in the weird world. Later, she was reincarnated as Rael's twin sister. She was in poor health and had a heart disease, but she became stronger little by little through malicious absorption. The heroine is really changing the magical world, and the heroine is not a good person. The heroine in the subsequent battle was deliberately condoned and even promoted for the sake of subsequent development. The heroine is a careerist, maybe a bit high-level, but it's very cool haha. CP is Snape, and he did not act as a little sun to warm Snape like Lily and make Snape fall in love with her. The heroine of this article is a bad person in front of Snape, and she gradually falls in love with her in the subsequent development. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is relatively small, but it is very sweet. The female protagonist likes to tease Snape, and they soon got together after realizing that they liked him. Snape provided a lot of help to the heroine's career. The heroine has established a newspaper to control public opinion, and has real-time barrages, which is very interactive. The battle is written logically and smoothly, and the cruelty can be seen, but it is not as cruel as the writing, and the pace is very good.

I also like Sister Bao, she's so charming, and I'm really tired of the kind of stories where the women are stronger and the men are stronger. This is the kind where everyone is excellent and shines in their respective areas of expertise. Maybe I am weak in eloquence, but I admire Sister Bao very much for her inspiring words, but now I am almost tied with her and I can't bear to part with her.

The heroine Ellie is really charming. She is decisive in killing, super talented and has a frailty buff. The plot is quite interesting and she feels like she is in contrast to her brother Sirius. The heroine is very protective of her brother Regulus, which can be regarded as fulfilling my regret. Someone always stands with Regulus. The most important thing is that the writing is also super good, which is so rare｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡.

I personally like strong heroines, the more powerful the better, but I like strong ones who are logical, rational and powerful, and can handle the relationships around them well, but it does not mean being tyrannical and abandoning everything. I think being strong should be able to control everything. So far, it seems that the heroine is quite suitable, and the plot is also very smooth (I am a neutral-Snape kind of person, and I don't like to say too much about which side is worse or worse. I think all kinds of games are political, but Voldemort can't see the situation clearly, so he relies on violent rule, which is doomed to fail. Therefore, as long as the follow-up of this article does not show Sirius leading others to rebel against him without thinking, suddenly starting to blackmail Dumbledore without thinking, and the heroine suddenly starting to kill without thinking, I think it will be a very, very, very good article!!! Don't be too Mary Sue, but give the heroine a little bit of privileges outside this world, it's perfect. A great article, I hope the follow-up will be better and better

Personally, I enjoyed watching it. The female protagonist is a reformer and a practical person. She has strong abilities. Various activities in the school have very clear purposes. She runs newspapers to open up people's wisdom, introduces debates and collisions of ideas, and slowly changes the rigid magic world. Finally lead Blake to the top! The heroine broke into tears at the moment when she broke Xiao Lei's prophecy at all costs. My sister was really very kind to Regulus! The emotional scene between the heroine and Severus is a little relief in the tense situation. After brainstorming step by step, there is a little dessert of love.

I like this kind of ambitious and self-motivated heroine. I read the latest chapter in one night. I didn't read the stories about the previous generation, so I always felt that I didn't belong to the same generation. I couldn't fit in [face covering]. The setting of this article is perfect, and it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable.

Ellie is so charming. And I really like the Black family that Da Da painted. Even Bella, who was particularly annoying before, I also feel the beauty in Da Da's pen.

To be honest, I really like this writing style. It meets my expectations very well. It is humorous and sensible. The heroine knows what she wants very clearly and will not change easily. She is not a nanny group either. A very ideal book, I love it very much.

The heroine Ellie has excellent leadership qualities and matching abilities. She has a super high IQ, very precise and sharp viewpoint logic and language expression, and manages upwards. From her parents to Dumbledore, no one can escape Ellie's tailor-made conspiracy for her, not even Tom Riddle or even Grindelwald. Ellie also has a special dry sense of humor. She would hit Dumbledore and Voldemort with a sudden blow to the soul, which shocked the audience. She was also very funny, hahahahaha. Ellie is good at black magic, researching black magic, and controlling black magic. She went from being controlled by Voldemort (actually and subtly) to confronting Voldemort head-on, defeating Voldemort, controlling him in the opposite direction, and letting Voldemort please Bella. God unfolded😍. Voldemort: A useful wireless power bank, his defeated enemy, a guinea pig in dark magic experiments, and a researcher of curses. The setting is really cool, it's totally different from other cool HPs😘. But the heroine is not a good person. She will also kill people for reasons such as profit and reputation, or worsen the situation and increase casualties. Starting from organizing debate competitions, Ellie changed the concept of wizards step by step in a reasonable and effective manner. She organized and established various societies, activities, and companies for employment of wizards and werewolves. It was a very rigorous outcome for everyone, and even the whole world got a good ending. Promoted the development of world science and technology and economy. The reforms are real reforms. From thoughts to behaviors, from potions and spells to magic weapons, to laws and regulations, there have been leaps and bounds. In the good atmosphere established by Ellie, most people are learning and making progress. Lily's thoughts have expanded, she has taken practical actions, and has the ability to stop school bullying, and she has her own career later. Sri Lankans here can not only have love in the future, but also have more harmonious friendships. The author is very eloquent and logical. He is still very active and sometimes even grabs popular comments himself. I don't know why the author likes to use shit, feces, and cesspits as adjectives. He [covered his face] several times.

