My Family Cultivates Immortality, I Have a Realm-Breaking Bead

The protagonist has achieved the sixth level of Qi training. The three systems of body training, qi training and soul training go together. As a result, I still managed to beat the 5th level of Qi training twice. [Sinister smile]

The pacing is slow, even a little fast, but the plot is quite attractive. However, the description of the family development and some stories feels a bit like a running story. I hope the characters can be more vivid. I feel that few characters in the family can be remembered. The character needs to be established. The family cannot rely on the protagonist alone.

The author is great and the overall story is great, but I must say that the feeling after Chapter 297 is like ordering a luxurious roasted whole lamb, only to be served cold dishes for half an hour first, and the cold dishes are placed one on top of another - the "box" feeling is a bit obvious. Especially the high-energy plot of Chapter 297, sneaking into the hinterland, is the time to speed up and go straight to the Yellow Dragon. We are gangsters who go to "rob houses and rob houses (pace control)". What we pay attention to is "rob and run away. It's really exciting. For example, after taking the things, write a *** boy to come here for a visit"! So I was thinking, instead of writing a 3,000-word "A Bite of the Tongue", I would rather write a 300-word "Humorous Running Account". After all, although the plot is slow, it is rough and detailed. In fact, the family can write about the realm and other fun (fireworks in the world) in detail. This novel is well written, but as a little fan author, I can do it with "relaxation and ease."

If the protagonist doesn't get anything after killing the two Hu family members, he will have to lose stars, but if you change the way of writing, you won't be able to lose stars. For example, the Hu family has a kind of medicinal powder, (of course, this is only a remote place). It is a first-class high-grade product unique to the family. The protagonist's strength is the soul, but it cannot be detected (after all, the protagonist's soul is only used for attacking), so in order Unnecessary trouble. After all, the Hu family and the protagonist's family are just a little bit stronger, so he didn't take it. If a monster took it away later, he wouldn't have any resentment. Moreover, there were many robbery cultivators, and those who didn't go far were caught by the Hu family. Written like this, I think most readers will not be disgusted. Then I will elaborate on this kind of thing and add half a chapter.

It's a good read. If you like novels about cultivating immortals, you can read it. The male protagonist is not a virgin, and he kills decisively. [Like] [Like] [Like] The single female protagonist has given birth to two sons. The male protagonist only found a Taoist couple to have children after the golden elixir. There is no ambiguity or greasiness. It's just a family story. There are more or less routines in the later period. As the cultivation level increases, the level of the magic weapon is constantly upgraded, the ability of various immortal skills, and the heaven and earth spiritual plants bound to the male protagonist are also upgraded every time, and then the spiritual veins are upgraded again. Various upgrades [awkward laugh] and a dozen monsters for twenty years. , In a century-old war, everything has to revolve around the family, and rarely ventures to other places. There are also secret realms. They are looking for various resources for the family and themselves. They rarely show any resources for cultivating immortals to their Taoist companions or children [laughs] If you like family cultivation, you can check it out [Like] [Like] [Like]

Family cultivation is my favorite subject

It's good to read, and the author's writing is very stable. It's worth reading. The last book was also very good. I hope the author will achieve greater success again!

It can be said that there is no brainless approach in the entire novel. The overall flow is smooth and the novel is highly readable. Goldfinger is also very low-key and relevant. As a bookworm of ten years, I feel that the entire novel is highly recommended.

It must be praised. It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. It's okay not to fight, but the subsequent battle is really uncomfortable to watch. It's easy to kill the foundation-building monster at the eighth level of Qi Refining, and the fighting logic is a mess. Just after the foundation building was successful, the protagonist analyzed it and it was comparable to the later stage of foundation building. It left people speechless.

It's better than the normal novels about cultivating immortals. During normal training, you keep getting coal mines. Isn't it just a cave? It's purely about personal luck and love to develop your family. But it's not that kind of nanny article. It can be considered a relatively novel article.

The writing is good, it looks effortless, but it doesn't pay attention to details, but the author's quality is still good, 5 stars for encouragement There is not enough echo between the front and back, and there is an embarrassing incident where the next sentence slaps the face. It is too ugly. 4 Stars

Cool article, don't pay attention to some details, read it in the same way as reading invincible articles, you will find that this book looks very comfortable. Dark blue, add some! Does anyone know if the author of Deep Blue has written a new book? Can anyone recommend it? I'm a bookworm, and I'm in a book shortage!

