After Kao Gong Penetrated into the Yandere Article, I Lay Flat?

Very nice! Why is the rating so low? The author's descriptions are very delicate and the writing is very good. The heroine Little Sun redeems the emotionally disturbed male protagonist little by little, and joins hands with the male protagonist to find the truth. The male and female protagonists have online IQs. The original heroine has also found her own direction in life. Manman and Jiang An's sister-brother relationship, they all have their own growth path, I believe they will also live well in the parallel world. May I spend time with you day and night every year, and be healthy every year. In short, there are two words: recommended! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

After reading it, I really like it. The heroine Lin Suihe is confident and sunny, and the hero Xie Huaijin has never understood emotions and has gradually become a person with strong emotions. The heroine guides her step by step, and the system is not broken, so that the ending is wonderful. This is the best article I have ever read in this category. The heroine really knows how to love. The transformation of the hero makes me happy. The original heroine Lin Xia also has a good ending, instead of being jealous of the heroine and wanting to take the hero back. The female protagonist will also respond well to Zhou Xubai's strategies, and will give the male protagonist a positive answer every time. Although the male protagonist lacks emotions, he is also very good to the people around him. The author's writing style is so good. I really like this type of novel. It touches my heart a lot. The description of each character is very real, which makes me feel that they are no longer paper people, but living people. Zhou Xubai should also have love for the original heroine Lin Xia, but not much. He couldn't let go of his father's death, and attacked the heroine step by step, coming out when the heroine was in the most difficult time. However, he hesitated, but still gave the medicine. If the heroine Lin Suihe had not taken precautions, she might have died like that. The pairing of Jiang An and Shen Man is also very interesting. Is there any extra story? They will all have a happy ending, in their own world. I hope that the author and all readers will also find faithful love, peace and happiness (hehe, including myself). Although this novel is over, the lives of Lin Suihe and Xie Huaijin are not yet over. They will live their entire lives there, and their future will always be happy, peaceful and peaceful. In the six months since the female protagonist left, three years have passed since the male protagonist. The male protagonist really listened to the female protagonist, folded a paper crane every day, and ate well. When he folded 1,000 paper cranes, he really went to the female protagonist. It really made people feel happy. I thought the system headquarters would be stuck for a long time. Although the male protagonist doesn't understand love, he finally learns to love through the guidance of the female protagonist. I really like this article. I will probably have to think about high school next year, and I don't know if I can get into high school. Hee hee, I hope Lin Suihe and Xie Huaijin can bless me to get into the best high school here. I think they have given birth to flesh and blood, allowing me to see them. Their love is enviable, but if it were someone else, I feel that the male protagonist's illness might be more serious. I feel like they really want to be human beings, not soulless paper beings. 2025.5.27 Sunday the one you like Current IP: Zhengzhou

It's a very good book. I finally finished reading it. I was looking forward to it but also scared. I was looking forward to seeing the ending soon. Unfortunately, I lost it after reading it [crazy]. I don't know why the score is not very high, but in my heart this is a masterpiece with a score of 9.9 [Sending my heart] The author is really good at describing characters and scenes. The characters are very full-bodied and the various scenes are also very graphic. Good reviews, great [admiration] The heroine has always been like a little sun [laughs], leading the male protagonist to experience various emotions. Although the male protagonist cannot understand that feeling, his parents really taught him well. Even if they "imprisoned" the female protagonist later, they did not really hurt her... (Omit a lot of bala bala) [shy] Maybe they continue their sweetness outside of the story. The last thing I want to say is that I am really a fan of the author. I will become your most loyal reader. You are my god [laughing and crying] [laughing], and I will read other works again [sending my heart]