This book is super good, highly recommended! ! ! The entire book implements the title, Reforming the Magical World! The heroine is extremely handsome! A born leader! The process of reform is very interesting and I personally like those issues. There may be sacrifices in the process of reform, but it is still "for the greater good", which is one of the reasons why the heroine is so attractive. This book satisfies many regrets. Without the original victory of a life-and-death battle, St. John no longer has to carry a regretful past, Dumbledore no longer has to plan his own death alone, and Harry is no longer the savior who paid the price of both his parents. The final ending was very happy, and Tom finally got what he wanted [laughing]. Finally, I have never seen the ending where my love and I both died in a high tower, and you and your heart are both in midsummer. The author GGAD wrote it very well. Spread flowers for the author! [Blowing kiss]

It's okay. The setting and everything are quite novel and the writing is good, but I feel like I'm being malicious towards Sirius and others. The comment section is full of people who endlessly belittle the Marauders Four and Lily who blindly praise Snape. I don't like to belittle anyone.

It's really well written! Considered my best of the year! The first half is about slowly developing and accumulating strength, and the second half starts with the heroine getting the Voldemort brand power bank. If the heroine is real, it can be said to be the ceiling of the entire story. It's really fun to watch, and it progresses layer by layer, making each wave more exciting than the last. In fact, the emotional line is not written much, but it is still very good to talk to Si Jiao. The whole process of the war is actually very long, very detailed and very exciting. In the end, it can be said that it has a happy ending. I really love those two extra chapters. Everyone in the next generation, such as Harry and Neville, can have a happy childhood. There is also GGAD, Bella has also woken up, and even Tom has become a professor of anti-dark magic as he wished hahahaha [eating melon] All in all, highly recommended! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's rare to see a book that doesn't deviate too much from the character of the original book and still has a main line of its own. It really feels like a parallel world. It's great, and it doesn't describe too much romance. After all, the love between the two people is really not enough to watch when the main line of the world is advancing. Many books with good background stories are ruined by romance... Because they are inappropriate for the time. For example, whether it is the original work or a fanfic of a certain mental hospital, it gives people an inexplicable feeling of war raging outside the window, but the time inside the house is quiet, kissing, hugging and lifting people up [staring]

This is the most beautiful book I've ever read in Sri Lanka! The hostess has a golden finger, but the setting at the beginning makes her unexpectedly interesting! The relationship with Sijiao is not a sudden love, but a discovery in the process of getting along. It is reasonable and delicious. What I love most is the description of the characters. Although the heroine is Snake Yard, the text is not either white or black. The characters all have advantages but do not avoid shortcomings. Especially for Sirius, the older brother, the heroine is so good at training me, I love watching it! ! ! The plot of poaching Voldemort was so fun!

After reading it, I felt very emotional. This rating is completely underestimated. The heroine has a golden finger. It can be considered that her own abilities and the talents originally possessed by the Black blood are so strong. The heroine's personality is indeed very powerful, and she is very good at using words to confuse people. It can be said to be an upgraded and enhanced version of ggad, hahaha. In the heroine's heart, family is the most important thing, and Black's glory is what her family values ​​the most. In order to promote Black's glory, she chose to unify the wizarding world. She went through many hardships, blood donations and sacrifices in the process. In fact, the heroine's ability could kill the source before everything started, but she didn't. Maybe it was because of this that the score was lower. I quite like the villainous heroine, and I don't dislike the heroine making some choices in order to achieve her goals and achieve her career, but I still cry for the victims. But without the heroine, this battle will not end easily, and more people will die. I can't say something very high-sounding, but I don't think the heroine did anything wrong. If Voldemort had been killed from the beginning, it wouldn't be so good. In the end, it would still be a novel. The emotional line with Snape is more thin and long. I can't quite get it, but I still think it's good. What I like most in this movie is the sisterly relationship with Bella, the relationship between Ellie and Regulus, and even the complicated family relationship between Walburga. I always feel like I can't get enough of these, and there are also Uncle Dad and Andromeda who doesn't appear much. I really want to see more. I think the several debates held during the campus period were also very exciting and not boring. The wizarding world in the original book is indeed a mess. By the end of the novel, the heroine Ellie's personal plot has actually been reduced a lot, because this battle was won by many wizards working together to the death, and I also enjoyed watching their battle process. I like many of the original characters written by the author. Hall is my favorite cutie, haha, and the most loyal follower. It's a pity that Ellie's followers don't have much to show for their appearance. I also want to see more of Long Aotian's appearance, surprising everyone. Barty Crouch Jr. Is also my favorite character in the original work. He has a gloomy villain, a controlling father and a weak mother who loves him but has experienced so many changes... In short, he has a better ending in this book. It is really amazing to write about Professor Snape successfully inventing a potion that can restore werewolves to humans. Although this is impossible if it is true, this is a fictional novel, so it is possible to think about it. Lupine was the relatively lucky one among the werewolves. His parents were with him, and he even met Professor Dumbledore who allowed him to enter Hogwarts, where he made lifelong friends. But even he was in agony. Every day he worried that his identity would be exposed, that he would be ostracized by everyone, and that he would hurt others. The situation for the other werewolves only got worse, but now they are able to find themselves again and be normal wizards. The emergence of this wolfsbane potion has saved too many people and families. Although the writing of the final battle felt a bit bland, I was still happy from the bottom of my heart at the end. This time, the shadow of Voldemort truly disappeared from the hearts of the wizards who experienced that war. Children in the younger generation can have a normal and healthy childhood. They do not have to experience a life-and-death victory, and the wizarding world will become better and better.

