A Campus Belle Stalks Me from the Start, Claiming I'm a Catastrophe-Class Threat

Oh, isn't this Brother Tieqi? It's been so long since we last saw each other, so we're so embarrassed 😏

Fine. Except for the Sword Immortal part which is quite abrupt. The other parts are all written and changed. I can't say it's too prominent, but there's nothing bad about it that makes it easy to read. This is relatively rare in this day and age. No, what about the new skills after reaching level 70? Did you say that high-level people will get new skills? Why is it gone?

Capturing the screen frequently looking forward to the new chapter, Waiting for updates every moment. Late at night, I feel half-conscious, I am anxious before the new chapter comes out. Work hard to create, Click to refresh a thousand times. Waiting for the plot to unfold, The new plot is expected to appear soon. Unconsciously, after chasing, I am still in high spirits. It's interesting but too short. After reading this, I'm still thinking about the follow-up. Ah, I wonder when I can see it again.

It's quite good. The ratio of emotional scenes and upgraded pretense is pretty good. As for the meat, it's a bit late, but it's okay. There are a bit few female protagonists, but if you include Sword Fairy and her 7 clones, there will be more. I hope the author will not engage in the kind of operation of merging the clones into the main body. After all, 7 clones feel like 7 female protagonists [laughter] The controversial point is that there are too many Lily scenes. Although there is no direct wing-knotting behavior, the narration has a lot of side descriptions. It depends on personal preference.

The release of reading missions is a bit like a simulator novel, but every time it is extremely concise, unlike those novels where dozens of chapters are written at a time and tragedy occurs again and again, which makes reading boring. Every time a task is released, a few lines of text will be used to tell a short story that can be imagined by the readers. I like this very much. Although I have only read forty chapters, I am still willing to give it a good review. The shortcoming I discovered for the time being is that I was very confused in the early stage. Each time the system released a small task, it told a short story. At first, I couldn't understand what it was doing, what the task meant, what this camp was, etc. But it was easy to understand after looking at it. I haven't seen any poisonous points yet.

I don't understand why a novel with such a bland description has such a low rating? It doesn't seem to be brainless, it's quite realistic, and the plot is pretty good. And I feel very immersive when listening to the novel. (Personal opinion)

It's okay, but it's too slow in terms of relationships, and there are always only a few signs. When there is progress, will I give five stars?

The three free gifts are gone, so I can only give this one [laughing]

The novel combines elements such as time travel, systems, and spiritual energy recovery. The protagonist Shen Pan awakens to the system after traveling through time, while the school beauty Jiang Ruolai awakens to the wish diary system. The two intersect due to system tasks, and from the perspective of the system, each other has a different identity than the surface. This dual system and identity dislocation setting adds a lot of suspense and interest to the story.

The writing is very good without stressing the battle or holding back. It is a very standard and enjoyable article. However, the author's update time is inconsistent. It takes several days to update a chapter, resulting in a low rating.