Pokémon and Mecha: Lolo and Ash Change the Script

There are many typos, and the understanding of the plot is not deep enough, so for me, it is average (the quantity is not much, there are many typos, and there are many self-made settings. I asked the author who did not reply to the comments about self-made settings. In summary, it is average)

The setting of the first chapter is very novel, integrating characters from various dimensions. It can be seen that the author has a rich knowledge. The overall setting is also very imaginative. Putting these two characters together is so novel!