I, Bai Qianning, Turned into the Beauty of the Martial Arts School, Am Not Green Tea!

The writing is quite good, there is no ambiguous plot, this kind of male-oriented "green tea novel" can be watched by both men and women, but you have to grasp the feeling carefully. If the plot with Destiny's Child is not well written, it can easily become a female-oriented novel. For example, there is a book whose introduction says that you will not marry, but you are forced to kiss by Destiny's Child [Cool] I think one of the highlights of this type is how to deal with, resolve and escape when facing the danger of exclusive preferential treatment, discrimination or covetation by the opposite sex under the female appearance and male thinking.

It looks good, but I always feel that the author is stepping on the line of changing marriage. Although the author said there is no CP, I am still worried that it will suddenly change the track. I will give it four stars for the time being.

The current version is single, the writing is excellent, there are very few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and zero descriptions of female abortion. To sum it up: the heroine with her own abstract system, in order not to marry a man, constantly strengthens her strength, completes system tasks, avoids plot points, and intercepts the chance of a child of good fortune. The plot is compact and exciting, especially the villains, who are very funny. One of the male protagonists of the Downhill style has sex with women every day, and the male protagonist of the Reborn Villain style does the opposite and directly attacks the mother of the Son of Destiny. I laughed to death. . . Looking forward to the follow-up plot, exciting!

It looks good, the current content is okay, and the author has always emphasized that there is no cp, so I am looking forward to the later content. I can definitely give it five stars for the time being, but I have a small suggestion. I hope the protagonist will develop a little faster.

It's a bit interesting. Although I like to read the kind of stories that involve and interact with the children of destiny, this one is also unique among the transformation stories. Let's take a look. How to say it? There is a feeling of "stopping even an inch", which is half-satisfying. Many plots are obviously fun to write, but they end suddenly, which is... Quite unbearable.

It's okay. There are a few minor irritants in the front, but it looks better in the back. There's no ambiguous plot. The heroine has made it clear to her family and friends that she won't get married, and she has also refused invitations to male and female co-stars. Although there are a few greedy single arrows, the heroine firmly refuses. However, she makes pornographic jokes from time to time. Currently, I have seen the secret realm. The first poisonous point is that the system activates the task of digging holes, and the protagonist actively signs up for the draft (he wants to quit but finds that he is unable to quit because of the royal family, which can be regarded as the pressure to become stronger in the early stage). The second poisonous point is that the criminal protagonist of Destiny's Child is afraid of being retaliated and chooses to turn the fight into friendship and take the initiative to forgive and continue to give scenes in the future (this Destiny's Child is portrayed as a positive character, but his early appearance is still a small poisonous point). The third poisonous point is that there is a plot similar to copying. The protagonist keeps emphasizing the original author, but because there is no original author in this world and there is controversy on the Internet in this world, singing the song of this world at the beginning will not be like this kind of plot. It is purely intentional. It is to pave the way for a college interview plot later, but even if the protagonist is strong The other party still felt that it was the original work of the protagonist, and identified it as a copy of the plot. Because I have been enjoying the fame and fortune brought by copying, I read a little more and found that this plot is related to a certain foreshadowing, but it still cannot change the fame and fortune that the protagonist got from this. In this world, the default copyright belongs to the protagonist, and it is purely a copy. Let's see if there is any copy of the story later. At present, there is no copy plot anymore in the secret realm. I personally assume it does not exist after reading it.

I feel that the rating of this book is really low. The writing is really good. I can feel that the author probably wants to write something more in-depth. It is also right that the author writes about daily life to pave the way for the subsequent chapters. But I feel that maybe the rhythm is not grasped well? (Causing some controversy) Now I read about the protagonist's duel with Qin Lang and it feels pretty good [I learned]

I haven't officially read the transformation story about a man reincarnating into a beautiful woman. I've only read a little bit about it in quick travel stories. So this male story (probably) feels quite special. I didn't know how to evaluate it after reading it for a while. Netizens will have to read it for themselves. [Cover face]

Now I prefer serious stories based on the butter world view, but this kind of text tests the author's ability more. However, if the core line of being single can be implemented all the time, there will basically be no big plot holes.

The writing is very good. The author can take a look at the two transformation novels written by the author, Spicy Hot Dry Noodles and Don He, who wants to be quiet. Hot Dry Noodles is a single genre, and Don He is a hundred-changing genre. The author can learn from them. I believe he can surpass them in the later period. My personal suggestion is to weaken the system a little bit.

It's good-looking, I just like this kind of succubus protagonist who doesn't let men touch her. . .

It's pretty good. A man wears a woman's clothes. In order to avoid getting punched, a battle of wits and courage

Very good The writing style, the smoothness of the plot, and the novelty of the icing on the cake are among the few I've seen since joining Tomato, especially the logical chain is smooth and there are no obvious bugs. Unconventional, it captures the excitement of transformation very well - the benefits from beauty are combined with the pleasure of improving one's own strength. At the starting point, I might have only given it four stars, but this is on Tomato, which is enough for me to give it a five-star rating. Good grass, worth seeing

Sex is the spice of this book, while fun and combat are the core of the book.

A very good book, non-toxic, a powerful and independent text, and at the end of each chapter, beautiful pictures of the protagonist are leaked

I gave it five stars. I hope the author doesn't go to the palace.

Liu Beiwen must be the one to look at this good book.

It's hard to comment on Shennong below. He started giving bad reviews without saying anything about it [what] Currently there is no ambiguity, the heroine is alone and beautiful Gao Wuwen The male protagonists of the original novels are quite interesting, with all kinds of sexy tricks [laughing] Overall review: It's worth watching, but two updates a day is too few [shy][shy]

It's interesting [laughs evilly] Let's take a look!

There are more than five characters here

Who is the picture at the end of each chapter? Is Shao Shen Yun [laughing evilly]

I finally quit, but I didn't expect that I would end up with the author [angry]

At the moment, I think it's okay [laughs evilly] It depends on what the author writes next.

It's okay, but it's a bit more everyday.

The author should have written before, and the writing is relatively smooth. But I'm not happy. What's the point of not getting it?

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I thought it wasn't great at first, but I didn't expect it to be pretty good. Come on

It's wonderful, the plot is top-notch, and the description of the architecture is like the scene of the development of ancient Chinese architecture into modern times, which makes me yearn for it [Like]

It's pretty good-looking, more about daily life. It's not the kind of cool novel, but it's not aggrieved either. In my opinion, it's just right. It's quite strong and has a lot of growth experience. Some cool novels are a bit too embarrassing.

Not bad, I wrote about many interesting characters, such as Director Qi, and later on, the king understands. This paragraph made me laugh.

Looks good, nothing much to say