I haven't finished reading it yet, but it's really interesting. Although the beginning of the plot is quite cliche, with the plot of traveling through the book to redeem the villain, the author's writing is worth reading. I want to understand the mental journey of the male and female protagonists, experience their emotional trends, and look forward to their understanding, love, and entanglement. The male protagonist has a strong, possessive and gloomy appearance, but in his heart, he has a blank indifference to the world and himself, and even aversion to himself, distortion and inferiority. He seems to He has money and status, but nothing. He is like a puppet playing a human being in this world. He is empty and has nowhere to go, waiting for the day he collapses and dies. He plays the role of a human being in this space, but he is like a lonely shadow, no one cares about him. The heroine was like a huge tornado that appeared with the warm sun, sweeping up his whole body. Together with the wind, he felt the warm sun, excitement, and passionate emotional stimulation, making him truly feel alive and the beating of his heart. I really like the author's description of emotions. It's very atmospheric. It's like a small electric current that can't be ignored. He concretely describes the ambiguous and different emotions and displays them in front of my eyes. I love it so much, but it's not finished. I hope it will be updated continuously. Highly recommended! ! ! To be honest, after we got together, I got a little tired of watching it. The baby is so cute. It made me feel that the male protagonist took care of the female protagonist like a baby. It was so gentle and boring that I felt uncomfortable reading it. I still like the previous content with a bit of drama, but I don't like the simple and boring love story. It deliberately highlights the depth of love between the male and female protagonists, which is unnatural and even feels like it is showing off their ambiguous atmosphere.

Just this little sweet treat! It's very comfortable to watch, and the setting makes me feel like an ENFP or INTJ. I just love this kind of food! The system has no presence. It's more everyday and comfortable. The heroine is brought into the happy life of a rice insect, and the hero is brought into the hot bed with his wife and children (no, there are no children). The character descriptions of the male and female protagonists are quite cute. The female protagonist has bright eyes and fresh vitality, while the male protagonist is gentle and reasonable but occasionally dark and awkward. Xie Huaijin was so amused by Lin Suihe that he ran away. I ate like crazy! [Laughs][laughs][laughs] It feels so good, xql will always be together!

The author's writing style is very good! When I first saw the title, I thought it was something written by a little girl who was tortured and went crazy in the middle of the night by preparing for the public examination. After reading it, I found that it is really different. The process of the male protagonist from not understanding at the beginning to being ignorant to completely understanding love is very healing! Also, I read the article in the middle of the night. I couldn't help but drool when I saw the delicious food cooked by the male and female protagonists in the middle of the night! ! ! Although some plots of the story are still not smooth, the author's writing style is really amazing! Like it very much! Come on!

Ahhhhhhhh it's so beautiful! A heart-warming story, the author's first book is so well written. I have to say that Da Da has a great understanding of emotions and is very good at describing the love between Sui Sui and Xiao Jin. From the initial mutual testing to the process of falling in love, it warmed my heart. I have to say that I really like Xiaojin, who is a fragile puppy with a bit of low self-esteem, and Sui Sui, who is like a little sun. I will be stuck in this type of novel for the rest of my life. The mutual help between the girls is also very well written. Finally, I would like to wish our Suisui and Xiaojin a happy life forever! I'm also looking forward to the author's next novel!

It's very beautiful [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I am really a very lucky person. I found a book that I liked, and when I finished reading it, I found that I only finished it two days ago. I like the two characters Lin Sui and Xie Huaijin very much. In fact, for the characters I like in the book, I don't mean to fantasize about the wonderful future life they will have in that world. What I feel more is that the rest of the story may have nothing to do with us, everything is in their own hands. Whether it is Lin Suihe or Xie Huaijin, they are all alive and real. At last! The author is also great! I see you have said before that this is your first time writing a novel. Of course there are some shortcomings, but it's great that you persisted in writing this story completely! I'm looking forward to your future works [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy] Come on💪