It's pretty good among family cultivators. As for some people talking about leveling up, I personally feel that the level has been improved quickly. After more than 200 chapters, the second level of the Purple Mansion, the soul refining Purple Mansion is complete, and the physical cultivation is about to reach the ninth level of the Purple Mansion. I don't know how much stronger it is compared to those who are still practicing Qi and building foundations in hundreds of chapters [laughing]

It is very powerful, a good traditional fairy tale, but the plot design and promotion are very reasonable, there are not too many poisonous points, and the writing is experienced. A newcomer does not have this level, so he should be an experienced author.

It's okay, there are a lot of poisonous points, but it doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and the realm is relatively refreshing. The author's writing style needs to be developed. In the first hundred or so chapters, I learned an idiom: It's getting better and better, and it's getting better and better. My friends, there were a lot of shocks in the following that made me laugh (I listened to the book). You can check it out. After all, the rating is quite high, and it can be regarded as a better novel about cultivating immortals in Tomato. But I also want to ask, what is the purpose of the protagonist's identity as a time traveler? . . .

This book is okay. It doesn't have those big talk. It doesn't mean you have been bullied since you were born. It doesn't improve your strength alone. It doesn't look like a murderous maniac. It's also not like some people who are nagging at the back to urge updates and give rewards. Only books like this are interesting to read [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

It's so good, I almost missed it. Halfway through, I felt a bit bland and wanted to give up. Unexpectedly, the author changed the protagonist's experience and added more different scenes. It's very attractive. Thank you to the author for your hard work.

This book is okay, it doesn't have too many poisonous points, and the protagonist's realm is not very stressful. The protagonist should be able to build his foundation soon, while other families' cultivation of immortality will take more than 100 or 120 chapters to complete. This is still in the late stage of Qi refining...

It's okay, but the update is too slow. The family series should also write about how other clan members are doing when they are away from home. You can't always write about the protagonist, then you still have to cultivate immortality alone. I think the book I wrote for Zhen Clan Spirit Beast is really good, but the update is discontinued. I can learn from him.

At the beginning, the protagonist's family's life of cultivating immortals was really difficult, but the protagonist's realm-breaking beads began to exert their power in the foundation-building stage. Those who are impatient may not finish the chapter on the Qi training period. There is no poison, and the protagonist kills decisively but not recklessly, and he can tolerate it (although he will take revenge quickly). Although the Hu family's foreshadowing knew the outcome, it was like a small thorn in the side. Let's see how the author plays it

If you want to read it, please read Chapter 15 and Chapter 16 first. The protagonist just finished the sentence and said that he didn't dare to take the storage bag because he was afraid of being chased, so he didn't dare to touch it and just left it. The latter sentence also said that this is not a method that a qi training family should have, so there is no need to worry, it is a direct battle between the left and right brains [laughter]

Spring garden snow The pear blossoms in the garden fade for another year Li Qingxiao, the moonlight shines on the empty steps Sheng and Xiao playing old music in the dream Awakening from dream, tears stain rouge face Xiaolishan, read it over and over again Smell it, and even swallow it, and often teach me to say farewell to the past for a long night I haven't slept for a long time, sitting deep on the eaves of the palace The most sentimental one is Chun Tingxue [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute] The garden is full every year Xue Tao's note, the above words are as if they were first seen this life It's too long, but it only ends so close to the end of the world. Who still remembers the time when pear blossoms were like snow? I'm so heartbroken that I can't change my mind My heart is overwhelmed

This novel is well written, but it overemphasizes the strength of the family. A sect or family that is weaker than your own will say it is a small family. Also, it's a bit un-family-like. Although most of the time he does things for the family, the perspective is always on the protagonist and rarely writes about the protagonist interacting with the elders or juniors in the family. How is this different from ordinary astronomy? I can only say that it is a very good article about cultivating immortals.

It's unpretentious, follows step by step, has tight links and tension, which is good.

The protagonist's family is already so powerful, shouldn't it have its own special technique? Either there is one exercise that applies to all Lingen, or it is classified, but it is not a simple Five Elements exercise. For example, does Huo Mu Lingen have to have dual-attribute skills? Should the roots of fire, wood, earth, and forest have three attributes?

You can read the latest chapters without getting bored, and then read them again if you want to gain weight.

Okay, okay, it's too different for my taste, but the rating just can't go up.

It's a pretty good article, but the rating is a bit low.

This is from the last book, the plot is very interesting

Yes, well written. Looking forward to the next plot.