
Stop Teasing, Captain! The Marksman Can't Take It
别钓了队长,射手hold不住了
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- 1y ago
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Two Strong Leads, Esports, Two Male Leads
No female lead. I’d love something I can read all in one go. Ahhh, help, I really want to read something like this!
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Any Esports BL Where the Main Character Has Depression and Autism?
Boys’ Love Esports Stories, Please Recommend Some. There Seem to Be so Few.
🍅 Tomato’s Four Great Esports Novels!
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Male-Male Romance, Esports! Sweet, Well-Written, Exciting, and with Plenty of Romance
Nothing that's pure esports! There needs to be plenty of romance! Ideally, a fictionalized game similar to Honor of Kings or Game for Peace, or even a direct copy. No full-dive virtual reality! I can't picture those.
Begging for Esports Stories with a Cool, Handsome Male Lead Who's the Best in the Entire Scene
Tomato's Harem Stories All Feel Exactly the Same (Two Male Leads)
Looking for books like I Got Pulled into a Game World, and the Uncle Has a God-Tier Secret Identity. I'm begging you, stop recommending the popular stuff. Bring out the hidden gems you've been saving! I've already read some of those books. The plot absolutely has to be original!!!!! Thanks, thanks!
Any Good Novels with Two Male Leads?
Does anyone know of anything a bit more original?
Please, I'm Out of Books to Read. Any Good Stories with Two Male Leads? Any Genre Is Fine
I'm Out of Books to Read! Please Recommend Some Gems!
I'm looking for books similar to I'm a Nitpicky Streamer, and My Kill Count Is Exploding Across the Internet. Any System, legal, livestreaming novels with a panda on the cover? ☹️ (crying and begging)
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The first novel should be regarded as a practice work. Just write it to your liking, I didn't think about how many people would read it [laughs] The reason I wrote this novel was because of my favorite anchor, Ta Duan! Broadcast! Got it! It was very uncomfortable~ After watching the replays and game videos several times, I decided to use him as a prototype background to write about. Hahaha
The emotional line I wrote is okay. In fact, I think that according to the normal filling principles, it is impossible for Shou to receive an invitation from the attacking team, because what their team needs to strengthen is a shooter, not a jungler or a support. It is obvious that Shou does not meet the team's requirements. In reality, it is more likely to sign youth training players, or directly reinforce strong players, unless they can't find anyone, and the coach is more inclined to sign a passerby (there is a problem with this common hero pool, there are many unique players). This situation is unlikely to happen in the novel. The coach will not bow down to you just because of your excellent awareness of the overall situation. Awareness is awareness, and operation is operation. If you want to catch the eye of a coach, you must at least have outstanding results in the peak game before he can be invited to try out. Moreover, if there is a positional conflict with someone in the first team, even if you are stronger, unless you are particularly outstanding, it is impossible to kick the original starter out of the starting lineup (it is more likely to be rotated). On the one hand, the coach needs to consider the feelings between the original teammates. Someone who suddenly intervenes is likely to be subconsciously rejected by the teammates, which is not conducive to unity. On the other hand, being strong is one thing, but if you don't cooperate well with your teammates, it is in vain. It is better not to change. And the main reason is that the coach should not sit in the audience. They have special front row seats, which seems to be called the bench. The team's substitutes will also sit with the coach and manager.
Super pretty! Especially after the two male protagonists met, I couldn't stop. This is one of the most detailed e-sports articles I've read recently. Not only the male protagonist, but all the characters are so vividly created. I was caught before I finished updating, and I had to rush for an update [face covering] Why do I think the extras are better than the main text [face covering]
Well, it's probably a book review for Lin Song CP I stayed up late tonight to read it. After reading it, I just want to say: Although they are just a pair of co-cos, their story is only 17 chapters long, and although they are he in the end, I just feel very sad and hurt. I feel sorry for their past, and even more sad for the bumpy journey of their relationship. None of them have the courage to say "I like you". Although their love is not as delicate and earth-shattering as the protagonist's, I just feel sorry for them and like them even more. I really hope that the author can make more extra stories about this couple. I really like their stories and settings (๑╹ヮ╹๑) And the point of them torturing me was not to make me cry, but to make me feel pain in my heart.
At the beginning of all stories, we all sincerely believe that everything will happen towards a happy ending. Fortunately, this is indeed the case. Shi Yu recognized his "lover" at the first meeting, Shu Yi fell in love with her after repeated provocations, Shi Chen was gentle and carefree under the skin of the domineering boss, Wan Yue fell in love with her for life at the first meeting, Yoo Jae-in was cunning and full of stories, and Song Rushi was cautious and full of courage. I believe that a long time has passed, but love is eternal!
As expected, the good-looking ones are all unfinished, so I silently clicked to remind them [smile][smile]
The writing is good and the plot flows smoothly, but it's too short. There is very little emotional interaction between the protagonists. I thought the author could write more side stories, but most of them were written about other people [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I've been waiting for so long
It looks good, so I want to ask Shu Yi to replace him. But I want to ask Shao Si Yi? He was suddenly replaced, and that person did not fulfill his wish. Will he be sad? Damn, is this a trap?
You made me stay up so late, oh oh oh [crying] I have to get up early later, but I can't help it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [crying] emmmm What a hasty ending? [Petrochemical][Cover face]
It's pretty cool, but I couldn't tell the names of the people at first and kept getting them mixed up.