I really like this novel way of writing! It's the first time I've seen this kind of plot! While watching, there were surprises everywhere [note] There were many places that I didn't expect! DaDa's writing style gives me a very delicate and natural feeling. Just words can easily pull me into the world created by DaDa! ! [Like][Like] In the process of reading, you can realize the connotation of the author's large words, the emotional progression of the male and female protagonists, and the description is very comfortable and fascinating [Send Heart][Adoration] When I read the introduction, I thought Sui Sui would be a character in crazy literature. What I didn't expect was that Sui Sui was made very rich by Dada. She is the sun, very bright, and can illuminate everyone around her with her own light. At the same time, she is also the moon, very rational and powerful. She is greatly endowed with a soul and has her own path [full] In my opinion, Xie Huaijin is the leader of the group. He has a strong heart, but he was just a porcelain doll at Suisui, someone who needs to be cared for and watered with love [I understand]. He grew up in a loving and bright environment. Even if he no longer understands love, he will not do anything that violates the law or morality. Xie Huaijin was successfully portrayed and portrayed with great care I like this article very much. What I like about it is that the characters are described very vividly. They seem to be right in front of me, giving them souls and making them shine in their own world🌟. At the same time, he uses delicate writing to write about the multi-faceted nature and complex emotions of people [please savor it]

I really really like this book written by the author. This love redemption is the best one I have read in a long time. I personally think that although there are many descriptions of the environment, I really think it is rendered very well. It is like soaking in summer orange-flavored soda, with the sun shining warmly on your body, and the quietness of the years. A sense of happiness surrounded me, and I was moved to tears several times [sending my heart]. The love between the young couple almost broke through the words and turned into reality. I felt that the author was a particularly warm person. I am grateful for reading this unique article during this period, which gave the tiredness of life a flavoring and a light sweet smell. All in all, it's really well written, I highly recommend it! The author writes better and better, and pays attention to rest. [Blowing kiss][love]

"My love is a kite, and I am honored to be the one who catches that kite string." A very warm and beautiful love story... This is the redemption story that I agree with in my heart. It is not a redemption where the female protagonist falls in love with the handsome male protagonist at first sight and becomes possessive and then the female protagonist indulges her without any bottom line... Cookies like this are what I should eat... The story line of the full text is simple and clear, there is nothing hidden, the breasts are unobstructed, and I read it without stopping [Shy] [Blow kiss] The emotions described are also very delicate. My aunt was either laughing or wiping tears of joy throughout the whole process. I loved it so much... It was so well written! (I thought there would be a baby in the extra episode, but I didn't expect it to be included! That's good too [blowing kiss])

Such a beautiful book, so few people have read it, and the rating is relatively low. It's been a long time since I read a book and I saw a male protagonist who made my heart beat several times. The author's words are so delicate and sincere, and his writing style is very good. It can easily draw me into that wonderful world of words. Huaijin is good, Suisui is good, It is a typical redemption story, but the writing is very delicate. I especially like the daily life in it. It makes people feel warm when they read it. Especially when Huaijin hugs the pillow and expresses his love, it is cute and sincere. It makes my heart flutter after reading it. Hahahaha. I really like your work. Come on!

It's beautiful. How can I say that this book gives people a feeling? It feels like the writing style is like that of a British gentleman. It has a unique tone, like a painting made of elegant and noble glass. Although it is well written, it still reads a little weird, with a deepseek language that tastes like a mixture of sweet chocolate and cream. Well, but the writing is actually quite good. The writing style is very good and very good. I feel that the heroine's baby is also that kind of natural. He is the kind of person who is confident and capable, and can think rationally and deal with emotions rationally. Moreover, the male protagonist also has great feelings. He is ignorant about emotions, but he has the kind of careful temptation, and this male protagonist has one sentence that is very It's so cool. "That brother is unreasonable now." It's really cool. The relationship and ambiguity between the two of them is like quietly hooking each other's little finger and then interlocking their fingers further. This kind of testing is really cool.