It's a very good novel. It ranks third among HP's original heroine fanfics. I add a newcomer to my top recommendation list hhh (๑\'ᵕ\'๑)⸝* Elios Black is an excellent Slytherin and can be regarded as lawful evil, but I think she is a progressive person with ability, ambition and skill, and a natural politician. There are many novels with Slytherin heroines, but not many can be written well, and Ellie is in the front row. The emotional line with Snape is also very good, delicate and gentle (in addition, this is one of the few novels that can completely let me forget about the association with the film version of Snape, which is rare! I couldn't relate to it before because of the association). The family line with the Black family is also very delicious. The relationship between the heavily sister-control Rael and the self-awakening Bella and the changes of the Black couple. I like this happy ending! The friendship line is also very well written, please support our Evan Barty bestie group hahaha ^ ^ Also getting along with Diary Tom and having absolute control over the Voldemort series are very interesting. I like the situation where Ellie is in full control. The most important thing is that the characters are all three-dimensional, not OOC, nor stereotyped, nor biased towards one extreme. Everyone has advantages and disadvantages, and they are getting better step by step (here we focus on praising everyone in the Predator, whose growth is obvious to all). The rhythm of the plot is very suitable. It is not sloppy and boring. I read it in three or four days. I am not half tired of watching the story of the heroine who is a micro-group portrait. Good reviews and good reviews - ̗̀ ෆ(˶'ᵕ'˶)ෆ ̖́-Actually, I'm reluctant to read it, but it's the best ending for the story to stay here. The magical world will definitely get better and better under the leadership of Ellie, leading to our glorious future⸜(>ᰔ<)⸝

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! The only person who can find a copy of CP in Tomato is Snape, but I am really touched by Snape's writing! ! ! 🥺🥺🥺ꈨຶꎁꈨຶ

I really like this work 🥰, I really like the heroine and Rael's unreserved trust before, I kind of like them, hee hee 😁

It ranks second among the fanfics I have read. It has a debate section and is very cool. It has given many people a perfect ending, such as ggad, Tom's Professor's Dream, Harry's Childhood, Sirius has a serious job, and confronts the differences about bullying. Black and White Magic. Although the plot involves a wide range of characters and there are many characters appearing, it will be dazzling, but it is really exciting and worth reading! Still the final article.

I can say it is the top HP fanfic I have ever read! The heroine is Black and she actually uses the rules to use the Dark Mark to counter-control Voldemort (it's like she came from Tiangang!) It's really cool! The only slight bit of abuse in the whole text is the part where Ellie is marked by Voldemort, but everything is within Ellie's plan! This is also the first time (my first time, maybe even earlier) that I have seen the issue of bullying in Hogwarts raised and dealt with in an HP fanfic. In addition, overthrowing the Ministry of Magic and directly establishing a new Ministry is so cool! There are only two chapters in the extra chapter, so I haven't read enough. I really want to see the development of the descendants and how they view the heroine, but it is really appropriate to end the book with the Iron Hat King branch. The beginning of the offspring generation and the end of the text. In addition, the characterization of all the characters in this book is very good. I feel that there are no OOC characters. Snape also has a good ending. This magical genius became the head of the Magic Research Department as soon as he graduated... The article uses Sirius's dog training behavior wonderfully. In addition, it is the first time I see Voldemort asking Bella to please Bella and serve as Bella's mistress. It's so cool hahahaha

Very good, the missing one is because I like the heroine and Little Barty better. The comment section said that they are evil dragons and evil phoenixes, which is great! ! Super touching [admiration] Okay, but actually the author didn't describe their ambiguous interaction too much, I was just filling it in my head [grievance]