Bailu************

I shamelessly give myself a five-star rating. I know that my writing skills are not good. Although I wrote this book spontaneously, I also planned it for a long time. I have no experience in writing online articles, but I still plan to write it because after all, I hope to describe the story in my mind so that others can see it. I really want to. I have no experience, which means I don't understand the rules. I don't know if anyone will read the stories I write, but I still want to write them, just to satisfy the fans' addiction.

It's very well written and touching. I'm fascinated by it.

The best heroine novel about Bai Lu that I have ever read. The characters are very three-dimensional and the plot is fascinating. It is not brainless at all, and it is very funny. I highly recommend reading it.

Come on, author [sending heartfelt wishes], it's very beautiful

Don't keep describing the details. I feel like you have more than 1,000 chapters. According to your current description, if you keep going, it will be great if you can meet Bai Lu. Is the author stuck again? I feel like I have been raising him for several days. Why is it only chapter 23? The main reason is that your setting is not bad. In the previous life, Bai Lu gave him chicken legs, so I am looking forward to his contact with Bai Lu. I feel like I haven't read it yet and it's gone.

Let me ask, is this Yuexia the heroine? [Smile]

The writing is okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to read. Each sentence is a bit too long. It would be more comfortable if I split it into several sentences. Give it a five-star support.

The descriptions of the characters and plots are all very fleshed out. I hope you can continue adding more and not give up halfway.

Come on, author, remember to segment

There are many words in one paragraph and can be divided into more paragraphs. The first dozens of chapters are all about chatting with the system, which is a bit slow. The narrative is still long. The sea is full of water~[Chigua]

It's very interesting, I like it. Maybe some of the data are not good, which puts you off, but I think the plot is very good, which will facilitate the development of the story in the future.

Ha

The main plot can be sped up a bit, there are too many plots about the system and other people. But it's very attractive and touching

It's pretty good. Why did you stop updating it? I hope the author will resume updating [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]