The author is right, there are a lot of environmental descriptions, but the writing style is very good and the writing is very beautiful. It feels a bit like chicken soup for the soul. But for me, a lay reader with little patience, it is like the porcelain doll described by the author. I can understand it, but I won't feel too deeply. But the extras are so well written! Everyone was killed too. The extras moved me more than the main text. The heroine is a sunny and lively type, and she also has her own career and pursuits. But for me, who likes to read yandere prison stories, I still like to watch salty-type female protagonists, because I am salty. I read a short article about a yandere before. The heroine of Xianyu was very good-looking. The heroine of Xianyu went to cure the yandere boss while she was free.

It's been a long time since I've seen such delicate writing, but the article about the yandere boss made me see some words that are so profound and worth pondering. The many words about love and society written in the book nourish my heart all the time, giving me a more extended framework for love and the world. This is the most enjoyable book I have ever read among the bloody novels. The author writes it very well. After reading it, I feel comfortable and have a wonderful feeling of life. Thanks to the author for the precious view of love. It makes me full of hope for love and makes me more firm in my heart. Thank you to the author [Love]

I like Suihe's lively and cheerful little Yang Yang, who is determined, brave and direct. I also like Xiao Xie's frankness, and I also like Da Da's directness! There is no delay in trying to make up the word count [Sending Hearts][Adoration][Adoration] Recommended Recommended

The author is very good at writing, and his writing style is also very nice. It is different from other general articles about tyrants. Some words really made me think [thinking] [thinking]. The heroine is very warm, like a little sun [admiration]

After reading the synopsis, I thought it might be a sandbox style of writing (after all, I had to prepare for the exam), and I thought it was a superb crematorium story, so I bought it. The result is a story of redemption and redemption, which makes people feel warm, tearful, and sweet. The author plants the seeds of future and happiness for everyone, and they are all good babies. Dr. Zhao's extra story, I thought it would be a simple CP-orientation, but the result was the collapse of medical faith and the eternal separation of revolutionary friendship. It was a huge knife, and I ate it with tears. [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Looking forward to new pitfalls (author, just finish writing the ending and I will get to [blowing kiss])

It is very beautiful and written in large letters with great care. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are also very natural and super sweet ε=ε=(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉThe male and female protagonists are also very good. The male protagonist is not the paranoid prison maniac in the yandere novel, and the female protagonist is also a very energetic and delicate person. Anyway, it looks good, looks very good! I love the author. Did you hear me? I love you! ! ! ! ! ! Your writing is really very good. Thank you very much for bringing such a work. Although it is my first time to write, please don't doubt it. We all think your writing is very good. I hope you can persist in your love and create more and better works! Let's work together in the same world By the way, although it only took three hours, I finished reading it. I read the book relatively quickly. Please believe that the comments I made after reading the entire book are of reference value. You will not lose money if you invest in the stock (◦˙▽˙◦)

A very good work. It looks like the first book of DaDa. But underneath this book, you can really see that the author loves every character. Because the original setting felt unfair to the characters, why does Xie Huaijin have to be pure evil? There must be a reason. The author is also quite rigorous. And I can see that I love cooking. The thing that impressed me the most is the mutton pilaf. Isn't it the Lanzhou fried rice? Alas, reading the article in the middle of the night made me feel hungry [Petrochemical] What's even more pity is that my neighbor has gone home to study a long time ago and can't eat that plate of Lanzhou fried rice [crying] Back to stabilizing the content. Whether it is the system, the protagonist, or the various supporting characters, they are all quite lovable characters (except for the one with the surname Zhou, where "except" is a verb). But the real sins are those who do not strictly prohibit cutting corners when using medicine. They harm others and themselves [vomit] The works I saw on the finished list were very interesting, so I read them all in one sitting. I really hope they can be published. I really like them [KISS][Crazy] If the spots can be removed, can "Twilight" be used as the publishing name? When Xie Huaijin completely fell into the endless darkness and was completely numb, Lin Suihe appeared. As the article said, "It wouldn't have been us sooner or later, it wouldn't have been us finding each other like this." Maybe they were arranged together because the magnetic fields matched their destiny. I rarely review novels. Most of my reviews are games. This is the first time I have reviewed so many words in a novel. This work is really promising. This work is the first work of this author. I can only say that the future is promising. It is a very good subject matter. The author also loves the characters in the novel. Everyone has their happy ending. This feeling of caring and caring is really good. There are still some places in the work that are not handled well, but on the whole it is very good. If these small details can be improved (about the obscurity of the previous system) The system at the back shows a human touch. After Suihe's application, the performance here is a bit abrupt/if the control is strict at the beginning, the mobile phone may be brought into the house, let alone the contacts. Regarding the settings of this mobile phone, it is described that only Lin Xia is the original owner. Xie Huaijin's control is no longer strict, but how did he bring this mobile phone in? How did he get this mobile phone when the control was strict? The setting of folding a thousand paper cranes is also very good. But I think in the past three years, Xie Huaijin must have gradually arranged his funeral. If he suddenly disappeared and handed all the responsibilities to Jiang An and the others, I feel it is a bit unrealistic, no matter how strong his (Jiang An's) business ability is. But I think Xie Huaijin is such a rigorous person and he will definitely arrange everything) That would be great

