Fox Demon*****

The characters are delicately depicted, with philosophy interspersed throughout. Animal nature and reason coexist, and the author explains the logic of society's operation very well. The description of the changes in the protagonist's mental journey is not common in other fan fiction, and it is very personal, which is also the highlight of the author's writing. The biggest feeling this book gives me is that I can feel the combination of human warmth, judgment on society, and thinking about human nature from the book. The author is also careful ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

As someone who has read many books about the fox demon matchmaker, this one is undoubtedly the best I have ever read. The main plot is slowly pushed forward, and I feel like I am chewing my food slowly. The emotions of the characters have not collapsed. It completely breaks away from my initial concept of the introduction to the book. It gives me a very novel feeling. It is a really good fanfic. I hope the author can continue to maintain it. After all, the emotional line behind it is really difficult to integrate. I hope it will not collapse.

I have always felt that the new rating system of Tomato novels is very bad. A good novel always has a starting period. However, the rating system of Tomato novels directly lowers the most critical rating of the starting period to a very low level, causing many people to miss the original wonderful novel. Judging from the early plot, the author wants to focus on human class struggle. It is similar to the plot of the fox demon matchmaker. There are no major flaws and the plot is easy. I still like to read this kind of fanfiction with its own ideas. From the current point of view, the author should have an outline but some details need to be improved. If your main storyline is about Rong Rong, it would be a bit awkward. You can add more stories about the two of them, because one of the highlights of your book is the interaction between the male and female protagonists. As for the line of struggle, it depends on the author's writing style, but I think you should be confident, after all, there is a book with an 8-point or so experience that will not lead to death. Finally, I still hope that good books will not be buried and will not be eunuchs.

I feel. It's quite interesting, as long as you keep reading. I'm an omnivore. I look at everything, and as long as it's not a question of narrative logic, I generally give it a pretty high rating. After all, we've already watched it for free, so why do we need a bicycle?

This book is not like other fan works. The content is darker and dirtier than the world of fox monsters written by other authors. Most of the content is very serious, but the subject matter is extremely novel for this track. The characters are exquisitely carved, the characters are rigorous, and the characters are flesh and blood. The protagonist also grows after experiencing some events. There are no unreasonable feelings in terms of emotions, and there are also sugar-coating links. In short, if you accept it, it is a good book. I just hope the author will not stop and keep writing. I am very much looking forward to the future development.

I haven't read the author's first book. This kind of slow-burning novel, I personally feel that the author has a good grasp of the pacing and the plot development is also very good. However, the pacing of the plot is slow and you should update it quickly [Thoughts] I have read so many. Specifically speaking, the author's current plot structure is very novel. It is a top-notch work among the tomato fox demon novels. It blends realism into the fox demon world and makes Rong Rong the heroine. Rong Rong's intelligent temperament is very suitable for this kind of subject matter. I don't know if the author can write it. The characters of later generations (modern times) are also exceptionally good, but the writing is a bit too detached. I hope the author can control it a little bit and not deviate from the essence of the fox demon novel. I hope Rong Rong can have a good ending (I can't take the knife anymore when I'm old) and I hope everyone can have a good ending [Blow kiss]

It's very readable. I can basically understand what the author wants to write and express. Based on this point, I think the writing is good. However, as a fanfic, a lot of the previous content is original. The heroine designated by the author of this book does not have many appearances and descriptions, but this is only the early stage, so overall it is good. I hope Lao Mo will not leave it unfinished and just dig holes without filling them.

The plot and characterization are both very good. The characters are full-bodied, the IQ is online, the plot is logical, the three views are correct, and there is red righteousness between the lines. The only flaw is that there are too many narrations, which makes the article redundant. The plot is too slow, and it is not very consistent with the introduction. If you read it as a love story, forget it. It is okay to treat it as an alternate history. It will be better to develop the emotional line later and speed up the progress of the main plot.

Let me give you a five-star encouragement first.

Yes, this book is written from a different perspective. Previous fan fiction was written from the perspective of aristocratic families, but this book is written from the perspective of ordinary people.

Simple words cannot describe it, nor can it express what I feel in my heart. After I am used to reading those articles about the hereafter that are here to enjoy happiness in this life, and the systematic articles that kill everything with one sword, this book is undoubtedly the pinnacle of The Little Matchmaker of the Fox Demon. Perhaps, it is this circle that limits you, not your writing style. Author, I support you, even if this book ends the next book, we will never get together [Like]

Very nice to look at. It gives me a feeling that I have written something of my own in the fanfic. Needless to say, the writing style is natural. I hope that after this book is finished, the author can write an original novel of his own.

To be honest, this book is really good. But it is relatively biased, with no daily fighting and more original characters.

Great, a rare fox demon of high quality. Come on, (Rongrong smiles)

Not bad, it will definitely surpass the Misty Heart

I hope I can write about the era of Bai Yue 500 years from now

It's all sweet and no swords. The main plot should probably be the protagonist's reform, so that the world can be unified and the human beings and monsters can live in peace.

It's a very detailed article, why doesn't anyone read it?

It looks good, no need to say more

Vadasi also wants to eat fine chaff It's such a shame that the author writes very well, but no one reads it [face covering]

Enchanted golden apples, high quality but fire resistant [crying]

It looks good, but the update is a bit slow, but the author also explained it and I can understand it.

The more you look at it, the better it gets. The improvement in the author's writing is obvious to all 👍

Very good. The author has his own stuff and is not just mindless and just happy.

Unconventional, unique angle, alternative, but really NB A very interesting alternative to seeking power. It has completely opened up a new path, which is already invincible among fox demons.

This is the second book by this author. I have finished reading the first one and the quality is good. The quality of the second book is guaranteed and the lower limit is very high. I recommend it, and this author will not be a mess!

A different fox demon matchmaker

It's okay and good-looking

There are details and the description is very accurate.

Five stars for encouragement, come on author!