Spirit Cage, I'm Just an Ordinary Person

The first impression is very good, but if you look closely: the only shortcoming is that the vocabulary is too complicated. Over-emphasis will only be counterproductive, so there is no need to be too deliberate! Other than that, it's not a big deal. After all, the author writes as a hobby, so there is no need to resort to word-for-word "egg-egg-picking-stone"... (The style of the article is very in line with my personal feelings, and has the flavor of a spiritual cage. The author is also rigorous and meticulous, and has good taste and taste)

The writing is good, but used in the wrong place. Good emotional expression is not just about a plethora of adjectives. Body movements resonate with the environment and can better express the ups and downs of emotions. (You can refer to those emotional novels, such as "My 26-year-old Girl" and "My Miss Tulip") The metaphors described are the highlight of the article, but too many will make it seem complicated. Appropriately write down some changes in body movements and expressions: Frowning, he took out a cigarette from his pocket, lit it slowly and took a puff, and his eyes unconsciously drifted into the distance. Although there are no adjectives here, it also expresses the protagonist's melancholy. I think the author's writing is good, but if you don't have the patience, you may feel that your article has too many descriptive words. Appropriately reducing some unnecessary adjectives will make your article more concise and attractive. I hope the author can see this comment of mine

Logically speaking, among the fan authors I have read so far, this author is the one who has really worked hard to study and analyze the spirit cage. The plot is not watery, it is very rigorous, and the portrayal of each character is objective rather than biased. Worth commending👍

He originally said that I had read too many Linglong fan novels, which were too brainless and did not give me that sense of ecological oppression. This book was relatively good and had a stronger sense of immersion. Isn't reading novels just for the sense of immersion? I don't want to give the author any advice. If you continue to keep it, too many suggestions will only change your original intention. The author can just continue with the current outline. It will also make ordinary people feel great in this apocalypse. It is a sense of experience, which is very good.

Okay, try not to be so exaggerated in the description, it's too much like AI

The good-looking high imitation spirit cage is as full of depression and despair as the spirit cage, but also tense and exciting; At the same time, unlike most of the brainless Teddy Days on the market, this alone is five stars. Five stars is just the limit of software rating, highly recommended, not Teddy

Thank you for the top-notch writing by the Ling Cage fans in Tomato. They have their own ideas and will be linked with the new official plot. There are no poisonous points. It is very enjoyable to watch. Personally, I feel that it is a milestone in the Ling Cage novel. When the Ling Cage is released, it will not be outdated. It is very inspiring! Big cheers for the author! [Adoration][Adoration] @hairless rice porridge And the most important thing is! Updates 3, 4, 5 a day! There are also updates from time to time! Can you withstand this? ! ! [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Give me a big blow to the author to "power up with love", the student party will give you some support [Adore][Adore]

It's well written, but not to my liking. It feels too depressing if you put it in, and the warm moments are not a powerful foil to the cruelty of reality. The lighthouse's hope of finding humanity is destroying it. Just a personal opinion.

Although it's not a cool article, the imagination and writing style really impressed all the fans.

Today, June 26, 2025, I read the author's novel and thought it was very well written and very novel. It is just that sometimes the writing is too detailed and a little wordy. But this is a small problem. I hope the author will work hard and like to read your book. One more thing, this is a new book, so I will read it in one day today, please update it soon! [Cool]

It's so... Good to read. Come on, the author, and update it soon. The author's writing is very real. The emotional repression of the lighthouse and the resistance deep in people's hearts. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it hhh. I'll update it soon.

There are only a few high-quality spiritual cage books. There are too many spiritual cage books. I either have no brains or am a noob at writing. I feel quite satisfied with this book. I hope you can sit down and work hard and don't give up.

It's really good, but some of the descriptions are too logical and the writing lacks practice, but it's really good among Ling Cong fandoms, and I feel like I'm already in the first echelon of Ling Cage fandoms (only my personal opinion, please lightly criticize)

The second Ling Cong novel with the most Ling Cong flavor. I am very picky about novels. This one is really good. Although there are some small flaws in some small places, it is overall very good. It is just that the author is very literary in some places and feels a bit like a dragon? But the taste is not that strong.

The writing is really good, but is it true that it is almost over? No, otherwise I would give the protagonist a hang-up and join a chat group with the characters of Cyberpunk 2077. It is also suitable for revolution and gives all human beings a hope for a better life. It can also reasonably explain how to kill the Mana ecology.

I follow anime For me, this is the highlight of this type of fanfic His emotions are endowed with a network of family affection His birth was accompanied by a prison His body binds the freedom of his soul He was given the ideal name His soul is imbued with red spirit He belongs to the station where the last train waits for no one

Comparing it on Tomato, some authors who have not even read the prequel comics of the Soul Cage are writing about the Soul Cage fanfic, this book is already the best among them. I don't understand why the rating is only 7.5.

You can really write with your own true feelings. It doesn't feel like a cool article. I can see that the author is a well-educated and awesome person. I hope he can continue to write.

It's pretty cool and has a certain logic to it. However, there are still some unconventional content about the collapse of combat power in the content. But after reading it to the end, you will find that these are all reasonable Anyway, just look at it

It's a great benefit. I have my own point of view. Compared to Linglong World, it's more like a parallel world. It's very enjoyable to watch. Let me tell you, it's really beautiful.

It's quite good to say that every character is portrayed with flesh and blood, as if you are really reading the novel of Ling Cong. Although the previous writing is relatively depressing, it is quite consistent with the original work.

I give full marks to this Lingcage fan. The descriptions of each character basically fit the original work, and the complexity and contradictions of human nature are equally clear. The protagonist's growth and experience are also very reasonable, and he becomes stronger step by step. Most importantly, very red.

It's so beautiful! The author writes from the perspective of an ordinary person, which makes the reading full of immersion. There are no other unnecessary plug-ins. The description of each character is consistent with the original work. The writing is good, much better than other fan fiction!

This is an article that you will like very much if you like to read it. It is a non-peach story. It is very rigorous and does not cheat. It is as if an ordinary person has traveled through the past. It feels very real. I have read this kind of article that is completely integrated into the world. I am not Ying Jie (from an external website). The protagonists are ordinary mortals. I like it very much. I didn't expect to find this kind of non-peach article in Tomato. It's so cool [shy]. Unfortunately, the setting of the spirit cage has not been fully disclosed yet [crying] Let's put it into a more understandable summary. This is a very original style article. It already has the taste of the original work. What's wrong with the literary youth? This taste is great. Let's take out the knife and continue [punch out]

It's so good to watch. Ever since I read the author's book, I can't read other fanfics.

It's simply the best spirit cage fanfic I've ever seen on Tomato🍅

The characters are clear and clear, the timeline is complete, and it's well written.

The writing style is fluent and the literary quality is extremely rich. I made some secondary creations and filled in holes based on the original work, which allowed me to see another possibility in the world of spirit cages. Highly recommended! It can be seen that the author is very literary and youthful [laughs evilly]

It seems irrelevant at first, and it doesn't feel like reading a cool article. But it gets better and better as you read later. The world view is supplemented and revised very well, and it maintains the standard.

It's very fitting and beautiful. I just don't know if I can write it to the finale, so it's 4 stars. It's finished and it's all 5 stars. Come on.