Very sweet, very sweet cookie, very nice. I clicked it accidentally. I feel that 8.2 Is a bit low. It can be increased a little. There are no big bugs. The writing is not bad. The only thing I don't like is that the name "little porcelain doll" appears too many times. A little bit too much. I think it's okay as an adjective, but it's a bit weird as a title, but it doesn't affect reading very much. (Just a personal opinion) Overall, it's highly recommended. Finally, I wish Suisui and Xiaojin happiness in one dimension [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's super good-looking. The character structure of the male and female protagonists is very full, the description of the characters is very smart, the literary talent is very rich, and the imagination of the whole article is just right. The emotional description of the male and female protagonists is often transformed into the description of the environment, which makes it easier for me to interpret when watching. The catharsis point of the story is just right, allowing me to understand some complicated parts of the description. Anyway, I like it very much. Also, can you please urge me to update more new articles similar to this one [please update]

The heroine is like a big sun, warming the people around her. She is very contagious and can inspire people around her. Although the plot of the story is simple, the language is super contagious. The characters are written in three-dimensional images, short, concise, and beautiful. Maybe I think this is what truly makes people feel "love". They never understand love until they start to "love" and slowly become aware of the people and things around them. And I think some girls are born with the ability to love, and there really cannot be a world without girls [shy][shy].

It's really good-looking, a warm little sweet story, with a lot of psychological portrayals. It's really good-looking. I really like the portrayal of the male protagonist. Who doesn't want such a boyfriend? The female protagonist is also a very warm little sun. She warms the male protagonist and warms me. Originally, I didn't feel good about the male protagonist changing his life in another world, but I was relieved after the extra episode, just like the male protagonist said. Those worldly responsibilities and ties may hold him back for a year or two... But they cannot hold him back for a lifetime. It was her who reshaped everything about him. It was only the heroine who brought him back to life

According to the introduction, there is no female rivalry. The male and female protagonists are not good at attracting each other. There is indeed no female rivalry, but the male and female protagonists are really good. They both have mouths and there is no misunderstanding. The male protagonist is very smart. He noticed something was wrong from the first moment Suisui wore it on Lin Xia. Later, as Suisui's living habits were different from before, he found that there was a new soul in his body. But Suisui just lay down when he knew he had worn it in the yandere novel. The original heroine Lin Xia did not disappear directly but lived as another person. They are both very good baby girls. The author's writing is really good. The descriptions are really delicate and very immersive. It does not feel cumbersome. I really like this story and I am still not satisfied until the end.

