Conan Reborn: Surrounded by Beauties All over Tokyo

The writing gets better and better from now on, a very unique protagonist, sickly and world-weary with the exhaustion of seeing through everything, like a glass of mellow wine, the more you taste it, the deeper it becomes, a very attractive protagonist, and an interesting plot development The writing is also very good, and the emotions are described very delicately.

The emotional part is well written, but Conan doubts the heroine about this and that. If the heroine is not annoyed, I am annoyed [smiles]

It might not be very good at first. To be honest, I didn't have any hope when I first watched it, and the annotations in parentheses are not necessary, but it gradually got better [Adoration]. At first, I came here with the label of opening a harem, but although the love line cannot open a harem, the emotions are very delicate, whether it is Ai Jiang's paranoid love or Lan's pure love, they are all portrayed very well. Not to mention our Sister Bei, she is like a mother. She gradually enlightens the best wooden Hakimi to the point where she refuses others for her. Sister Bei's forced love is absolutely amazing. The extra chapter about the two Yayoi and Belmod together in the past and present life is very shocking and I think it's weird. Anyway, I don't think so.

I stayed up late and read the latest chapter from the beginning. The author's writing has made visible progress, and the emotional drama between the protagonist and other people is also described very delicately. Most importantly, the candies the author hands out are very delicious, and some of the knives that had to be handed out for the ups and downs of the plot are not too uncomfortable, and they are resolved immediately after a short time. Makes people feel good. Here are some personal suggestions: The twists and turns in the plot are a bit abrupt in some places, and you can think more from the perspective of the characters. Although I was so depressed that I lost my mind at the time, I still have some problems when I think about it now. Of course, the description of emotional drama requires passion. Only words written with passion can have true feelings, but you must not lose your reason, otherwise the emotional transition will be a bit abrupt. Of course, these suggestions are all my whims after reading them. It may be that I stayed up late and got dizzy. The most important thing is to maintain your own style. Finally, teacher, I stand by Xiao Ai. Give Xiao Ai more roles. The child's body is suffering so much [face covering]

It's a bit difficult to describe the character development in the past. The character of the protagonist is not very clear, and the logic is a bit messy. The protagonist's weak system cannot have extraordinary speed just because of his previous life. For example, in Chapter 19 and some of the previous parts, I am still looking forward to this book. The subject matter is very new. I hope the author can pay more attention to these aspects

I really think the writing is very good, and I hope the author can continue to write more. To be honest, I would like to see the emotional drama between Xiao Ai and the protagonist, and hope for more emotional development.

It's very interesting, but wasn't the heroine a killer in her previous life? Why was she still scared? Or is it because of her body's instinctive reaction?

The ideas are novel and the writing is okay. Maybe some of the content is far-fetched, but at least the logic is clear. In summary, the protagonist is a tsundere. Her career as a killer in her previous life has made her relatively insensitive to emotions, and she has inadvertently incurred a "love debt". At present, the basic cps have been dismantled. Currently, there are Mariko, Xiaolan, Haibara Ai who have not yet completely fallen in, and Sister Bei's "little glimmer". It is recommended that you skip it appropriately and not think too hard when watching it, because the timeline of the Conan world itself is a bit strange, so if you have any problems with the cases arranged by the author, don't get too entangled. I think you can make suggestions to the author for the cases you want to watch. If you like the original CP, you can basically leave. If you are interested, you can add a bookshelf. After all, this kind of content is easy to disappear if the author does not control it well. But judging from the author's previous works, it should not be a big problem. You may just be unable to write.

[Thinking] So is it a harem or 1v1? Can I say that I want to see the heroine and Xiaolan together [shy]

It's pretty good to watch, but some parts of the plot feel a bit weird in logic, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience. The main plot is with Belmod, but the extra if line of Haibara Ai, Maori Ran, Suzuki Sonoko, also makes up for the emotions of the three previous people.

It's very nice to read. You can tell with the naked eye that the author's writing style is improving, but he doesn't use parentheses in some places. If he writes in the next paragraph, the reading experience may be better. In short, the author's writing style still impresses me. Hehe

Looks good, the hostess set is great. I think saving Mingmei is very baffling. The reason given is because of the death of my former sister, and I don't want to lose Ai too? Then why should I let Mingmei go abroad? It's perfectly fine to just change her appearance and change her identity, and she also specially goes to guard Ai's only way, without telling Xiao Ai that her sister is alive. The heroine obviously has no direct purpose to contact Xiao Ai. It's a bit forceful, right?

It's okay, but there are too many love lines, so I don't know which pair to hit first, but the rest is a little confusing and I can't stand it, so come on! ! ! Many people writing about Conan's two heroines have stopped updating. I hope the author can stick to it.

Miss Yayoi yyds! ! ! Wait, wait, why did Yayoi change from a big attack to an OOC? The new plot and introduction are also the opposite. In the early stage, the domineering president forced love, which made people feel stomachache. Xiaolan and Sonoko's stocks exploded directly, and the gentle stocks lost again and again. . . This Sister Bei is so controlling, she must have completely suppressed Yayoi. I want to see a close emotional tug-of-war! And where are Yayoi's bodyguards? No one is seen again and again Maintain the book first, and then re-evaluate if there are changes later.

The more you try to escape, the more trouble awaits you. The world is like this, hope and despair dance together, bright and bright, but extremely dark. We stumble forward, bruised and bruised, even if we sink into the quagmire.

It's good to watch, but if you have an official role that you're obsessed with, don't read it, or don't say anything about it in the comment section after you've seen it, it's quite annoying. Lily is just beautiful [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The author's writing is very good and the characters have interesting personalities. I highly recommend it. It's very beautiful. Author, what you wrote later is a bit cruel [crying], and there are chapters seventy-seven, seventy-eight, seventy-nine, eighty, and eighty-three. I will never forgive you, never, it is too cruel [smile] [smile]

There are many poisonous points, but I still gave it five stars. Newcomers need encouragement, right?

Ah! The writing is very good and has a strong sense of immersion! ! The plot is also very good, I like it very much! !

The fried chicken looks great! ! This is the most interesting Conan female fanfic I have ever seen. I hope the author will update it faster [Thoughts]

This book overall gives people a somewhat strange feeling, a very bland feeling and lack of conflict points. It feels like a problem with the description. The pace of the case is a bit too fast, but in some places that are not very important, the writing is very detailed, and the character of the protagonist feels a bit conflicting. The overall feeling is very strange, but I quite like the plot of this book.

The setting and framework of this book are quite to my liking, but the author still has room for improvement in his writing. There are some unreasonable places and it is easy for the same description to be repeated (and the author, please don't be so loyal to the exclamation mark [I'm about to cry]). Also, please ignore those stupid remarks and accept friendly advice, but don't take the bad reviews to heart [blow a kiss] and give a five-star support (oh my god, this is my first time to write so many book reviews)

Still a book worth reading

This is the first time I see Conan writing about lilies. Please support me.

Only then did I realize that this book was also on Feng Tianyin's bookshelf.

Alas, I was confused by Bai Hou and didn't see the fake words, but I can continue reading because of the two heroines. The author will update it soon. You are my life-saving straw during the book shortage period.

Author, author, you have to realize, this is really beautiful

I like the setting very much. I don't like to follow the update at first, but seeing this setting, I'd better hurry up and follow it. If you don't follow it, you will easily be blocked.

It's nice to look at and very tasteful. I'm looking forward to Sister Bei's appearance and interaction [shy]

It's very beautiful, and the author's description of the emotions is very delicate [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]