It's very beautiful. The male protagonist soon knew that the soul inside the heroine's shell had changed, and he gradually understood the love and affection while getting along with the heroine. He knew that his heart was beating crazily for some of her actions, and he gradually knew that he liked him. After confirming this, he immediately expressed his thoughts. He felt that he might not understand liking and love, but his heart was beating crazily for Lin Suihe, who was smiling and funny, and it was not the same no matter who the soul in "Lin Xia"'s body was. The heroine Bao Bao is a guiding lover. She is slowly teaching the hero what love is. She said, "Do you know why the kite can fly so high?" "Because someone is holding the string. When the male protagonist is worried about gains and losses, she will tell her her true existence and let him feel her beating pulse, just like a little sun.

It's really beautiful. This book is the best I have ever read. The author expresses the emotions of the characters very fully in the text. I like it very much! ! ! The heroine lights up the hero like a little sun. It is a very nice novel. I recommend everyone to read it. I hope that both the hero and heroine can live as happily as they do now! The author also worked hard to write this book. I really like [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

It's a pretty good read. Overall, it's a normal book. The story line is also very clear. The female protagonist is really a little sun and I like her character. The male protagonist is also an iceberg, but he is different from the previous iceberg. The male protagonist is a very kind person. The author has also been making progress. At the beginning, the writing was relatively complicated and not divided into paragraphs, but it gradually got better and better! I wish the author better and better! Lin Suihe in the parallel world wants to be happy! (I forgot the name of the male protagonist. I only remember the surname Xie. Hahahaha. I only read the party like this. I only read the novel. I forgot the author, the title of the book, and the names of the male and female protagonists. Hahahahaha [laughs])

Yandere encounters his own correct answer in this article. The male protagonist conforms to the three views of normal people, knows the law, and has the rationality of an adult. It is not as outrageous as other novels. The heroine will definitely perform stably, like a little sun. It's just a very normal little sweet story, there is no so-called vigorous love, and the rest of it is not bad at all. The most important thing is that there is no so-called negative distance before marriage. The male protagonist's three views are quite good. It seems like the final fantasy and struggle of a bull horse, hahahaha [laugh][laugh][laugh] I probably read this book more than 7 months ago after putting it off, and I haven't read the rest of it. I just finished watching it in August. So I forgot some of the previous content. I finished reading it all today, and it was quite good. At least there were no mistakes or surprises. The homogeneity of cars will become serious if we don't drive often.

Love it! ! ! Ratings are rising quickly! ! ! The heroine is a cute and cute but smart and brave little sun & the hero is a porcelain doll with emotional disorders but because the original is correct and the copy is correct, he is kind, considerate and extremely insecure. Very normal, very normal. The male protagonist whose parents died for some reason but who acts rationally and calmly will learn how his parents care about him and how parents care about each other in treating the female protagonist. Although he lacks emotions, he is really a male protagonist with good views! There are also a pair of deputy CPs written, but the proportion is very small. The extra story said that Dr. Zhao is a child abuser, but I never thought it would be like this [crying] I should not use the friendship knife, not the martyr knife [crying] I burst into tears instantly. Even though I have not cried since I returned to the original world when Xie Huaijin proposed to me (but I was shocked and heartbroken, the little Xie porcelain doll was probably really broken at that time... [Crying]) And at the end of the extra chapter, there is finally a book that can be used in the daily life of a couple, rather than the daily life of giving birth and raising a baby! I don't think that a successful male and female protagonist must be reflected in the next generation. Daily life like this is great! Just pretend that Sui Sui Huaijin is a Dink, after all, the family already has both cats and dogs~ (I really wanted to read a novel about daily life after marriage without children, and then I read it!!!) It's hard to imagine that this is Da Wan's first book. It's really good, with a sweet love story and a plot that requires some brainpower to read. There are a lot of typos in the extras, but the main text is generally good. There are a lot of detailed descriptions of the environment, especially in the first chapters. I seem to like to end with environment descriptions [laughing and crying]. But I don't think I need to change it specifically. I just think it's my own writing style. The descriptions of these environments are quite delicate~ Looking forward to the new book~ Come on, come on